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  1. Aura Goddess

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    This is something I’ll probably write as a story later next month. But f course the characters are going to be different. I came up with this when I was watching an AMV with the song Disturbia.

    Story
    A rebellious princess named Aria. She disapproves of everything her father does. Her father has caused much grief and poverty in their kingdom, but he doesn’t care. Aria’s father has been recruiting civilians to join his army so that they can take over other cities that aren’t in the kingdom. Aria has had enough of what her father has been doing and decided to fight back. Now, she always out in the city where her castle is located in, and protecting the civilians. She hates her father so she doesn’t care if he disapproves of what she’s doing or not. Aria’s father has ordered his soldiers that if they see Aria protecting or anything rebellious towards him, to not hesitate and kill Aria. Aria has two trustworthy friends that has been helping her out. One of them is one of her fathers soldiers, the other is just one of her childhood friends. Now all three of them are working together to destroy everything Aria’s father has caused. Aria is now kind of know as the heroine of the entire kingdom. There are people in the city and kingdom that approve of what Aria is doing, and a few soldiers too. But there are other civilians and soldiers that agree more with Aria’s father.

    Setting
    Okay, the setting is pretty much a high-tech city. The entire kingdom is called Baltra. But the one city where its going to take place is called Florence. Florence is an actual city, just saying. Since the city is high-tech, that means the technology is pretty advance and such.

    Rules
    1. No godmodding! Please!
    2. No controlling other’s characters
    3. Keep romance PG-13. Kissing and hugging is fine but nothing else.
    4. Don't kill others characters without their permission.
    5. You can only have up to 4 characters.
    6. Please keep bad language to a minimum. I don’t want this RP flooded with cursing. If you must curse, censor it. I’m okay with hell, damn, crap and any other words that aren’t that bad.
    7. Actually describe what you’re doing. I don’t care if the post comes out long, just describe what your character is doing.
    8. Try your best to use correct spelling please. Meaning no text talk, please. If you have trouble spelling, use Word Perfect or something that will show you how to spell a word correctly.
    9. If you’re going to use a picture for the appearance for your character, please use a link.
    10. Put Disturbia somewhere in your first post so I know you read the rules.
    11. Most importantly, have fun you guys! 8D

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    Username: VaKh87
    Name: Aria Hokkaido
    Gender: Female
    Age: 21
    Personality: Aria is a very carefree person. She tries her best to live life to the fullest. But when the situation in the city grew worse, Aria’s personality began to change to a more serious and confident type. She doesn’t really like to show her soft side but she tends to show it to people sometimes, by accident. She doesn't like it when people are too formal with her. Aria doesn't like being called "Princess" or "Your Highness."
    Bio: Aria is the princess of Baltra. And her father is the ruler. When she was a child, her mother became terribly ill. Aria stayed by her mother’s side everyday. But as her mother became worse each day, Aria began to notice a change in her father. She then finally saw that her father was changing the kingdom and taking over other cities that aren’t in Baltra. Aria hated it all. When her mother became ill, Aria started to teach herself how to fight. When her mother passed away, Aria was already a skilled fighter. She then began to hate her father but she thought it was all in her head. But one day when she found out her father had killed the ruler of a city, Aria started to despise her father. Aria then thought of the idea to fight against everything her father has done. Her fighting skills are remarkable. Other armies of other cities have asked her to join them but she refuses, knowing if she leaves, her father will take advantage of that and take complete control. She protects the city along side two of her trustworthy friends.
    Appearance: Light brown hair and blue eyes. The length of her hair is a lot like Kairi’s but a little longer. She has side bangs to the right, which tend to cover her eyes sometimes. She wears a short brown skirt that’s above her knees, brown boots, a brown turtle neck no sleeves shirt, wears a red cape and wears a jacket over it no sleeves. On her left leg, she carries a case for a handgun. The straps go around her waist and her leg.
    Powers: Gravity. When she controls her power, blue energy surrounds her. Aria can even use gravity sometimes as a platform.
    Weapon: Gunblade and a small handgun. She also carries small grenades. When Aria uses them, anyone or anything that is near her will become paralyzed.
    Other: None

    Username: VaKh87
    Name: Matsuyo Tanaka
    Gender: Female
    Age: 21
    Personality: Matsuyo is very optimistic. She always tries to find the bright side of everything. But Matsuyo isn’t quite a smart one. She thinks ahead of things and always ends up getting injured quicker than the others. But her ability of fighting a lot like Aria’s but Aria is still stronger than her.
    Bio: She moved to Florence after her hometown was destroyed. She met Aria shortly after arriving there. Matsuyo witnessed her parents’ murder. When she found out it was Aria’s father fault, she wanted to confront Aria’s father. When Aria told her everything that she was going to rebel against him, Matsuyo knew that would her chance to get revenge on her parents’ death. Now she works together with Aria and another friend to bring Aria's father down.
    Appearance: http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f303/ChristaCat12/Anime pics/Ninjas Warriors/ninja-6.jpg
    Powers: None
    Weapon: A sword
    Other: None

    Username: VaKh87
    Name: Hilario Hokkaido
    Gender: Male
    Age: 49
    Personality: At first his personality was very caring. But when his wife became ill, he began to change. His personality started to change into more evil and heartless.
    Bio: The king of Baltra. Lately he’s been recruiting civilians from Florence. He’s been doing so in order for his army to grow and become more powerful. And he’s been taking over small towns or cities in order to make his kingdom grow. But now his own daughter is fighting against him. Since she started rebelling against him, Hilario started hating Aria. But he doesn’t let her get in the way of his plans. He continues to take over towns and cities.
    Appearance: Wear a grey armor and a black cape. Carries a sword on his hip. He has black hair and dark brown eyes.
    Powers: Can control the earth(meaning ground and stuff)
    Weapon: A sword
    Other: None

    Name: Angel Crimson
    Gender: male
    Age: 23
    Personallity: He has a dark personality yet is very nice...at times.
    Bio: He's a traveler without much of a past. He's also a descendant of a long line of powerful kings.
    Appearance: I'll be VERY descriptive on my first post. I want to explain...
    Powers: He can cancel out other powers and temporarily stop people from using theirs.
    Weapon: Curved sword
    Other: He always seems to know what to do.

    Username: Fayt-Harkwind
    Name: Belius Kuros
    Gender: male
    Age: 19
    Personality: calm and always wearing a smuge smile
    Bio: He is a high class assassin, he will take any job for the right price or even if he wants to do it. He was born in a town called Disturbia.
    Appearance: http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/6826/vectormukuroombrenoirfp9.png
    Powers: mastery of illusions
    Weapon: a spear specialy made for him.
    Other: his right eye is the source of his power.

    Name: Ota
    Gender: male
    Age: 25
    Personality: The all around nice guy. He hates to fight, and tries to be the pacifist in all situations unless he needs to resort to using force. He is anything but a coward, but he does whatever he can do assist others. He never tells of his own problems, though he always listens to others problems. He is always formal, being brought up in a family of those who are royal to the king. He can be very simple minded at times to though, usually treating some things as a game
    Bio: His family is that of amongst some of the kings most loyal servants. He himself serves as the kings delivery boy, merely completing tasks and such, though the king knows of his superb fighting abilities, due to certain parts of his past which shall remain unknown. Due to his position, he really has no idea of just what has been going on, and so he does not know of the princess being the enemy, so it is not as if he thinks of her as an enemy. (not that he has ever met her though)
    Appearance: http://i438.photobucket.com/albums/qq110/grace_01_01/g.jpg
    Powers: This is a very unique power. Unlike most, where it requires excerting force, this one generates within him, giving him extreme reflexes, much greater strength then normal humans, and has increased senses, giving him more animal like abilities. One might even say that it makes him the perfect hunter. This comes as a natural ability, merely making it more of a 'super human ability' then a power, which he was born with due to reasons unknown.
    Weapon: A special gauntlet that he wears which contains a jewel which has special properties, which, whenever used, creates a sonic vibration so strong that it causes anything ( with some exceptions) to stop in its tracks if it comes close to him. This can also be used to send people close by flying (given by the king himself)
    Other: unknown past, but obviously is no normal human. (more will be explained as everything occurs)

    Username: Entity
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    "M" or M.E.T.R.O
    Gender: Male
    Age: 33
    Personality: Knight-like, Soldier-like, and Calm, always holding his own in battle.
    Bio: M, a knight of Aria, a man of honor. He believes that there is only one purpose for him, to protect his princess. Or so, his known sister. He found out about this when he checked the Foundries of History in the castle. When he did, he left to find Aria. He wasn't going to, but he needed to see her. When he did, he saw her fighting, a power she held, like his own. When he was like this, he developed the skill of Ice, He was hence forth, known as, M - The Ice Monarch, captain of the Baltra Knights.
    Appearance:
    "M" or M.E.T.R.O
    Powers: Ice. When in control, he can give new life to anyone, or rather, on the brink of death, give anyone their spirit back. But the trouble is, he can only do this with water in their system, and only if they are drowned by said water. He can also use this power of ice to create pillars of ice, that can transform from water in the ground into spikes, shards, even a sword of his will.
    Weapon: His blade of ice. (check pic for details of his blade.)
    Other: N/A
     
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    I'll be lazy srry. Disturbia.

    Name: Angel Crimson
    Gender: male
    Age: 23
    Personallity: He has a dark personality yet is very nice...at times.
    Bio: He's a traveler without much of a past. He's also a descendant of a long line of powerful kings.
    Appearance: I'll be VERY descriptive on my first post. I want to explain...
    Powers: He can cancel out other powers and temporarily stop people from using theirs.
    Weapon: Curved sword
    Other: He always seems to know what to do.
     
  3. Aura Goddess

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    You're in 8D
     
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    Name: Belius Kuros
    Gender: male
    Age: 19
    Personality: calm and always wearing a smuge smile
    Bio: He is a high class assassin, he will take any job for the right price or even if he wants to do it. He was born in a town called Disturbia.
    Appearance: http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/6826/vectormukuroombrenoirfp9.png
    Powers: mastery of illusions
    Weapon: a spear specialy made for him.
    Other: his right eye is the source of his power.
     
  5. Aura Goddess

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    You're in Fayt.

    I've updated a few things on Aria.I was in a hurry yesterday and I forgot a few things.

    Also we can start if you guys want.Others will join later.
     
  6. Fayt-Harkwind Where yo curly mustache at?

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    OOC: Ok

    BIC: Belius sat in the corner of a small time inn, his legs where crossed and the frightening smile he always wears was showing a little too much. He kept his spear close to him always as someone like him was obviously in someones Bingo Book. I should probibly advertise my services, he joked to himself in his mind.
     
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    Matsuyo and Aria were together on top of a tall building.Matsuyo was on the edge of the building and was looking down at a group of people through some binoculars.Below were a few soldiers,attempting to recruit a young man. "Yup,there's another." Matsuyo raised her head and looked behind her. She grinned and looked through the binoculars again. "Ready?" Before Matsuyo knew it,she saw Aria jump off the building and heading down.Matsuyo stood up and looked down. "Man,you're always the one having fun." she joked.

    Aria had her body straight as she went down.She took out her gunblade and pointed it at the soldiers.The soldiers looked up and saw Aria.They pointed their guns at her. Aria rolled her eyes and took out one of her grenades.Aria threw it at the group of soldiers.They all stood still,attempting the move.Aria landed in the middle and swung her gunblade at all of the guns.She kicked a few soldiers against the wall.Aria looked around,seeing that the soldiers are unconscious.She sheathed her gunblade and looked at the man. "You're safe now." she told him.
     
  8. Fayt-Harkwind Where yo curly mustache at?

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    Belius heard a noise outside, Sounds like someones taking all the work, he thought as he stood up and headed outside still smiling but with a little more interest reflected from his face. He saw a girl with a gunblade take down a few soldiers, "Interesting", he said.
     
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    Matsuyo jumped down once Aria was done. "Nicely done." she said.She looked at each of the soldiers,making sure they wouldn't try anything.Matsuyo smiled and walked over to Aria. "So what now?"

    Aria looked around. "What else?" she asked. Aria watched the young man leave.She let out a small sigh and started walking away. "Lets check on the rest of the city."

    Matsuyo nodded and started following Aria.She looked around and saw someone that seemed like he saw everything Aria just did. Who's that? Matsuyo wondered.She looked ahead seeing that Aria was leaving her.Matsuyo looked back at the man and started walking faster to keep up with Aria.
     
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    When the man appeared Belius kept his eyes keen although only his left could be seen as his right was covered by hair. He timed his illusions as the man who was following the girl kept looking at Belius, and when he saw the chance Belius made himself seemingly disappear.
     
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    Aria took out her phone and looked at the screen.She took a deep breath and put her phone away.Aria stopped walking and looked up.She took another deep breath and jumped onto the rooftop of a building.Matsuyo looked up in surprised and jumped onto the rooftop as well.Aria knelt down and looked over the edge.She narrowed her eyes,seeing soldiers walking by.

    "Your father must have sent more,huh?" Matsuyo asked.
     
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    Belius moved on, he passed a group of soldiers his face not changing as he didn't even acknowledge them by looking at them. I have no time if i'm not getting paid or interested.
     
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    Aria turned her head and slowly stood up.She jumped off the rooftop,with Matsuyo following behind.Both of them landed in an alley.Aria had her back against the wall and peaked her head out,making sure the cost was clear.Aria turned around and left the alley. "Matsuyo,lets split up." Before Aria can even give Matsuyo the reason why,Aria jumped onto a different rooftop and headed to a different direction.

    Matsuyo put her hands on her hips and shook her head. "She really has changed." Matsuyo turned around and went to her own direction.
     
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    His dark brown hair slicked back against the wind as he sped through the streets, nearly crashing into several civilians. He avoided them with ease as his brown eyes scanned the area ahead of him, constantly keeping watch on all the possible routes he could take. I hate being chased for stealing. He thought to himself, jumping over a cart holding merchandise of some sort...he didn't pay much attention. Up ahead he noticed a stack of boxes leaning against the side of a building reminding him of a staircase. He took his chance and swiftly stepped up onto each one to reach the roof, never losing his momentum.
    He glanced down at the ruby in his hand, his new prize, and let his eyes hover over the elegantly designed blade strapped to his side. He loved admiring certain things. Without noticing, he almost ran right into a girl who had just gotten ontop of the rooftop he was currently on. He skidded to a stop, trying not to hit her. A simple question that he new she would probably ask him was, "Who are you?"...His answer would simply be, "I'm Angel."

    OOC: Eh...><
     
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    Aria turned around to see a boy.She looked over the rooftop to see a few soldiers pass by.Aria looked back at the boy and then looked down at his hand.She raised one eyebrow and turned her back on him.Aria took a few steps away from him. "Having fun?"
     
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    Angel nodded and quickly stuffed the ruby in his pocket so the girl wouldn't see it. "You could say that." He replied quickly, jumping up a bit and preparing to make a run for it. "I've gotta keep moving..." Angel's eyes shifted towards the soldiers who were stupidly looking around in the wrong places. He took a step forward, getting ready to jump to another roof.
     
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    Aria closed her eyes and sighed.She quickly opened her eyes when she started hearing gunfire. She looked around but they weren't shooting at her or the boy.Aria took out her gunblade and looked over the roof. When the gunfire stopped,Aria turned her head to see a group of soldiers,attempting to grabbed another person. Aria frowned and started running to the direction.
     
  18. Fayt-Harkwind Where yo curly mustache at?

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    Belius walked over to the soldiers, he was unnoticed by them but others could clearly see him. He grabbed the gun of one of the soldiers and seemingly appeared to them as the gun was melted in Belius' hand, "Hmm so your obviously a drone", he commented, his voice was calm and rythmic as he wore his creepy smile.
     
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    Aria stopped running and looked back at Angel.She looked down at the group of soldiers and turned around.She was walking back to Angel. "Why were those soldiers chasing you?" she asked him.

    OOC: *couldn't think of anything else* >.<
     
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    Within moments the soldiers fell to the ground unconcious, "That was an interesting warm up", Belius smirked and rested his spear to the ground and lent on it, "But now i'm bored".
     
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