The rain of sorrow

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  1. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    As the rain of sorrow falls into my heart
    I feel like I can not go on
    All happiness and joy washed away from me
    “Will I ever feel them again?†I ask my self
    Forgetting that even though good things come to an end
    Bad things come to an end as well
    So the rain of sorrow will never fall forever.
     
  2. Ratchet Bah weep graaagnah wheep ni ni bong!

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    I think that was very sad and beautiful. An excellent poem.
     
  3. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Thank sis, you know the funny thing is, I'm not even sad I'm really happy even when I wrote this poem, I was happy
     
  4. Mr. Van Whippy ♥ Biscuits and cookies

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    You just did again. A very sad part of my life. But a really good poem.
    P.s. Did you changed your name?
     
  5. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Gald you like it, and yea I did change my name, well I asked Arc to
     
  6. Axel Chaser

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    Looks good. Not your best but of the best. First part is best.
    And why did u change ur name?
     
  7. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    I felt like added Lexa on to my name heh, gald you like the poem