walk away

This was the day
I would lay down in the hay
and,sleep all day
but then i got awoken
by a boom thought i was confused
I lost site of the night
only thing left to do was fight

[chorus]
Iv'e been trying to get out
but the pain dosen't let out
i've been trying to fight
with all my might.
don't let the pain get to my mind
I want this to end tonight.
[chorus]

This day dosen't look good
The hood stands no more
looks like a whole lotta pain
but i stood my gaurd
the things that are bizzare
i let them fly away
i want this day to end

[chorus]
Iv'e been trying to get out
but the pain dosen't let out
i've been trying to fight
with all my might.
don't let the pain get to my mind
I want this to end tonight.
[chorus]

This was the day
i let the pain go away
let it fly like a plane
soaring high
in the sky
the world looks great
such a better place
then i lye down in the hay
and let it start over again.

It's not my best work i mean i made it in like 2 min

over all i give it a 8.7/10

The genere is rock

 

That's really good. 9.6/10

 

Thank you :) :) :)

 

No, just no... >.>;

Great chorus, sounds like a simple plan song =p

 

The hay part is because he lives in a farm!!!!!!! think before you do stuff the hay should've explained all and this is like the first song i ever created.

EDIT:read the rest of the first part cause he got awoken by a sonic boom.