Have some words hot off the keyboard to send off? Got some sick nasty lyrics ready to be a hot pick? Want to give some lonely soul some SoKai fluff (i would love you forever)? Look no further! In this thread, you may post a link to a story/poem/etc that you wish for someone to comment on! You can post as many links as you'd like, however, please wait at least one week before reposting a work/bumping with a previous post of yours! Members are busy and likely might not be able to get to commenting right away, so please have patience. Furthermore, if you take some comments, give some! We all want some critique, so keep in mind others want some just as much as you!
Well, there is that story I mentioned in the member listings: http://kh-vids.net/threads/reality-theory.137782/ Like I said, I am stuck on a detail in chapter 3. Furthermore, All that I have is just some beginning stuff that doesn't really go into what's going on it's entirety at the moment, there are probably many theories about what I could do with it, (It would seem predictable to me if I didn't know that I was going in a different direction than I myself would guess when I read it.) but I would like to see what you guys think of my concept so far, if nothing else.
I try to keep my works in progress very limited or else I drop a project and never pick it back up. On kh-vids alone, I have two works-in-progress, which I will include links to. In fact, the titles and banners for both (As of August 20th, 2013-?) can be found in my Avatar. There is one finished work of mine; also on the site. Based Forward This is my first story back with kh-vids. It is inspired by Krowley's "KHSOS" roleplay and features my own character Base before he joins in on the events depicted in the roleplay itself. Interesting to note: this story of mine inspired some of the other users participating in KHSOS to write backstories for their own characters. To date, Steel and Luna have added their backstories to the Writer's Nook. This story follows a young man born in a city atmosphere as he becomes the apprentice of Yen Sid, goes on missions to worlds that I won't even hint at yet, but I will give a full description later on or if asked. For this story as well as others, I write it as though the reader will have no idea what the world looks like nor how the characters that are from the source material act. I am descriptive in what most take for granted thinking the reader will know anyway. If you like Kingdom Hearts, magic, music, and epics, then I would like to hear your feedback on "Based Forward". I had a recording on audio of me reading the chapters aloud, but YouTube deleted them for some reason; I plan to redo these audio recordings with some tweaking to ensure the same mistake does not occur again. Burns A Pokemon story that takes place decades before Red and Blue set off on their adventures. To give an idea, Professor Oak is in his early thirties and Kanto is a bit different. It takes place entirely in the Kanto region, with special focus on the Cinnabar islands. It follows the story of a young man named Caesar Cyprus as he is sent to Cinnabar island as one of young Professor Oak's aides. This story is a blend of the games from Generations I and III as well as elements of the Anime; more so leaning towards the physics of the games. It delves deep into Pokemon philosophy and it will go on to make readers cry as well as laugh (I hope). Play Ball!: A Day in the 100 Acre Woods This is a completed story. It's based off of two things: 1.) The tediously challenging "Pooh's Baseball Derby" online game. 2.) This game's inclusion in the aforementioned "KHSOS" roleplay. It takes place in the 100 Acre Woods, obviously, just before the game starts. I designed the story so an older, more advanced reader could read it to entertain a younger child. Not that I dislike children's stories that are formulated to the reading levels of younger readers, but I really do love the more classic approach of the older "Winnie the Pooh" stories and other such bedtime stories as "Alice in Wonderland" that an adult would have no trouble reading, and a child (both in shape and at heart) would have difficulty imagining when read to. As suggested, some of the words in the story are somewhat verbose, but I find this really helps in extending the vocabulary of the listeners; and occasionally the reader as well. If coaxed, I will continue this story; but if not, it will remain as is until "Based Forward" and/or Burns" are/is complete.
