Listen to me when i say.It who you are.It who you be. Are you listening. Just listen to what I'm saying.A long as you've got friends and failmy.You'll be fine till' the end of time. You are love.Listen when I say.You are love. Remember you are love.Listen when I say you have family.Listen when I say you are welcome.. HomeIt who you are.What ever you do you can come home.Where you'll be love'd.Where you can see your family. This is a short song it not done yet.If i did't spell something right just tell me and i'll fix it:type:. Hope you like:rockband: lol
Okay, so...here's some grammar and spelling fixes. The red color indicates what's been fixed. You can compare it to what you have to fix and understand where the mistakes are. Also, you may want to use a more default structure for a song. Since that makes it easier to read when singing, or when following the chorus, like so: I like being silly, for silly I am. And no one can deny that it's me who silly is. Chorus: Silly, yeahhh. but not a frisbee, yeahh. Silly, yeahh. But not a frisbee. See? I can follow a defined flow. Because my eyes can easily go over to the next part. Keep it up, kid.
