You Capture Me

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  1. Near-to-Tears Hollow Bastion Committee

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    You amaze me with your body, your heart and immortal soul.
    Your beauty so unwilting like the richest of silk flowers
    Your Hair as Dark as Deepest Night
    Your Eyes as Bright as Furthermost Stars
    Your Complexion as Pale as Purest Snow
    Your Skin as Soft as Smoothest Silk
    Your Scent as Sweet as Crushed Rose Petals
    Your Taste as Divine as Freshest Fruit
    Yet it's Your Blood as Red as the Haunted Sunset that wholey captures me.


    My first 'recent' attempt at poetry, I haven't written any poetry in ages since I was 11 or something. I don't think I'm any good in all honesty. I'd just like to see what you guys think of it before I start my Anthology in Year 11 seeing as the chances are I'll have to write something during that time ><
     
  2. sinister King's Apprentice

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    it sounds vvery pretty miss!
    are you planning on writing to anyone?
     
  3. Tora-chan Traverse Town Homebody

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    Lovely. Very nice descriptions. ;) Good job