You'll Be There

When I feel sorrow
You're always there to
cheer me up.

When I feel joy
You're always there
Laughing with me.

When I feel anger
You're always there
making me feel better.

When I feel lonely
You're always there
so I know I'm not alone.

When I feel depression
You're always there
holding my hand.

Through every problem
and every feeling
I know that you'll be there
to make it better.

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This is just a little something I decided to write... I have been going through some emotional problems for reasons I haven't figured out... but my friends are always there to help me through it... so I wrote this poem dedicated to them... you guys rock! :D
(and this is my first poem so i hope you like it! ^.^)

 

YAY!!!!!!!!! :glomp: hehehehe YOU ROCK TOO :D

 

:D hehehe... :glomp: so you liked it then?

 

Very rocky rhythm, but I like it nonetheless. =D

 

Thanks! it is a free verse... so it isn't really suppossed to have rhythm... :p

 

Awesome job! :) Am I one of your friends you're dedicating this to...?

 

*nods* yep! you always told me that you'd be there for me and i could come to you with any problem... and when i did, you always managed to cheer me up or help me through it... :glomp: thanks! :P

 

Yeah, but rhythm poems aren't bad either.

 

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im hoping cause i always hang out with you at school and just hanging out, that youre talking about me too......

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true... but i suck at rhytm... >.<

:glomp: of course i am! XD XD

 

*:glomp: DestinyStar* Aww, thanks so much honey...you know I'm always there for you! And don't worry, rhythm can be hard, but any sort of poem is always beautiful. :)

 

yesh! *triumphant pose* 10 points!

 

Thanks for being there, guys!

and now i wrote a Christmas poem... O.o

 

Ooh, can you post it? I'd like to read it. :)

 

http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=36291

here it is!

i have the urge to write another poem tonight... but it will be sad... because it is about how my sis left for Mexico today...

 

Oh...you must miss her...well, write away. :) It'll help to pour out your feelings...and don't worry, you can always talk to your sister over the phone/internet, and she'll come back eventually...*hugs* Don't worry...

And I commented on the poem by the way. :)

 

Very nice Destiny.....pretty good length....good atmosphere......I hope to see more....

 

thanks! u guys rock! XD XD

and my sis is coming back at the end of the weekend... she's just gonna help out a bit with the hurricane damages... but nothing feels the same without her...

http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?p=1216842#post1216842

i suggest you don't read this poem if you don't like sad stuff...