A new story I'm planning on writing

Ok I'm sure several of you know my current story I'm writing,My own story but you included.I know its been a while since the next part but its because of school and what not.I'll just go head and explain the story I will be writing soon:

The story I will be writing about is basically like the story of Sora.But its going to have different characters.Its pretty much after Kingdom Heart II, a year later.Its about a group of three friends that are living a ordinary life.The names of the characters are Alex a 16 year old boy that is very adventurous and goes to a private school.Kaori a 16 year old girl that is very kind and generous and goes to a private school.And last but not least Chris a 17 year old teenager that is very popular at the private school he goes to with his two friends.Kaori and Chris end up dating a year ago.But their relationship didn't interfear with their friendship with Alex.Eventually Alex begins to have feeling for Kaori but doesn't tell her.During all of this Alex is having dreams about Sora.Like the adventures of Sora(pretty much the way Roxas did in the second game).Alex tells Kaori and Chris but they don't believe him.Eventually secrets begin to come out.Alex and Chris find out something about Kaori they never knew.

The rest will go on once I write the story.I just hope it doesn't take me too long.Well I hope the brief explaination caught your intresets.

 

hmm... sounds cool

 

This story sounds very interesting to read.:)

 

Prologue

As Alex, Chris and Kaori sat at the shore talking, they noticed it was getting late.
“What time is it?†asked Alex yawning.
“Its going to be 9:30pm.†responded Chris.
“We better get home.†said Kaori getting up.
The boys nodded and got up. They began to walk but they noticed Kaori was looking up.
“Kaori, are you ok?†asked Alex.
“Look.†said the brown haired girl pointing at the sky.
As the boys looked up, they couldn’t believe their eyes.
“Shooting stars!†said Alex surprised.
“We’ve never had shooting stars before.†said Chris.
As Kaori and Alex were looking up in amazement, something was going through Chris’ mind.
“Should I ask her now?†thought Chris. “Yes. Now’s the perfect time.â€
“Um....Kaori can I ask.....you something.†asked Chris.
“Yeah, go head.†said Kaori.
“Um...I was wondering....if you’d like to....uh......um......go out....with me. You know as my.....girlfriend.†said Chris nervous.
Kaori was surprised and didn’t know what to say. She then just smiled and said, “Ok.â€
Chris just smiled back. Alex was standing with his hands in his pockets. He didn’t know if he was happy or a bit sad. He looked up seeing the shooting stars.
“I wish this doesn’t interfere with our friendship and I wish I can go on an adventure.†said Alex quietly to himself.
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Well there you go the first part of my story.Hope you guys like it so far.

 

Omg! Awesome!

 

That was really good! I felt kinda bad for Alex thought, but as always from here it was good:) I'm looking forward to what your going to put in next.

 

It was really good! But kinda sudden.... mabey you could slow it down a tad bit. Im not saying I dont like your story, I love it so far but its going kinda fast....

 

Awesome! I'll post mah off-line story if u post more!

 

I'm working on it I just have the other story I need to post so I'm like taking turns on writing.

 

I hear ya VaKh87

 

Ok it took me a while but I finally got it.Oh and I thought of a title.


Kingdom Heart: Chosen Wielder Number 14


Chapter 1-The First Day

One Year Later​

“I’ve been having these weird thoughts lately....like, is any of this for real...or not?”
“You are the one who will open the door.”
“You do not yet know what lies beyond the door.”
“What was that place? So bizarre...”
“If there are any other worlds out there, why did we end up on this one?”
“I’ve come to see the door to this world.”
“This world has been connected.”
“Tied to the darkness...soon to bee completely eclipsed.”
“There is so very much to learn.”
“You understand so little.”
“One who knows nothing can understand nothing.”
“The door has opened...”
“What?”​

Alex awoke from his dream. For two weeks, he’s been having dreams about Sora and his journey.
“Another dream about him.” said Alex.
Alex then looked at his clock and saw it was 8:00am.
“Oh no, I’m late!” said Alex.
Alex quickly got up and got dressed. He then ran out the door heading to school. By the time Alex got to his school, he was late for his history class. The class was reading a passage from their books that the teacher wanted them to read. The door slammed open. Everybody lifted their heads to see who it was. The teacher stood up from her chair angry.
“I’m sorry I’m late Mrs. Johnson.” said Alex out of breath.
“Do you have another ridiculous excuse or do you want to go to your seat?” asked Mrs. Johnson in an angry voice.
“I just over slept....sorry.” replied Alex walking to his seat.
While Alex was walking to his seat, he could hear giggling from some students that were laughing at Alex. Kaori was in his class, and she was disappointed to see Alex late again.
The bell rang for lunch and Alex and Kaori went to go find a seat for them and Chris. Chris wasn’t with them yet, and Alex was just starring at his food. Something was going through his head. Kaori looked at Alex with a worried face.
“Alex, are you ok?” she asked.
“Huh?” said Alex.
“Are you ok?” asked Kaori again.
Before Alex could respond, Chris finally came.
“Hey.” said Chris.
He sat down next to Kaori and kissed her on her head. Alex looked down at his food.
“So Alex, you were late again weren’t you?” said Chris.
“Yeah I was.” responded Alex.
“Why? What is going on with you lately?” asked Chris.
“You guys won’t believe me.” said Alex.
“Alex we’re your friends. We trust you and you trust us. Don’t you?” said Kaori.
Alex looked at Kaori, seeing she was worried about him.
“Ok. I’ve been having these dreams about this kid named Sora.” said Alex.
Before Alex could continue, he saw the faces of Kaori and Chris. Chris had his eyes closed and his hand on his face. Kaori was just in shock.
“Dude, do you have any idea how odd that sounds?” said Chris taking his hand away from his face and opening his eyes.
“What?” said Alex confused.
“Alex,” said Kaori, “are you gay?”
“What?! No! I’m not gay!” said Alex still confused.
“Oh thank goodness.” said Kaori relieved.

 

Dude, if u didn't laugh ur head off while writing this. HOLY CRAP SOMETHIN'S WRONG!?!?!?

 

Yeah I did laugh.Let me guess the part that says "Alex," said Kaori, "are you gay?" that part made you laugh huh.I was thinking should I put it or no.But I decided to put to make it funny.

 

Yeah, I laughed about that part! PSYCHIC FREAK!!! AHH! lol dude!

 

(Tilts his head,staring at the screen) Huh? Hmm. Well. Ok. Hmm. (Shakes his head)
Good! You captured the elements of writing perfectly!Slow beginning, perfect entrance to new characters.
Bingo!

 

Thanks ^^ I'm still working on this one and the other one.

 

Reading this makes me giggles through the way") ( That's the sign of liking this story!) I love the characters and the title you put up:D

 

Thank you Mexony glad you like it :)

Just posted in my other story go check it out.

 

Chapter 1-The First Day (Continued)

Kaori and Chris let out a sigh of relief. But Alex was still confused. Then he finally understood why they meant.
“I didn’t mean to say it like that. You didn’t even let me finish.” said Alex. “Anyways, that kid, Sora, went on a journey to find his friends or something. He also had to protect this thing with the word “king” in it. But I forgot the name of it. And his weapon was like a giant key.”
Chris just shook his head in the nonsense Alex was speaking. He then got up and went with his other friends. Before Kaori can tell Alex something, a young woman walks up to them.
“Excuse me.” said the woman.
Alex and Kaori look up and they saw a young woman wearing a pink dress, brown boots, and has long brown hair tied up in a ponytail.
“What school is this?” asked the young woman.
“This is Alendale High School.” responded Alex.
“Oh good, I thought I was lost.” said the woman. “Do you know where I can find someone by the name Cid?”
“Um the woodshop teacher?” asked Kaori.
“Yes.” responded the girl.
“Ok, we can take you.” said Alex.
Alex and Kaori got up and took the woman to the woodshop teacher. They got to the class and he was working on something.
“Um Mr. Highwind.” said Alex.
“Yeah.” responded their teacher.
“Someone is here to see you.” said Kaori.
Their teacher turned around and smiled.
“It’s about time.” he said. “Thank you kids.”
“Your welcome.” responded Kaori smiling.
Alex and Kaori went back outside. Then the girl and Cid began to talk.
“Do you think he could be the next one?” asked the girl.
“I think so. If he is then we have to keep a close eye on him.” said Cid looking out the window at Alex.

 

LOL, Cid's in Woodshop??? HA! funny as ever, dude