Doesnt have a name but it was inspired by my username

Darkness Rules Over Others
but who is to say Im one of them?
Im stuck inbetween...
No One to help me or to be there....
and over the years my heart has grown dim,
soon be swallowed by darkness
and Im ready to lose all I have
Edit: New Poem
As solider
I have confrounted the master of twilight
but what is to say I won?
I lost and fled from battle
indeed I am not enough to defeat him
but as I sit here
my land is being commanded by twilight
and how horrible those creatures where
its like my heart has grown dim
every time I see them
and yet the battle for light has just begun...
and Im ready ​

 

Whoa, that is a cool poem, kind gloomy, but i am alright with that....so why are you sad, or are you just in a creative mood......

 

Im just in a creative mood, being in darkness can be gloomy, plus I kinda feel that way right now

 

Well thats alright, as long as it doesn't consume your entire life....and i liked th poem, was it just a spur-of-the-moment kinda thing....

 

Goodnes... darky... D8

Otay, I suggest something! No, the poem is perfect. Just the lay out. ^^ Make some stanzas and lines. Like this:

Soft moon glows
Snow ice cold
Wolf howls chilling

Something like that anyways... Good job anyways! ^^

 

Ok thasnks and I had a feeling you were going to say that

 

Thank you, I could not think of the word....stanza.....that was the word I was looking for...

 

Cool!! Although, you spelled Darkness wrong...

And I agree with Friendly_Heartless, you should format poems like that. It makes it easier to read and easier for us to understand the intended flow of the poem.

Nice job :)

 

Okies fixed I put it in stanza form, Thank you for bringing this to my attention

 

Very nice man....it looks a lo more like a professional poem now....:D

 

I think it is good ^^ kinda depressing but good :D

 

Ooh...darky..

But you know what? Sometimes the best work comes out of a slump like this. Nice poem.

And the formatting is much better. :)

 

awesome man! :D

 

lol this is cool!

 

It's a little short, to me anyway. What the others said: More stanzas.

 

Uh no one else said more stanzas

 

*cough*

It's okay, a bit short (but then again, my poems are really short too xD)
and maybe a teensy bit corny... Check spelling and grammar again, there's a few mistakes that I noticed.​

 

I love it. ^^ I write poetry, too! But--- It's your time to shine!!

 

Epic....very epic...good poem bro..nice job..make another.

 

He did...I think, but I am not sure at the moment....but the poem is great...:)