Aragorns

I'm liking that final line a lot.
My attempt at reworking it;
"Like my father before me, I protected my country
And yet, sorrow was my only reward
The gladness of release, October the fifteenth
Only one record remains; Bayeux Tapestry!"

Yes, it's slightly abstract in wording, but it's supposed to be, since that's how most Servants's arias are.

Oh, okay. I've never heard the song, so... yeah.
I can try to come up with something, but how about this; you come up with something for it, and I'll take a look at it and suggest any changes to make it more badass or appropriate?

Alrighty.

Is that the incantation to activate his Reality Marble? If so, I may be able to come up with better.

I say Bayeux Tapestry because that's the name of the only surviving depiction of Harold's death.

Alright, and don't worry about that thing with William, because what you might not know is that in Iskander's Reality Marble, EVERY SINGLE ONE of those summoned soldiers is a Servant, in various classes. When you're at that level, then you can call it overpowered. And in anycase, William would be a temporary character, so he can appear in the reality marble, but nowhere else. And no, I'm not increasing the OC cap anymore.

Yeah, no invinvible Servants like that. He can be defeated in normal combat in any way.
Name... none of those fit. It'd be something like... Bayeux Tapestry.

He sticks an arrow in his own eye, and suddenly gains the ability to use his Reality Marble, which would be similar to Iskander's in that he would summon the entire battle in which he was killed. It would essentially plunge everyone into chaos, since they would barely be able to distinguish anybody from anybody else; perfect for attacking people while they're off guard. It's name would be... "Last Crusade".

Iskander was also a king. He became Rider. Skills are what makes one a class, not what you were.
Well, perhaps his Noble Phantasm about the arrow could be something about reflexes when attacked with ranged weaponry. Having already been killed by an arrow and then mutilation, it's possible that he would now be able to dodge incoming projectiles without fail. It'd possibly have to be some kind of activated ability to avoid being brokenly strong, but I can imagine it working well.

Very nice faces there. I laughed. But yes.
Also, might I suggest changing Harold to the Rider class? He was fairly well known for his horseman skills, and he died on horseback, which makes me think he'd be a Rider. He'd be able to use literally any vehicle or mount like that, and still be able to keep his sword skills. He'd also be at an advantage compared to the Sabers because he'd have his horse as one of his Noble Phantasms, most likely.

The author of the series itself outright said that nobody from modern or future times can become a Servant because modern technology means that nobody themselves are heroes, but the technology would be, and an inanimate object can't be a Servant. Archer is only an exception because he is Shirou.

Not true. Archer was an exception because he was from both the present and the future. Nobody else can be brought from the future or present but him.

Yeah, Archer is taken unfortunately. There are many other Servants though. But besides; you couldn't play Archer accurately until you've seen the movie. That's when his real intentions come to light.

Sure then. That will be not this encounter, but the next one. You can bring Darelen back in once the Kingdom Hearts thing is dealt with. Until then, you might want to gather some more Princesses.

That can't happen yet, we're already in the middle of some plot.

I remember you mentioning something briefly, but you never actually said what was going to happen.

Helegen Event? What?

Ah, thanks. His song didn't really need much rewording, which meant it wasn't quite as creative or anything, but hey, a Disney villain's gotta make a showy entrance.

I thought you'd like it.

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http://typemoon.wikia.com/wiki/Saber_(Fate/Prototype)

His. I'm talking about Arthur, not Arturia.

For that matter, how would you like Elisha being Arthur's Master?