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Discussion in 'Archives' started by Catch the Rain, Sep 30, 2007.

  1. Catch the Rain As the world falls down ♥

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    Moon shines down and rain starts to fall
    I look at you but you dont see me at all
    a ghost in the breeze
    a whisper in the trees
    I begin to wonder If I am even real

    Your eyes see right through me
    and you dont hear my voice
    emotions drain away
    I see no other choice
    I turn around and walk away

    Rain falls harder and the night grows colder
    But I no longer feel it as I stumble on
    the air grows quiet
    and all is still
    I look down at the darkness

    I close my eyes and breathe in deep
    My heart beats faster as I think
    I wonder what it would be like
    I wonder if you would care
    Would you care if I was no longer there?

    A brief second, suspended in time
    A momentary pause, everything stops
    Falling, spinning, dancing in air
    flying freely without a care
    Then all is quiet, all is still, only the water knows


    Moon shines down and rain continues to fall
    I look at you but you dont see me at all
    a ghost in the breeze
    a whisper in the trees
    I begin to wonder If I was ever even real







     
  2. Luka Deafening silence

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    OMG that was brilliant !!! though i think i didn't get it all ...
     
  3. Catch the Rain As the world falls down ♥

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    *hugs* thanks ^^


    and lol! :)
     
  4. Valium Hollow Bastion Committee

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    WOW that was amazing 10/10 rep for J00
     
  5. Catch the Rain As the world falls down ♥

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    Thank you :) that's awesome ^^
     
  6. myoblivion King's Apprentice

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    Amazing. ^.^, please, write more! :3
     
  7. Luka Deafening silence

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    that's an awesome ... story ? i dunno the word lol
     
  8. W7F King's Apprentice

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    You did it again... XD I think I'll rep YOU this time. Gj, another favorite of mine (XD earlier I said of yours..).

    *ish crestfallen* It said you're too awesome to receive any more rep from me...
     
  9. Catch the Rain As the world falls down ♥

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    :) thank you so much :) I shall try my best

    *hugs* it's ok :) thank you for the compliment ^^
     
  10. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    Wow, to pretty but so sad. *reps you*
     
  11. Spike H E R O

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    That's really nicely done. You put me in the mood to start working on one of my own. Thanks ^_^.
     
  12. Catch the Rain As the world falls down ♥

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    Thank you so much both of you :)
     
  13. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Aww that's sounds so sad CTR I love it
     
  14. Peace and War Bianca, you minx!

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    Of course we would care, so so much! :D
    Great work!
     
  15. Marluxia_loves_flowers Destiny Islands Resident

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    OMG, that was really good CtR!!!!!!!! :D *hugs and gives you cookie* I wish I could write like that!!!!!!! :D
     
  16. Catch the Rain As the world falls down ♥

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    Thanking you all <3333

    I am glad that so many people liked this one :)