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  1. Catch the Rain As the world falls down ♥

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    New poem yep yep ^^​


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    I thought that I was over you
    I thought I had let you go
    But my dreams they tell me different
    And now I finally see it
    Now I finally know

    That I cant get you out of my system
    I cant break free of your spell
    And I know now it will always be this way
    Youre in my thoughts every second
    Every second of every day


    I tried so hard to leave the past
    I wanted so much to be free
    But lately all I think about
    Is how it used to be
    When it was just you and me

    I wonder do you think of me?
    Do you ever think of my voice
    I still dream of your face
    I still remember your warmth
    But I wake up and youre not there
    And I'm left feeling alone

    I feel so hollow without you here
    Though Im surrounded by those I love
    It just isnt the same,
    It just isnt the way it used to be

    I still miss you
     
  2. Fork These violent delights have violent ends

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    You know you realy should make a real title for these things xD


    I like it. You really are improving dearie :3 It's well written.
     
  3. Rosey Chaser

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    I agree with Forsaken xD

    <33333333333333333

    As always ^^
     
  4. Arcantress King's Apprentice

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    That was reaaaaaaally good :D

    I lurves it ^^
     
  5. W7F King's Apprentice

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    D: T'was sad. But, really, really good, however. Good enough to deserve some rep this time, <3, xDDD.

    :D It says I need to spread it around some, you're too awesome.
     
  6. A Y A M E_S O H M A Moogle Assistant

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    Wow, that was really good! I wish I could write like that....... any way, good job!
     
  7. Shuhbooty moon child

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    I didn't know you missed me so much CtR. TT.TT

    I love you too. <3

    Awesom poem, it's really good. And alot of feelings are into it. I love it!
     
  8. Spike H E R O

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    This was awesome. Good choice of words for the poem.

    You know, at some point, you'll run out of smileys to use for titles for these >_>.....
     
  9. Catch the Rain As the world falls down ♥

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    Thanks lots ^^

    <333 :glomp:

    I am glad ^^ thanks :)

    *squishy hugs* thanks <333

    Practice and I am sure you will do great :P

    <333 I am really happy you liked it xD aww of course I love you ^^

    >_> so you had noticed that huh? LOL it's just so hard thinking of titles >.<

    Thanks for the compliment <3
     
  10. xiegin Destiny Islands Resident

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    wow this is good ctr heh seems sad tough but it still good
     
  11. Catch the Rain As the world falls down ♥

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    Thanks ^^ I am glad you liked it :)

    It is sad, true, but it needed to be written xD