7 Deadly Sins (Poem)

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  1. lil woj Merlin's Housekeeper

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    The repetitive feeling of sorrow cannot match my 'Wrath'
    It will never see past your 'Greed'
    Watch me 'Envy' your love and your 'Lust'
    For how long have you been 'Sloth?'
    No longer then ive been 'Gluttony' i pray.
    So go ahead take my feeling take my life take my 'Pride'
    ~William Havok Woj
     
    lil woj, Jun 16, 2011
    lil woj, Jun 16, 2011
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  2. Terra254 Traverse Town Homebody

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    This poem is...good.But,I kinda think poems need to rhyme(They don't have to,I know,but i like it).Aside that,the poem is good.
     
    Terra254, Jun 19, 2011
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  3. Roxas&Sora4E Traverse Town Homebody

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    This poem is great! It has rythem and feeling! A+ for you! :lolface:
     
    Roxas&Sora4E, Jun 19, 2011
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