For the familys. For the friends. For everybody. Who lost somebody. To 9/11. . For the people who tryed. Tryed to help save the people. Oh no no. This can't be. Oh no no. This can't be happening. How could this be. How could anybody sleep. Knowing what they have done. R,I,P The firemen. Who died trying. To help. To the familys. Who lost their mommy and daddys. To the friends. Who lost they best friend. To the people. Who are in war. To people.Who lost their familys. Who lost their friends. To everybody who cryin. May god be by your side. May god show you the light. We will never forget.. But we will never. Ever. Ever. Surrender!
This was a really touching piece of work! It may have been simple, but it did have spirit to it. I get the feeling of reverence and pride throughout this poem, as well as grief and pain. Also, the last stanza was the most powerful in my opinion. Thank you for writing this, it means a lot to some of us!
This is..a really great piece of writing. It really gets the emotion out..thank you for giving me the opportunity to view it.
This was a really nice piece of work, and it was touching at the same time. This is a day we should never forget about in our hearts! It may have been simple, but I can tell you put a lot of emotion into it.
This poem is touching.For Americans ,we will never forget this day,not sure if it had any sort of an impact on any other countries so. My only problem with is it repeats,other than that,this poem is beautiful : ] >:L
Well what can you say for a piece like this other than . . . thank you. You really expressed the will of the people how i'm sure we must of all felt at the time. It's just a shame that people sometimes forget . . . then again for those who suffered through it I would be happy to see it wiped from their mind. Though we should always remember it and never forget so that we may stop any further advances like this. Remember, 9/11 is more than just a date . . . it's a symbol of just how much we have gone through as a people . . . as a nation.
