A few of my poems

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  1. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Darkness

    As the heart gets lonely,
    And the mind plays tricks,
    Eating away is what the darkness does,
    All omens from our past,
    Come as I come and go,
    Nothing can save your soul,
    Not even death will save thy,
    Death may come but it will not save,
    Your touted soul,
    And so I mush shear this same fate.

    The Blue Moon Wolf

    As I run in the night with only the moon as my light
    My fur turns to the blue of the moon
    And my eyes to the black of the night sky
    Now I know this is what I really am
    The Blue Moon Wolf.

    Angel Demon

    We both have lost our wings
    But our powers remain
    In this war with no winners
    Now we have no choice
    But to both lose this war.

    Angel in Darkness

    An angel in darkness who is looking for the light
    This light is a powerful light called love
    We will all find this light of love
    That will help us out of the darkness

    Moon light

    The clear star lit night
    And the moon shining so bright
    Makes me so peaceful

    Angels

    Angel of Destiny of what to come
    Angel of Hope of the un-despaired heart
    Angel of Love of the heart of gold
    Angel of Time of the sands of time
    Angels of Friendship so strong

    No evil can break this bond of Angels
    Mortal by body Immortal by souls
    The four angel will never fall


    I Have more but i'l post them some other time
     
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    Good.

    Dont talk about fight club.
     
  3. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    ...? Why would I want to talk about fight club all my poems are about how i feel and think about
     
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    i know but i had 5 words left
     
  5. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    But ya could of said what you like about them
     
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    They make me wanna lala, in the kitchen, on the floor. Nahh, that was cheesy. But seriously, they make me want to sit in my room in the dark, listen to my iPod and think about stuff (basically, they depressed me). But very good! I like the wolf one the best :D
     
  7. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Thanks...do they all make you feel that way?
     
  8. Antidote Façade

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    Actually, no. I should've been more specific. Angels and Moon light and The Blue Moon Wolf aren't depressing to me. The Blue Moon Wolf one makes me feel happy (don't ask) and Moon light makes me feel good, because it's like what I do when I feel sad, like I said in my above post, I just listen to music and look out my bedroom window in darkness at the stars and moon and it soothes me :o You are very good at writing poems. I wish I could do them :(
     
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    They're nice... The Angel in Darkness one reminded me of Riku.
     
  10. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Thanks oh and so you know all my poems take about 5-10 minuets to write
     
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    Lol... I used to write poems, but then I got scared my sisters would make fun of me for it, so I stopped. O.O
     
  12. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    I don't really care if people dis my writing as long as I like them that's all that matters to me
     
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    Yeah... But, now I regret throwing all of them out, 'cause some of them were pretty good. :/
     
  14. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    I'm sure you can write more good ones
     
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    Wierd poem

    Okay i just done this is class when i should of been doing IT oh well enjoy

    A mixed up mind
    Always within light and dark
    Twilight fantasy
    Light of a child
    Dark of a child


    A mind made up
    Running away from what is real
    But never in fantasy
    This is who I see myself
     
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    I HAVE A QUESTION. WHATS THIS POEM ABOUT???:confused:
     
  17. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Me and my fantasies
     
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    Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh. I Know That!. Now...
     
  19. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Okay but do you like my new poem?
     
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    Its kinda vague...But i can see its got potential if you work on it some more.
     
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