A few of my poems

I really liked it as it got me thinking. You are very good.

 

Yeah I know but it's only like that becuase I did it in like a minute

Thanks I knew you'd like you like my poems don't ya

 

Emotion circle

Yea hereit is a new poem i did to now in class cus I've done all my work so enjoy

The fire of rage slowly starts to burn
Building up to going berserk
As berserk starts to die down
Sorrow come knocking
And then the emptiness fills my heart

Knowing I have once again
I have survived my emotion circle again
Small happiness fills me
And now I will keep on going
No matter how many time my emotion circle
Will come and go
As long as I keep on going
I will never let it stop me

 

I really enjoyed your new poem. Although it is about a repeating cycle, I can see hope in the way you are not giving in.

 

Wow! I think you are talented for writhing this beautiful poem TT-TT Nobody in my class can go even close to that so don't ever give in!

 

Gharanth I knew you'd like it you always like my poems and MookieTheKeyToDestiny thanks

 

Well you are a very talented poet. I like poetry, always have. You write with great feeling.

 

Living life

This is a new poem on how I see life and how I cope with it so enjoy

The darkness in my heart
Is always growing stronger everyday
But the light will never go out as
Long as I don’t give in
As long as I know who I really am
No one can every tear me apart.

My light will never go out
My darkness will keep on coming
But that is my life
And it is your life
Don’t you see?

Surviving is my greatest skill of all
So follow in my foot-steps
And make it yours

Life is one big test
Don’t let it put you off
Keep on trying
Never give up

Find your ray of hope
Even if it’s not real
Use it to live life
No matter what

Use your hard life to make it easier
How?
Only you can find out

 

That was brilliant. It sums up the struggle and how you inspire others to seek the positive things, fighting the darkness that could overpower them. I think it sums your inspirational side up well.

 

Got it in one Gharanth but what's wried about this poem is that I'm always putting my self down but the bit about hope is what stops me...I'm one wried person lol

 

Reading your poems, I see you as a very deep thinking and understanding person, who really sees the inner struggle that all people go through at some point in their life. I feel this makes you a very special person, an one who has horoured me by allowing me the insight into your understanding via the medium of poetry.

 

Thanks you really understand where i'm going with my poems and for that i'm greatful to have you for a fan

 

Real or not

Okay when I wrote this I was thinking about the start of kingdom hearts and what Sora says befor the intro song but anyways enjoy

Is this all real?
Are we all acting in our own free will?
Or is something or someone telling us what to do
Like people in a story?
Are we all real
Or a fragment
Of someones
Imagination
How will we ever know?

 

Good one, keep it up, u get better and better.

 

Thanks I'll get a lot better when I start my part-time creativity writing couse

 

That's really good. You are great at writing in a way to make people think and question their perception of life.

 

The ungrantable wishes

I wrot this yeasterday befor going to a studernd rep meeting but forgot to type it up, so I just did it now so enjoy

My wish I could fly and sore though the sky
I wish I had the power to make world peace
But they are just ungrantable wishes

I wish I could take all you pain away
I wish I could give you a lifetime of happiness
But they too are ungrantable wishes
They may be ungrantable wishes
But knowing I wish them
Is good enough for me
Is it good enough for you?

 

good poem.i like that poem.

 

Thanks...Oh i for got to put this when I posted it


This poem is for all my friends and the people I care for so if you're one of them it's for you

 

Aww, thats sweet. It's a nice poem, I like it. ^_^