A few of my poems

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  1. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Thanks you flowers for you *smiles*
     
  2. Ratchet Bah weep graaagnah wheep ni ni bong!

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    That was a beautiful poem. You really are very caring and talented.
     
  3. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Thanks gald you all like my poems and maybe that's why I'm writing so many now
     
  4. Ratchet Bah weep graaagnah wheep ni ni bong!

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    I'm glad that you are inspired to write such fine poetry.
     
  5. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Again thanks Gharanth I just hope I don't get writers block ^_^
     
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    Nice poem and writers block happens to the best of them XD
     
  7. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    I know but I'm sure I'm going to get it over summer when it comes
     
  8. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Those three little words

    I'm sure you can all guess who I wrote this for so enjoy

    Some people in love do crazy things
    For the one they love
    But what they do not see
    Is that the best was to say it
    Is to say these three little words
    I love you
    That is all I want hear
    Do not try to prove it
    Because I see it in your eye
    Just tell me those three little words
    I love you
     
  9. Flowers-For-You Traverse Town Homebody

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    Aww, thats really cute and so sweet. ^_^
     
  10. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Thanks flower your the one I really wanted to like this one
     
  11. Ratchet Bah weep graaagnah wheep ni ni bong!

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    That was lovely. The language matched the feeling.
     
  12. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Thank you thank you thank you is all i can say lol man i love my skill (is so happy)
     
  13. Anderson (☞゚∀゚)☞ You've lost the game.

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    A very nice poem. Nice form as well. 9.9/10
     
  14. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    where did the 0.1% go? tell me please
     
  15. Darkvincent Gummi Ship Junkie

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    nice poem u should use that on a girl ^^:D
     
  16. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    3 things

    1 thanks
    2 it is for a girl
    3 do you think i'm a boy cus i'm not i'm a girl myself
     
  17. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    My childish fear (The Mirror)

    Okay we've all had silly little things we've all been afraid of when we was kids right? well this is was I was afraid of when I was a kid

    Hanging there at the top of the stairs
    Seeing my reflexion as I climb them
    It hunted me even as I slept
    Never did I know that years from then
    Would I ever find it at all funny
    I once feared the mirror
    At the top of the stairs
    But now I know
    That is was just
    My childish fear

    This is my first poem that has two titles
     
  18. Ratchet Bah weep graaagnah wheep ni ni bong!

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    That was a great poem. I guess we all have things that we were afraid of. Mine was the shed.
     
  19. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Yeah i was also afraid of them Umpa Lumpa things from Willy wonnker and the chocolate factory but I don't think make a poem about them would be a good idea
     
  20. Cin Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp

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    That's really funny

    Nice poem though

    I was afraid of a vampire coming out of the Tv and eating me...:(
     
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