Alice In Murderland

THIS IS NOT YOUR NORMAL ALICE IN WONDERLAND!!






Well, This is a story I made in my head last night, But...Here's a sneak peak of a part of it- *RATED PG-13*



"The Madhatter Playing Cat and Mouse"



The dark, empty hallway was filled with the sound of patter of shoes pounding on the tile of the Hollow Sprits School. A girl in a blue dress, almost a striking image of Alice in wonderland, but blood soaked and looked like she was about to break. “COME HERE MY LITTLE ALICE!!” A evil , wild voice called from down the hall. A man standing very tall running after her with a knife gleaming in the moonlight, She huffed and puff while running as fast as she could, and she look behind her. She tripped over herself and screamed. But secretly she had a knife in her stocking, she was going to fight back. She awaited for his attack. She tried to act helpless, and he moved onto her body, his foul breath incasing her senses and making her gag.

“So…Easy, It’s quite sad, I caught my little mouse!” He raised the knife over her chest, but she was quick “*******!” She plunged the knife into his chest, the blood seeping into her hands.






CnC? Im also adding people from KHV here, but they wont die...

List of People wanting to join this Fic-*YOU MUST SEND ME A PM DESCRIBING YOU!* THIS IS CLOSED NOW! IM VERY SORRY...

1.MSUK
2.Random-Angel (Passed)
3.Sumi-Chan (Passed!)
4.Nosie
5.Tummer

Automatic *People I Planned already*

1.Dr.John
2.Ms.Scarlet
3.???
4.???
5.???
6.???

CHAPTERS, AND WHERE TO FIND THEM..

1. "The Calm Before The Storm..." Pg. 2 of My post..-

A group of kids were walking on the great lawn of the Hollow Sprits Boarding School located in London. It was a dumping ground for the rich parents of their offspring all over when their jobs got into their way of parenting. “Alice…My, oh, MY… YOUR BUST GREW!” Skittles, a girl nicknamed for her love of the rainbow colors and it showed on her clothing. She had almost every color on her. Alice, as her namesake as the famous book, Alice in wonderland… She had everything that she did, up to her hair color and English bloodline. “Skittles ! That’s so rude!” Alice blushed but chuckled. Skittles laughed and sat down on the nearby lunch tables, it was a lovely night to eat outside. John put down the pizza on the table, and Ms. Scarlet put down the four bottles of coke. “John, do eat you share instead of having a 1-hour make-out session with Scarlet here!” Skittles poked both of them as they laughed and Scarlet said with a sly smile “Don’t worry…He’ll eat it from my mouth!” Skittles and Scarlet had a laughing fit as Alice and John blushed and opened the pizza box and handed the slices.
“So, I thought Miele was going to be here with us.” Alice asked the two other girls. Skittles looked up and said to Alice with sadness “No..She said that she had some homework due to her Global History Teacher , and she was going to do it over the weekend..” Skittles then started to eat the slice she had, and the rest of them started, but John stopped mid bite and said “You mean Mr. Earl, right? You know he’s leaving next week.” He said gloomy. “Yeah, that’s sad, he was a great teacher too..I had him last year.” Alice said while she picked off the pineapples and ate them one by one.

The hour passed while they ate, played and joked, but Alice felt very unlike herself. She felt like she was being watched for every movement she made, and the trees were mocking her swaying in the wind kind of hair. John and Scarlet finally noticed after their make-out session ended and asks “What’s wrong Alice? You seem sick?” They were worried, and it showed in their voices. “Im…Okay…Just a bit dizzy, can we go back now?” She pleaded to them, they gathered all their rubbish and headed towards the dorms

Just a few yards from them, A shadowy figure moved to follow, watching Alice’s movement…




2.(Part one) "Ding Dong, The Wrench is dead!" Pg. 4 -


Alice, Scarlet, and Skittles walked to their two bunk-bed room in the girl’s dorm. But Scarlet stayed behind with John to have alone time. “Yeah, their VERY public display of love.” She secretly took photos to bother John with the next time they meet. “Miele should be in our room, since she’s doing her homework…right?” Alice asked as she opened the door.

And saw Miele on the floor gasping for air. “MIELE!!!!” Alice screamed out as she crouched towards her trying to help “SKITTLES! Get the medicine now!” Alice pleaded, Skittles jumped into action as she threw Mr. Bun-Bun, Her best stuffed toy aside and found the little bag that had the needle that could save her. “ALICE, MOVE!” Skittles pushed her aside and ejected the needle into her arm. Slowly but sure enough, Miele started to breathe normally. “Skittles…I think we should take her to…” But Miele cut her off. “No, Alice…I am fine…” She got up slowly and sat on the bed. “Don’t you know your not supposed to eat nuts!” Alice said with a bit anger. Skittles chuckled at the word “Nuts” and so did Miele. “I ate something and it must have had peanuts in it and I didn’t know…”

She breathed and looked around, and the phone rang, Alice picked it up and said “Hello, this is Alice Rodwood…..” She said in the phone, and a nasal, nasty voice answered. “Did your Stupid friend get the little gift I sent her!” The girl laughed over the phone said. “You did it Milly?!” She said In shock. “She could have died!” Alice looked towards them and Skittles grabbed the phone from Alice. “Look, you little wrench, I have photos of you going down on your boyfriend at last week’s Lacrosse game! I’ll post them all over the school if you do ANYTHING like that again!” she slammed the phone as the both stood in shock and awe. “Skittles…you are my god now..” Miele laughed out as she hugged her, and they all laughed.

Down the hall Milly was fuming and went to the shower/bathroom. She made sure it was empty and turned on the shower and the hot water was steaming up the room, and a slamming of a door echoed in the bathroom. “Hello..anybody there!” She looked out of the stall and looked at both sides. She shrugged and went back to showering. “That stupid Skittles and her damn friends…” She heard one of the showers nearby turn on, but didn’t pay too much mind. But suddenly the shower curtain opened and a knife gleamed in the light. “AHHHHHHHHHHHH!” She scremed as loud as she could as the cold steel entered her chest. The blood mixed with the water and went down the drain.

Now we see that blood is thicker then water…

Part TWO

Alice got up from laughing on the floor and said “I got to go to the bathroom, anybody want anything from the Vending machine?” She ask the girls in a giggle. Skittle grabbed her and hugged her close and said “Get me my children…MY COLORFUL CHILDREN!” She gasped as she had crocodile tears came “Allright Skittles! I shall save them..and a billons of coke for you Miele?” She asked her. “You know they are my drug Alice…” she laughed as Alice walked out the door, and walked down the hall towards the bathroom.

But suddenly she knocked into someone and fell on her bottom. “Ow…I am very sorry…” A pale hand reached out to her and said “Are you okay, M’lady?” he had very pale skin and very dark and foreign green eyes, Alice’s face turn deep red and said “I-I am fine..My name is Alice…What’s yours?” She also noticed he had a black top hat and a suit on with a cane. “My name is Prym…” He kissed her hand and her heart jumped. “I’ll see you later, My dear…” He walked away and Alice was pounced on by Skittles and Miele. “So…who was that hunk of man?” Skittles said as Miele laughed. “Oh…that was..” But she stopped midsentence and Miele gasped “OH GOD! It’s E!” She ran behind Alice and he approached the group.

He was a cute guy…Just one problem, He had a crush on Miele…But she had a boyfriend back home in Australia named Jerome. “Hey Alice..Skittles, I just saw Miele…she’s right behind you.” Miele got up slowly and said “Hi…E, what do you want?” She said bored. E got closer and said “I Just want a date..” He almost touched her arm when a scream was heard. “SUPER SKITTLES DROP KICK!!!” A kick was made on his head and he was knocked out “Let’s go!” they ran to the bathroom and entered. Alice noticed the all the showers were on, and their was blood trickling down to the drains. “Guys…” Alice prodded them and pointed towards the blood. “Eww….” Miele said as she walked towards the stall and screamed “MILLY’S DEAD!” She fell into the water and pointed into the first stall. Skittles ran to the stall and took out her cell phone. Alice was fixaded towards the bathroom mirrors, written in blood said.
“ALICE, YOUR NOT IN WONDERLAND ANYMORE!!!”

3. Life is but a Dream

The flashing red and blue lights covered the dark hallways of the school. Police were scattered everywhere like mice on the school grounds. The zipper’s sound of Milly’s body bag closing stuck within Alice’s mind to haunt her forever.
“Why…Would they kill Milly!” Alice cried into Miele’s shoulder. “This cannot be happening at a boarding school, It just cannot happen!”

Alice cried more while Skittles just stood there in shock, unable to say anything for once in her life to help Alice. The world just seem…darker for her now because of Milly’s death.

“Who is sick enough to kill someone in school?” Miele said to the air, addressing nobody. “Nobody can have such a vendetta on Milly to kill her!” Miele patted Alice’s back, but Alice moved away.

“I’ll be right back…” Alice said as she walked away from them, Miele reached out for Alice but Skittles shook her head no.

“That guy…he must be here..” Alice thought as she turned to a empty hallway, and sure enough. Hiding in the shadows was Prym, a sly smile that ran across his face.

“You called, Milady?” Prym said as he bowed and took of his top hat for respect.

“I know you know something about the stabbing, SPILL!” Alice got up to Prym with demand, the hate burning in her eyes.


“Let’s just say I am the Cheshire Cat in this story, Skittles better not lose her head…” He chuckled and moved away from the wall.

“What are you going to do to Skittles! TELL ME!” Alice screamed at him and he laughed again, but with more amusement then before.

“But…that would ruin the fun, Alice.” He chuckled at the thought. “Why so glum? It’s not you who’s dead…your friend Skittles, on the other hand…Might not be so lucky!” He cackled and walked away and turned the corner. Alice ran after him, but bumped into a tall man with a beard.

“You must be Alice Rodwood…correct?” The tall man said to Alice. “My name is Eric Carrol, I am the part of the police department looking into this case?” Alice sighed and said

“What do you want?” She had a cold edge in her voice. She didn’t want to deal with police today after what happened.

“I just need to ask-“ Mr.Carrol said but he was cut off by Alice,

“Leave me alone!” She pushed her way passed him and headed towards her room. He just stood there and walked down the opposite direction. Alice got her key out, but the door opened and Miele grabbed her hand.

“Were going to see E, NOW!” She said with such anger that it scared Alice.

“But where’s Skittles?” Alice asked to Miele.

“Read this, E has her…that *******!” Miele handed Alice a note that read.

“You didn’t want to go on a date with me? FINE! I have your colorful friend hostage in a broom closet in the school. Meet you in the school yard, babe. XOXOXO E-.”

They turned to the grassy lawn and saw E standing there. Miele let go of Alice’s hand. E’s hands were out to hug her.

“Come here baby!” He said, he didn’t get to say anything else as Miele’s fist hit E’s mouth hard. He fell to the ground with a thud and yelled at her. He had a face they never seen before. Like something out of a horror movie.

“WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU!!!”

Miele picked him up and slammed him onto the wall and slammed her knee into his nuts.
“Where the hell is she! You *******!” She slammed him into the wall again and he answerd with blood dripping from his mouth.

“Near the nurses office…” She let go of him and kicked him in the gut hard, Alice was stuck, she never saw Miele this mad…

Soon enough they had gotten to the closet next to the nurse’s office, and Miele had opened the door. The room was empty as it always is.

“She’s not there Alice…” she punched the wall and walked away.

“Where can she be?” Alice thought to herself. “What does E want to do to her…”

Somewhere in the basement of the school there was Skittles, she was blindfolded and shaking from the severe cold. She was dropped into a vat of water before she got locked in here. Skittles heard footsteps near her and she moved away, scared at what might happen to her.

“Let’s play a game, Skittles…” The voice said coldly with a hint of amusement. Skittles started to cry, She knew deep in her heart... She was going to die.

 

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I've always been lookin for a story like this!!! >D
I wanna hear more! <3

 

Good concept. A bit short for a chapter, and the grammar could use some cleaning up, but you used a good amount of description and the ending definitely leaves you wanting more. Pretty good job overall.

 

Thanks, Im gonna add more, and I NEED PEOPLE tO PLAY FRIENDS/SUSPECTS


Thanks, DR JOHN, Im gonna need an editer...because i suck at grammer and spelling

 

I was actually planning on doing a story like this with Alice, but I have too many in progress stories to do so...

Nice work! Can't wait to read more. I wanna a role​

 

Thanks you two, I'll have to see how to fit in you two in the story, so send me PM's and explain how your personalitys, etc. and names...

 

It's kind of short...and a little bit gory.

If you can keep progressing upon this Idea It could turn out Awesome.

 

Oh yeah, im gonna, and it was a quick thing, the first chapter is gonna be longer

And it's supposed to be gorey..to the point of our PG-13 rating

 

...
That's gotta be one of the most disturbing pieces of artwork I've ever seen.
xDD

Anyway, the concept you've got going there is awesome. It would be seriously cool to be a character in this. o.o

 

Very excellent descirbing. Needs to be longer though.
I was at the edge of my seat too.

I would join but I'm too lazy so I'mma read it :3

 

Thanks, the first chapater is gonna be longer...trust me,


COOL! i made someone on their edge of there seat

Chapter ONE IS HEREEEE!

Chapter 1



“The Calm Before the Storm…”



A group of kids were walking on the great lawn of the Hollow Sprits Boarding School located in London. It was a dumping ground for the rich parents of their offspring all over when their jobs got into their way of parenting. “Alice…My, oh, MY… YOUR BUST GREW!” Skittles, a girl nicknamed for her love of the rainbow colors and it showed on her clothing. She had almost every color on her. Alice, as her namesake as the famous book, Alice in wonderland… She had everything that she did, up to her hair color and English bloodline. “Skittles ! That’s so rude!” Alice blushed but chuckled. Skittles laughed and sat down on the nearby lunch tables, it was a lovely night to eat outside. John put down the pizza on the table, and Ms. Scarlet put down the four bottles of coke. “John, do eat you share instead of having a 1-hour make-out session with Scarlet here!” Skittles poked both of them as they laughed and Scarlet said with a sly smile “Don’t worry…He’ll eat it from my mouth!” Skittles and Scarlet had a laughing fit as Alice and John blushed and opened the pizza box and handed the slices.
“So, I thought Miele was going to be here with us.” Alice asked the two other girls. Skittles looked up and said to Alice with sadness “No..She said that she had some homework due to her Global History Teacher , and she was going to do it over the weekend..” Skittles then started to eat the slice she had, and the rest of them started, but John stopped mid bite and said “You mean Mr. Earl, right? You know he’s leaving next week.” He said gloomy. “Yeah, that’s sad, he was a great teacher too..I had him last year.” Alice said while she picked off the pineapples and ate them one by one.

The hour passed while they ate, played and joked, but Alice felt very unlike herself. She felt like she was being watched for every movement she made, and the trees were mocking her swaying in the wind kind of hair. John and Scarlet finally noticed after their make-out session ended and asks “What’s wrong Alice? You seem sick?” They were worried, and it showed in their voices. “Im…Okay…Just a bit dizzy, can we go back now?” She pleaded to them, they gathered all their rubbish and headed towards the dorms

Just a few yards from them, A shadowy figure moved to follow, watching Alice’s movement…

END OF CHAPTER ONE!

Cnc?

 

Whoa whoa, I'm on that plan list boy!!
xD

I like it so far, awesome job!!
=DD

I CAN'T WAIT TO READ WHAT YOU GOT FOR CHAPTER ONE!!
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EDIT:
WHOA WHOA!

GIVE ME THE LAST ASS CHAPTERS OF MY AWESONENESS PLEASE!
=DDD

I really REALLY ENJOYED READING THIS!!

And how you have me all in colors, and pery all always.
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I just posted above chapter one...

And your welcome...I need someone to make a banner for this fic also

It was fun writing your parts XD

 

So yeah, Chapter two will be up sometime tomorrow, UNLESS I am unable to get on...Then it should be tomorrow..

 

Something tells me that this would so very...completely...undoubtedly own if it was a roleplay.
Which I think would be a pretty good idea, since so many members want to be in it...including me. 83​

 

I like where this is going!!
=DDDDD

Tomorrowtomorrowtomorrowtomorrow!!!!
=DDD

I really LOVED how Meme made me all pervy.
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Best part in this hole story.
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I like it, and I'll take a good measure on how to put myself in your story. *smirks*

 

I love your story memento mori. It's funny and blood's involved, my type of story.

 

Thanks..


OMG, you guys make me laugh

AND NOW...in about an hour my chapter shall be finshied

Were the killings start >D

 

Here is is....! Part one of Chapter two! Part two coming later tonight!


Chapter 2


“Ding dong, The Wrench Is Dead!”



Alice, Scarlet, and Skittles walked to their two bunk-bed room in the girl’s dorm. But Scarlet stayed behind with John to have alone time. “Yeah, their VERY public display of love.” She secretly took photos to bother John with the next time they meet. “Miele should be in our room, since she’s doing her homework…right?” Alice asked as she opened the door.

And saw Miele on the floor gasping for air. “MIELE!!!!” Alice screamed out as she crouched towards her trying to help “SKITTLES! Get the medicine now!” Alice pleaded, Skittles jumped into action as she threw Mr. Bun-Bun, Her best stuffed toy aside and found the little bag that had the needle that could save her. “ALICE, MOVE!” Skittles pushed her aside and ejected the needle into her arm. Slowly but sure enough, Miele started to breathe normally. “Skittles…I think we should take her to…” But Miele cut her off. “No, Alice…I am fine…” She got up slowly and sat on the bed. “Don’t you know your not supposed to eat nuts!” Alice said with a bit anger. Skittles chuckled at the word “Nuts” and so did Miele. “I ate something and it must have had peanuts in it and I didn’t know…”

She breathed and looked around, and the phone rang, Alice picked it up and said “Hello, this is Alice Rodwood…..” She said in the phone, and a nasal, nasty voice answered. “Did your Stupid friend get the little gift I sent her!” The girl laughed over the phone said. “You did it Milly?!” She said In shock. “She could have died!” Alice looked towards them and Skittles grabbed the phone from Alice. “Look, you little wrench, I have photos of you going down on your boyfriend at last week’s Lacrosse game! I’ll post them all over the school if you do ANYTHING like that again!” she slammed the phone as the both stood in shock and awe. “Skittles…you are my god now..” Miele laughed out as she hugged her, and they all laughed.

Down the hall Milly was fuming and went to the shower/bathroom. She made sure it was empty and turned on the shower and the hot water was steaming up the room, and a slamming of a door echoed in the bathroom. “Hello..anybody there!” She looked out of the stall and looked at both sides. She shrugged and went back to showering. “That stupid Skittles and her damn friends…” She heard one of the showers nearby turn on, but didn’t pay too much mind. But suddenly the shower curtain opened and a knife gleamed in the light. “AHHHHHHHHHHHH!” She scremed as loud as she could as the cold steel entered her chest. The blood mixed with the water and went down the drain.

Now we see that blood is thicker then water…