Bad Moon Arising

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  1. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    YAY! Thanks! :D
     
  2. ~RoadToDawn~ Destiny Islands Resident

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    GOOD LUCK ON UR GUITAR CONCERT!
    ..or should i say, i hope you did good, since its already done:D

    anyway, thats awesome that the lssp is coming out on the 15th! i cant wait!
    just like i cant wait for the end of school!
    actually, today was my last day, but we still have to show up tomorrow for the trip thingy. meh. its close enough
     
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    Bad Moon Arising Ch 9

    CHAPTER 9!!!!! W00T! Enjoy! :D

    ~Chapter 9~

    It was now noon. The nine Nobodies still hadn’t come up with a plan, so they all decided to keep an eye on things until a decision was made.

    That morning, Roxas had made two more attempts to tell Xed how he felt about her: once outside in the garden, and the second on the roof of the Castle. But both times he had been interrupted by Xemnas, who said he had things for him to do. Also, Xed had made one more attempt to tell Roxas how she felt about him, again in Marluxia’s garden. But a certain pink-haired assassin coming in to see ‘what they were doing’ had interrupted her.

    Apparently, Karma had it in for them to not be together.

    And man, was Karma having the time of its life torturing those two.

    Roxas and Xed sat down at the kitchen table, at opposite ends. They both sighed deeply, each so annoyed that they didn’t notice the other’s sighs.

    This was becoming hopeless.

    Maybe… Roxas thought.

    Just maybe… Xed thought.

    We weren’t meant to be…

    +++

    “Violet? Are you ready?â€

    The violet-haired Vampire looked up at the pale-rose-haired Vampire and nodded. He grunted softly.

    He had thought about that girl again…

    “Violet?â€

    He looked up at Rose.

    “What?†he asked, somewhat snappy. She folded her arms.
    “Are you coming or what?†she asked him. Violet looked up into her impatient eyes. He nodded again and slipped the vial on the chain over his neck. The transformation occurred, and he looked at his reflection in the lake they were nearby.
    “I look just like him.†He said softly, inspecting his new form. Instead of his long, violet locks, he had spiked up honey-blond hair, and instead of his amethyst eyes, he had dark sky-blue eyes. His once-white coat was now all black, exactly the Organization XIII style.
    “Roxas.†Rose said, smirking slightly while slipping on her vial and necklace as well. Within seconds her transformation was complete. Now in an Organization XIII coat, her once pale-rose colored hair was now a red-brown color with an interesting cut. Her once pale-rose eyes were now a faded gray color. Violet looked over at her.
    “You look pretty.†He said, smirking slyly. Rose looked at him and raised an eyebrow.
    “Who? Me or Xed?†she asked. Without another word, Violet vanished, leaving Rose to herself.

    But really…she thought.

    Who did he mean?

    +++

    Violet, now in Roxas’ form, sat atop the rooftop of the Castle, watching the dim sun set into the sky, colors fading from warm to cool, and then to bitterly cold. He was waiting for his opportune moment to complete his part of their revenge. As he waited, he couldn’t help a certain memory that played over and over in his head…

    ~FLASHBACK~

    The young Nobody walked down the deserted, darkening streets, towards The Castle That Never Was. As she walked by, he observed her: short hair that was long in the front that was a deep brown shade and tinted with crimson and black streaks; the black coat, a symbol of Organization XIII; and those eyes—even from afar those eyes were the most beautiful ones he had seen since Rose’s. She walked along, oblivious to the fact that a Vampire Nobody was stalking her… It was quite a shame…it’d hurt him bad to mark someone of her prettiness…too bad he couldn’t really feel it…
    He crept behind her a little ways back, keeping up with her steps. He then, by accident, kicked a glass bottled, it making a clanking noise as it skid across the ground. Instantly the girl turned around and summoned a Keyblade.

    Impressive.

    “Who’s there?†she shouted, surveying the area wildly. But no one was there. At least, that’s what she thought…

    “Xedramon…or Xed, was it?â€

    The girl turned around, hearing a voice speaking to her from behind. But no one was there!

    “I’m glad my bite won’t remain. I’d hate to mark something of your…perfection…â€

    Xed turned around, this time the voice coming from her left. She gritted her teeth in anger when she saw no one was there.
    “Stop messing around and show yourself!†she shouted.

    The voice chuckled, more like laughed.

    “Fine, as you wish.â€

    Suddenly, a figure in a white Organization-like coat appeared in front of her. He had very long violet-colored hair, and shining purple eyes. He seemed about her age, give or take a year. He smirked, revealing two sharp fangs. The girl took a step back, partially in fright, partially in confusion. He laughed again, deviously.
    “Name’s Violet.†The boy said. “I’m sorry, but I think we’ll have to skip any formalities for now. I’ve come here to find someone, and I have, so I have a job to be completed.†Xed narrowed her eyes.
    “Then get lost!†she said, holding her Keyblade as if to attack. Violet laughed once again, disappearing from sight. The girl looked around, and was about to dismiss her Keyblade, thinking that he had left when all of the sudden a hand clasped around her mouth, and another hand grabbed both of her wrists and pulled them behind her back. She let go of her Keyblade, which noisily clattered to the ground. She tried to scream, but it was no avail; her screams came out muffled.
    “You see, I don’t think you understand…†A voice she identified as Violet’s whispered into her neck. “YOU’RE the person I was looking for…†He then placed a soft kiss on the side of her neck. Her eyes widened, shocked and terrified and confused and disgusted all at the same time.

    What was he DOING?!?!!

    She felt his lips curl into a smile against her neck.

    “Sorry Xed. You won’t be able to remember me, but I’ll remember you. We’ll meet again sometime. I promise.â€

    Xed was about to try again to break away from his grasp when something cold brushed against her neck, followed by a sharp, terrible pain. She cried out in pain, to only have her screams muffled by his hand. She felt something draining from her…she felt light headed and dizzy…she felt a horrible coldness taking her over…

    Xed fell to her knees, and then fell completely to the ground once Violet let go of her. She lay there, motionless, as Violet smirked.

    “Till’ we meet again, Xed.†He said, vanishing into the cold night’s air, leaving the young Nobody there on the ground, unconscious.

    “Till’ we meet again…â€

    ~FLASHBACK ENDS~

    Violet snapped of out his thoughts and looked up to see that the shy was now cascaded in darkness; it was night. He smirked inwardly.

    Let the plan begin…


    Oh, just a little fun fact: The titles of my stories usually have multiple meanings to them other than being related to the story!

    Here's the list of them:

    Larxene's Crush: Larxene has a crush on Axel; she's crushed to learn that she truly can't love

    The Vampire Nobody: Ok this is the exception :) Just about Vampire Nobodies

    Look Through My Eyes: Roxas and Sora have to live out each other's lives for a bit; they gain an understanding of what the other feels (or doesn't feel)

    Memory Break: Zexion's memory breaks and he can't remember anything; he tries to find out why he's "broken"

    The 14th Key: (ok this one has a lot) Xed fights with 14 keys; she'd be the 14th member of Org 13; introduces another Keyblader; if she were to be in the Org, her title would be 'The 14th Key'

    Bad Moon Arising: The 'LunaSol' event is when the moon's up all day, so it's a 'bad moon' cause' they'll have to deal with the Vampires; There is a song called 'Bad Moon Rising' that I actually sing in my guitar club. It's a really good song, and I love singing it :)

    So next time when I make a story, try to see if you can figure out any hints from the titles ;)
     
  4. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Awww I knew it! Violet likes Xed, Violet likes Xed *sings in sing song voice*

    Me: No stealing my position of Xedarles#1Fangirl!
    Violet: *revels teeth*
    Me: YOU CAN HAVE XED! *continues to hug Xed plushie behind back*
    Violet: *smiles again* give the plushie
    Me: *crying hands it over*

    Great job!
     
  5. Starboy Destiny Islands Resident

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    AAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!!!!:eek::eek::eek::eek::eek:
    Violet was the person... and is Xed a vampire, who'll turn on Roxas???? Yikes! It's like a cliffhanger to stories my science teacher tells us about his stupid friend!!!!
    EDIT: wait..... does Xed=Bad Moon Arising?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
    NUUUU DONT MAKE XED THE BAD PERSON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  6. roxaslovergurl22 Destiny Islands Resident

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    Once again best story maker in life!!!And i loved the story can't wait to see what's next!:D
     
  7. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    *joins in the singing*

    lol! XDDD

    Thanks! :D

    lol, you'll just have to see...*evil smile*

    And thanks! :D

    Thank you! *takes a bow and doesn't fall out of my computer chair*

    YAY! I DIDN'T FALL!!!

    *Violet comes up and pushes me out of my computer chair*

    HEY!!!! *cries hysterically*

    Violet: *laughs and walks away*
     
  8. Mish smiley day!

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    I noticed you conitinued to upload your chapters in separate threads, despite the fact that the sticky posted by Darky tells you not to. Never fear, I have merged all your chapters together. :|
     
  9. 2Foxxie4U ~The Forgotten Crusader...~

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    GO MISH! XDDDDD

    *brick'd*

    Okay, Sorry, I'll get out of the topic now... XD;
     
  10. >Keyblader< Traverse Town Homebody

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    HAHA!!!! Violet likes Xed!!!!! It's a blooming love triangle!!!!(Or a jealous triangle in Violet's and Rose's case)

    Roxas<----------->Xed<--------Violet<---------->Rose
    ^ |
    |___________________________________|

    So it's RoxasXXed
    XedXRoxas
    VioletXXed
    VioletXRose
    RoseXViolet
    Rose XRoxas

    Ok, it's not exactly a triangle, maybe a rectangle?
    MORE!!!!!
     
  11. Pure Beats~ Chaser

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    *has a feeling why Violent likes Xed* Just theory...>.>

    Awesome as always! Keep it up! ^^
     
  12. >Keyblader< Traverse Town Homebody

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    I keep seeing this and it just HIT me!!! You got this quote off Yazoo didn't you???(from finla fantasy 7 advent children) It was when he and Lolz were holding a ton of materia in their hands and were ready to bomb cloud after he defeated sephiroth.
    Yazoo: We'll go together.....
    Lolz: Together...........

    And, I'm a genius at making theories!!!!!! I knew that Xed had past encounters with Violet!!! And I WAS right!!!! Mwahahahahahhahah!!!!!:D
     
  13. Flamesabre Moogle Assistant

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    Your stories abo****ly OWN!! Read every single one!:D :D I hate Rose,
     
  14. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    oh...durn. I gotta get used to that :)

    Thank you!

    Actually, i got the quote form when, at the end of the KH2 game, Sora reads the letter, and the door to light opens up. Then, he gets up off the ground, holds his hand out to Riku and says:

    "We'll go together."

    But I did realize that Yazoo says the same thing! XD Weird, huh?

    Thank you! :D

    I dont particularly like Rose, but she's ok :)

    really? Can I hear it?

    And thank you! :D


    Yeah! A LOVE RECTANGLE! XDDD

    It's sorta funny...i hadn't meant to get this story so complicated...lol XDDD
     
  15. Desmonic Kingdom Keeper

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    Cool!! We get to know a bit of what happened, a bit of Violet's personality and that he likes Xed!!:D
    This story is getting really awsome!! I just can't wait for the next chapter!!

    Finally, you did it right!!

    Me: *pushes Violet of a cliff*.....You shouldn't push people out of their chairs!!
     
  16. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Thanks! :D Awww... Violet has a crush....

    Violet: shut up.

    And thank you! See, Violet? Pushing people out of their chairs is NOT nice!!!

    Violet: shut up.

    Tell me shut up one more time and I'll take my foot and stick it up your---

    Xed: OKAY NO MORE TO SEE PEOPLE!!!

    XDDD
     
  17. Desmonic Kingdom Keeper

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    LOOL!!! :D :D So when is chapter 10 coming out?
     
  18. ~RoadToDawn~ Destiny Islands Resident

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    OMG violet lekes xed???? didnt see that coming, although i knda thought there was something between roxas and rose...
    anyway GREAT JOB AS ALWAYS
    im so happy it came out today, a nice end of the school celebration on my computer
    WOOT!! yay, cant wait for more
    rock on:D

    ps, whes ch 10???
    pps. *sigh* my school trip got canceled too now. weather or something
     
  19. AkuseruVIII Banned

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    I only just realized that the most recent chapter was out. I feel normal(meaning stupid, like normal) this is getting more fricked up by the chapter. At least it's not clowns and cake. Violet is a... Stalker! Dah du duh! I just thought of that like the hand motion for 2+2=Fish It is engenius of me ehsit? Damn tangents. The inner fire is strong in this one. Hehehehehe. That means it was good.
     
  20. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Thanks! :D Yep, Violet likes Xed! XDDD

    OMG THAT STINKS!!! Weather? Like it's too hot or something? I feel really bad for you....*gives you an oversized chocolate chip cookie* :D

    Ch 10 will likely be out tomorrow :)

    lol ur weird! But cool! YAY FOR COOL WEIRDNESS!!! *high fives*

    Violet: coughloserscough

    Me: You know what Vi? I'ma hurt you....

    Thanks! :D