Dalk's poems of whatever he feels like writing about at the moment

Reincarnation

Read it without the white text first.






I am.
I am... awakening.... Light...

Chaos.​

Explosions, gunfire,Destruction raining like the wrath of the angels,

War.​

I get up, I run,

Run for my life​

Run away.
Far, far away....​

I see it before I hear it.
I feel nothing.
It all stops....

Darkness.....






Light.​

I am.
I am.... here.​

I exist.​

I hear....​

"Would you like to go back?"​

I can't speak.​

I sleep....
Darkness...






Light.​

I am.
I am... alive.
I hear the noises outside.

Explosions, gunfire, chaos.​

I hear...

BOOM!!​

People carry me away..
I am born....

Born into the same world I left from.​

 

Thanks! I'm really an input addict, because I don't really get any in English class. It's really the only reason that I post these, so even if it's negative, don't nobody hold back on criticizing my work. I need it. Badly.

 

Nice work. I like it. It kinda sound like a FF game withe the light, darkness, guns, and explosions.

 

Yooooooou should submit this in the poetry contest September 08

Yesh

I love it, and yes, Mail Jeevas, I really agree on the Final Fantay comment.​

 

That's really deep, DR.
I loved it.
It has a hint of sadness, but I'm drawn to it, like Shadow of the Day by Linkin Park.
I give it four out of five stars!
Good job!

 

Interesting. I can't say it did much for me because of some of the layout decisions, but it's a good concept in my opinion.

 

That was very nice. I personally enjoyed it without the white text but, it was still good to read with it. I thought the shortness to the sentences added the needed effect.

Nicely done~

 

I....
Already submitted a poem....
Yesh.

 

Two paths

I will remember for forever
That sad morning in November
Or in, perhaps, September...
I can't recall right now, however
This September or November
Found me in a place I'd never
Thought I would discover,
Leave be I'd be in forever.

September o' November's snow,
But snow is in December....no,
I have no need to know
September or December, so
Too long ago, above the snow
that crunched with red leaves to and fro,
This place I did not know
It seemed, made time move much too slow.

I looked down to my feet and knew
A path I walked, in the woods too,
This path diverged in two.
I heard a voice from someone new;
"Now listen you, and think anew,
The path you're on does split in two
The one you choose will take you,
It also knows what you would do.

"In this lost wood, you find you would
Much rather take the path that's good
But which one is more good?
Find it for yourself; you should."
The voice I would not tell I should
Then left me- left me in this wood
To choose which path is good,
Or what was said, "the greater good."

Season's weather passed as whether
I would pick one, it seemed I'd never.
Was the good road weathered?
Or the less weathered, however
Being clever, I thought whether
One path really seemed the better,
The voice did say I'd never
See the one I chose to sever.

As yes and no went to and fro
Inside my head, I then thought, "Ho,
For both paths I can know
Things from what they show me, so
If I would go a path so slow
To see what they both have to show
I then might better know
Which path I should decide to go.

This idea new, I thought it true
And sought to sit down till I knew
The good one, One or Two
As I came apt to call those two
I looked at two, and slowly grew
My knowledge of this path anew
I saw what it did do,
And thought if this seemed good or new.

Path Two was good,the greater good?
Debateable, for still I should
Check if path One is good,
And then we can go through the wood.
I said I should, and so I would
Turn to path One to see it's good
Now, sidding in this wood,
I thought about the greater good.

I looked around path Two and found
The old dirt path upon the ground
Would lead me to a town
Where joyous laughter seemed abound,
And in this sound I thought I found
The want to loose my spirit's bound
And live in joy renowned
Or not, fly free above the ground.

But, as I sought this town I thought
The path seemed dangerous a lot
It seemed I could get caught
Or worse, one slip could make me naught
So now I fought, this town I sought;
Should I try to get there or not?
The dangers seemed to dot
The path to where success seemed nought.

But then, path One was in the sun
So were I walking on path One
To end, when I was done,
I would not know to beam or run.
Also, path One, under the sun,
Was safer than the other one;
I would get this path done
Provided that I chose path One,

And with both fear and wonder here
At path Two's end I heard a cheer,
But could I really clear
The deathfalls that led it back here?
Repeating fear and wonder here
Could path One hold more joyous, dear,
Triumphant light? The easier
Path to take! My choice was clear.

A fool reknowned, a fool abound
I was when I trod path One's ground.
I slowly found the sound
Of path Two was no more around.
Without that sound I also found
An eerie silence was abound
I wished for that sound
That spurted joy from path Two's town.

I almost thought that my greed brought
Me the wrong way and towards naught
"As if it makes a lot,
This path is easier,"I thought.
But as I fought along I got
The notion that path one did not
Have any end; I sought
The destination path Two brought.

My choice was done, I carried on
This journey that was never done.
The pretty morning sun
Now heat me like a fire demon.
I may have run, but strength was gone.
It's been years since I've begun
To walk along path One
And still I have yet to be done.

I do not fear no end is near
I know this now, I shed a tear
For I will remain here
Forever, walking to nowhere.
If to that cheer I had just steered
I would be happy and not here,
Destined to die here,
For path One's end you don't get near.​

 

I wrote this in Biology while the teacher's back was turned

Finally, it's a new day and age,
And it's about time I let my mind out of its cage
It'd be a crime 'cause you guys won't turn the page,
But every time I hear that shit I strive to be a little bit
Infinite
Look at you, trying to live in it
You see a little bit of it, there's no sin in it
But imagine you getting through to another veiw
If you just knew what you would do, you wouldn't fit in it
You're the ones that fuck it all up when it's all pretty good
And you would do it all over again if you knew that you could
You know who you are
You're near and far, walking the different boulevards
You can't see the truth, it's really pitiful
That spiritual and magical bullshit that you put in your soul
And mind, the whole world is filled with your kind,
And it's a horrible corruption that is turning you all so blind
Here's what I'll do, I'll turn the fucking page for you
And so you'll see you always knew what you thought you could never do
It's priceless, the empty shells that make up what your life is
You're lifeless, ever since you became this fucking crisis
The lie is that you're the only ones who know what light is
My cry is that you are not the ones who learn to fly. Shit,
You're seeing with your eyes, they're the things that cry,
Their tears block them from sight, and I am here, I see with my mind
I'm another kind of psycho, so watch your mind.

 

I HAVE WRlTTEN THIS PRETTY SONG. I DO GOOD WORK, YES?

Ooh, what did you say~
What did you say when they all had gone away
Ooh, what did you say~
What did you say, and what did you do today
Ooh, what would you say~
What would you say if you got the chance to say it
Ooh, what would you say~
What would you say to them?

A little boy angel is sleeping at night
With his door cracked open to let in the light
All through the house, you can't hear a peep
For the little boy angel to stay fast asleep
But then Mommy and Daddy would get into a fight
And the little boy angel, gripping teddy tight,
Would call for his Mommy, alone in his bed
But how could he know that Mommy lost her head

He never meant for it to happen at all
But for his own actions, he had to take a fall

I say,
Ooh, what did you say~
What did you say when they all had gone away
Ooh, what did you say~
What did you say, and what did you do today
Ooh, what would you say~
What would you say if you got the chance to say it
Ooh, what would you say~
What would you say to them?

Around the whole world, a gunshot is heard
The ten thousandth shot that night, it's absurd
A man with his family falls over and dies
A man who denied some powers sometimes
The militant lowers his sniper and leaves
While the family kneels over the man and grieves
But for that one man, not one dirge is heard
Not one simple sounding, not one sin is cured

The hero who saved us, the man who got out
And shot him got the benefit of a doubt

I say
Ooh, what did you say~
What did you say when they all had gone away
Ooh, what did you say~
What did you say, and what did you do today
Ooh, what would you say~
What would you say if you got the chance to say it
Ooh, what would you say~
What would you say to them?

What did you say?~​

 

I actually just sat down and wrote this in about 20 minutes. Also I suck at singing, although if someone else would like to... :lolface:

 

THlS IS UNTITLED LIKE THE OTHER ONE I WROTE

Now relax, little kiddies, I ain't counting no sins,
But this psychopath is back to release some wrath again
Believe me when I say that I just wanna be your friend
But I have got a message that I've just gotta send
So here's my annotation of the nation and the world involved
Organizations and relations around which it revolves
The new sensation is decapitation of the criminals
It's the creation/evisceration, it's all subliminal.
"The lesser of two evils," these guys just make me laugh,
They're both angels, they're both devils, outside of what you craft,
There's no lesser or greater, just sooner are later,
They're all gonna get you whether they're lovers or haters.
But imagine them getting power for an hour
And a million different people sitting looking at your booking
And you're booking best you can but all the critics are cooking
Roasting you for every move you make and everything you take
And you can't take it no more because at every little core
What you do is great, but all they do is hate.

 

O.O

Just.. whoa..
Im not sure on what to say to this peice of work.
It's very entertaining and it make me giggles for some reason. xD

 

lol guess who this is about

Because I never knew that someone could make me feel like this
You're a light in the darkness, like a will-o'-the-wisp
And although I know it's selfish, for my one last wish
I'd want to hold you a little closer so my light could shine like this
Because if I could share this feeling with anyone
You'd be the one I'd pass it onto, I'd be a shining sun
To you, like you do, a voodoo curse on me
I once thought being in love was worse but now I see

​

 

Aw, I like it! It has such a nice flow, and it leaves the reader with a light feeling. Nicely done! ^^

 

I agree with Nanaki. It has a nice flow.

It was short but sweet. Keep it up.​

 

Whoah... it's really nice. I never knew YOU would write something like this.

Nicely made.

 

Thanks guys. :D

And what is that supposed to mean? :<

 

Thanks for the support guys. For a poem that I sat down and wrote in maybe 20 minutes, I didn't think that it would be this good. Keep the comments coming, I'd love to hear what everyone thinks of this.