"Feelings" A song by iP

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  1. Kingdom Glory Banned

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    Oh and if anyone steals my songs, I'll hunt you down and make you listen to me sing, then kill you.
    kthxilubrbbai
    Listen to you cry at night
    I can’t stand it anymore
    I gotta hold you close to me
    Gotta see your smile again
    Wanna just hold you tight
    Wanna be with you 24/7
    Just to grab a hold of your hand

    [Chorus]
    Feelings grab a hold of me,
    And I just tried to break free
    Can’t stop this feelin’ now
    Oh, I want to break free
    But on the inside of me
    A word so strong it kills to misuse.

    Look in the mirror,
    I see your face
    It’s a pain in the rear
    When you interfere.
    You’re in every place
    Can’t stop now
    Gotta keep on trekkin’
    For if I give up,
    It’ll keep on wreckin’
    But I’m here for ya
    And now more then ever
    [^Chorus]

    I dare to confuse
    Dare to reuse
    Dare to blow a fuse
    But the fact of the fact of that I love you
    Strong words, I know
    But gotta let them flow, no?
    Speak the truth, speak the truth,
    On the roof, yelling the truth.
    On the roof, candle lit
    There we sit
    Watching the moon
    Got a smile on it’s face
    Watching us sit and look right back
    Hand in hand, the time is right
    Lips together,
    Puckered real tight.
    First time for everything,
    So they say
    [^Chorus]

    This feeling won’t end
    Not that I want it to
    I’ve met this end
    Of sorrow and ungratitude
    Can’t fake my end
    Because I’ve gone and loved you
    And that’s the end.

     
  2. Rosey Chaser

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    This is really nice! I like it ^^
     
  3. Kingdom Glory Banned

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    Thank you, Rosey =3
    My friend loved it as well
     
  4. Rosey Chaser

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    Well why wouldnt they love it? Its really good!

    Better then I can do, lol. By far.
     
  5. Kingdom Glory Banned

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    Thank you ^^;;;
    I have others that i need to finish xDD
     
  6. Sabby Sleepy Panda Assassin

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    awwww what a cute song. great job bro! ^^
     
  7. Kingdom Glory Banned

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    Thank you, sis =3
    -hugs-
    ^w^
     
  8. Misty gimme kiss

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    It's pretty good, but you added some odd words just to get the others to rhyme with one another.
     
  9. Kingdom Glory Banned

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    Ya, I admit that I did.
    A lot of them fit though.
    Only sometimes, though.
    But I wrote it for a friend of mine.
     
  10. Misty gimme kiss

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    It was really only the word "trekkin'" that freaked me out.
     
  11. Kingdom Glory Banned

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    I had "wreckin'" there before xDD

    I put 27/7 by accident...
    DANGIT!
     
  12. Rosey Chaser

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    You should write more.

    Your good at them
     
  13. Kingdom Glory Banned

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    I have at least 10.
    But they're all unfinished.
     
  14. Rosey Chaser

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    Ahhh unfinished.

    I have a whole bunch of unfinished stuff.

    Do you have anymore finished ones?
     
  15. Kingdom Glory Banned

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    Not yet.
    I'm working on one for lookaheartless.
    I take requests, btw xDD
     
  16. oX Angel Xo Traverse Town Homebody

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    wow! i really like it! especially the ending...it even TELLS you its the ending lol jk but seriously, its great =)
     
  17. Kingdom Glory Banned

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    Thank you ^^
    It took me a while to finish off last night.
     
  18. W7F King's Apprentice

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    *Highlights text, and then right clicks. Points mouse at copy, and then I remember


    ... I quickly press Alt+F4 before I change my mind.*

    Meh, I'm kidding. I didn't actually do that, and I never take stuff without gving creds where its due. But, its worthy of being stolen. 'Twas that good. I really like-eed it. More plz?
     
  19. Kingdom Glory Banned

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    Thanks, man.
    I will keep on-a writing!
     
  20. Kelly Killz Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Aww.. I luffles this one. Its so good.
    - What he said.

    P.S.: I saw your other one too, but I can't remember if I commented. Incase I didn't, that one was awesome as well.