::..:;Flower to Flame;:..::

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  1. Mathias Jay beauty is in everything

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    Isn't it strange,
    How a bud can change,
    In such a way,
    It makes us want to fray.
    Then we change from Flower to Flame.

    I see the bliss,
    In all this mist,
    Because I know,
    How to show,
    That we change from Flower to Flame.
     
  2. Mathias Jay beauty is in everything

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    Thanks.

    The 'Flower to Flame' thing is sorta a metaphor for how someone can change from a nice person to someone hateful and hated. =/
     
  3. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    Good work, even when its short.

    it delivers a good message.

    and i liked it.
     
  4. Mathias Jay beauty is in everything

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    Thank you. ^^

    I don't take much liking to long poems.... but I'll try to make one longer next time.