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  1. nasirrich King's Apprentice

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    Now its time to finish your lines
    I am not claiming to be the best
    If you think so then I'm fine
    I only replied to guess
    What you could even say to me when its your time to shine

    I don't want to be someone who sells out on the shelves
    I do it since I enjoy fresh spits just being myself

    Now for the part where you say I trash talk but can't walk
    I'll push a paraplegic down glass infested asphalt
    Smack an amputee in their missing knee and uppercut them to say I brought
    You something you might really love
    Feed the prosthetic limb to a rabid dog

    It was barely any energy, but I put some work in
    You post so I post just because that's how threads work
    So if your thinking in that sense I guess you win
    I'm above learning and enhancement thanks to words that hurt not to be a jerk

    Ehhh now I'm just acting sadiddy
    I need to improve more for then I'm able to set my mind free
     
  2. Lauriam I hope I didn't keep you waiting...

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    Hey Nasirrich, please forget those things I said,
    Sometimes I don't think things through. Instead
    I end up saying things I never meant
    Anything hurtful was not my intent.

    I'm in this for the fun of it, just like you.
    lol, I know you didn't really talk trash too.
    I've been having fun with this, it's all part of the game.
    And I'm sure you'll agree, you feel the same.

    I never intended this rap battle to turn into debate.
    I just wanted to join in as you seemed to be doing pretty great.
    You've got some style, I dig your rhymes and lyrics.
    Hit me back, let's keep this going. Just know that I ain't meaning it.
     
  3. nasirrich King's Apprentice

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    Please just call me Nas spelt with a Z or S
    It wasn't a diss so don't think I'm trying to make more brain muscles flex
    All I did was reply since I was next
    Please forgive me for what I did was very reckless and yet

    I still feel the urge to lyrically kill, nah I'll take a chill pill its just my ill will might take into consideration what was done to test ones skill

    I'll be the first to say Marushi you're very dope
    Hopeful one day more than just our words can interlope...
    In others throats for they will boast on mastering in repeating on what we wrote
    I mean it too this isn't a joke

    A rare beauty that someone other than me lovin to do things very complex and lyrically
    Its just the reason I'm always battle ready see
    What I'll do is listen to all of who you try to create to intimidate me
    I'll just verbally, damn text murder and assault thee

    Not you just saying that's what I do and enjoy too, but stop when it involves members in the same crew although in a battle you do what you've trained to pursue rectifying the fact that It All Ends With You

    Please forgive me is all I ask
    You don't that sucks should've bought a glad bag

    Ok now for the little space I need to get freaky
    I feel so ill when I say very few are as filthy
    I'll rap while committing suicide in a booth taking you and the track with me
    Again not you Marushi
    Ending so whoever next can too do this track dirty
     
  4. Lauriam I hope I didn't keep you waiting...

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    Waited to give some other folks a chance to try and grab the spotlight
    But it seems again it's me who's coming back. In hindsight,
    we both did the same thing, neither of us meant a word.
    We were both just laying down the track, making ourselves heard.

    So, nice to meet you Nas, if you want, then you can call me Rushi.
    Or Sharumix, Maru, PlushChrome, it's all okay with me.
    I ain't mad, this was all just a misunderstanding.
    Now we're friends, so congratulations boy, you stuck the landing.

    As for one day more than rhyming, watch it, I don't play like that.
    But we do make a good tag team, and to you I must tip my hat.
    Maybe the World Begins with You, and together we could make a pact
    to expand our thinking and deliver music, never mind the fact
    that anything we say may not be what others want to hear.
    Just go with what we know and if they try to interfere,
    let 'em say what they will, let 'em gripe,' let 'em jeer.
    But we'll keep going, we'll be real, and never give in to the fear.

    I'm not sure how it would work, since we think so differently.
    You're the Lyrically Hitman and me, I'm just a straight up hippie.
    You rhyme to kill, I aim for peace, but I think we could make it work.
    But before we go any further, answer this: Picard or Kirk?

    Haha, I'm just kidding. I'll tell you what, man. This is fun.
    But we're taking up space, I hope we're not bothering anyone.
    If we are, please, let us know. If not, feel free to join the show.
    Just find your flow, we won't say no, get ready, now get set, and GO!
     
  5. nasirrich King's Apprentice

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    I guess my one day more line came off like a flirt
    Wanted it to seem like that so the scheme I was going with could work
    And just so you know I'm Picard all the way Kirk can kick dirt
    If you roll with Kirk I respect that and I'm not trying to hurt

    Now for a tag team we could rock it pretty well
    You are right I rhyme to send people to the depths of hell
    Finding it very fun to murder and stretch the curvature of how I fair the best dwell
    In on the fact when facing me they better be able to show and tell
    On why specific individuals claim their rhyming schemes are super swell

    I can be nice if you'd like
    I'll fit any style into each verse to show it'll be done with no hate in sight
    Picture me not using my words to spark fright
    Freeze frame it so you know I have no reason to show my true mite
    If you look closely within and into my eyes you'll be able to see the darkess place with a small fragment of light

    Well enough of that can't make this prolong sir
    Hit you in your esophagus so your words can't come out any stronger
    This isn't a love song so that kind of talk won't last any longer

    Now I wanna body people who claim I can't keep rippin
    I hope your family goes on a suicide mission giving you a ride with em
    So much for your human rights when you're gone that'll be all fiction
    It appears to me my enemies still need an attitude fixin
    Wait Marushi is about peace so me going in now I'm trippin
    Whomever is next be sure to go into this feelin like winnin

    Nope hang on let me just do this in a disorderly fashion
    I'm the wrong fellow you'd want to interact with
    You don't believe me watch as your head gets quickly detached
    Then have your bones showing how your body swayed like this and that and
    Have your body screaming to give it all back the instant it happened
    Call me a genie just don't compare me to a magician or Aladdin
    If I snap my fingers you'll go missing like a has been

    Anyone who attends your... Yo wait wait hold up hang on chill out don't do it...
     
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    This one's called A summers day
    A cool summer breeze comes rolling in from the east
    The leaves rustle As the busy streets Bustle
    These words replay in my head If only now i could have understood what you said
    These idea's about life are all a lie Sometimes I wonder why equations equal pie

    Life's too complicated these days Sometimes I wonder why people pay
    Is it wrong to want love? Or is it a lie from above?

    These questions are just answers in these silly games we play
    I think I'll drift back off for the rest of the day.[DOUBLEPOST=1380584616][/DOUBLEPOST]Alright I call this wolf pack
    From sun so bright
    To harvest moonlight
    Oh wont you awaken the beast tonight

    First come the fangs
    So sharp and mean
    Look into my eyes and watch them gleam

    This beast inside
    Has nothing to hide
    But now he feels someones by his side

    He's became the leader of the pack
    His dark soldiers only two feet back
    you've become the prey so beware of attack

    The hunt begins
    as the blood seeps in
    i hope you can make it to the very end

    Blood as red as roses drip from his teeth
    only to you shall he bequeath the pain
    inside that you shall receive

    your scent has sunk deep
    so shh boy dont make a peep
    the pack will strike while you're asleep
     
  7. Lauriam I hope I didn't keep you waiting...

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    Interesting lines, my friend.
    Definitely good to read.
    I must say, I liked the end,
    very chilling words indeed.
    :D
     
  8. KeybladeMasterJoe Merlin's Housekeeper

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    thank you :3 that means alot
     
  9. mindstorm787 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Not interrupt my rhyming friends,
    Sorry for my lateness, I'm cutting loose ends.
    I love the new friends, yet there are still some old,
    Like new fresh silver, and refreshing color gold.

    My RPs are busy, my school keeps me occupied,
    It's even a wonder that I've managed to keep
    My very mood bonafide.

    I kept watching, behind the blinds,
    Undetected by most, reading the signs.
    This thread was slow, and I stayed undefined.

    Good fortune soon came, new visitors arose,
    Like fresh leave in the spring,
    Like a red-bloodied rose.

    I must say, I'm interested,
    to hear your words.
    This thread seemed to be going for the birds. :P
     
  10. KeybladeMasterJoe Merlin's Housekeeper

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    I call this Run

    I saw you the other day
    Your face just as radiant as ever
    I had to keep myself at bay
    You're still so funny and clever

    That smile ran for miles
    My heart skipped a beat
    My love came out in piles
    That face made me find a seat

    Hard to believe time flies
    When I can't catch my breath
    Hard to believe love dies
    When I'm so close to death

    Today I'll run
    Even if i'm not at my best
    Even if it's only under the sun
    Tomorrow I'll rest

    One day we'll run together
    Because we know we're both broken
    Even In the worst of weather
    This love will always be my token

    So run free while we can
    This may be our best plan..
     
  11. Lauriam I hope I didn't keep you waiting...

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    I call this Glass Eyes.

    I’ve got so many emotions right now,
    I just don’t know where to begin.
    Just take it in,
    let it simmer.
    Sit and think and
    ponder over past things
    and future things,
    Things that move and go and never slow,
    it’s all a show.
    Time flies, white lies,
    memorize and synchronize
    Until you’ve learned to improvise
    and you smile to hide your tired eyes.
    The windows to your soul have seen too much,
    but you still can’t stop.
    You move on, you feel strong, you strike hard
    And fast until you simply drop.

    You constantly refocus your attentions to the next new thing
    to keep you stimulated.
    Refreshed and reinstated,
    the elation only lasts for so long
    and you begin again,
    Waiting with bated breath to find
    the next mach ten
    Striving for the impossible
    just for the thrill,
    always running on ‘cause you’re
    afraid to stand still
    And let the past catch up.
    You won’t even admit to yourself
    How scared you are of what you think you might see
    Turn around, face the music,
    Or you’ll never be free.

    Glass eyes follow me around
    Glass eyes follow me around
    Glass eyes follow me around
    Glass eyes follow me around

    I choose to watch the skies when I go outside,
    Because the streets are filled with holes
    While pop cans and cigarette butts
    Have turned the grass brown and the dirt pale gray
    The dirty gutter water from the last rain
    Smells like poverty
    And the children yell profanities
    While the parents curse the schools.
    But a fool’s hope in fool’s gold
    Keeps me walking.
    Boy, do I love the cold.
    When winter brings along the snow
    And the bells ring out familiar tunes
    Of happiness and good will t’ward men
    And the world is clean and can start again.

    The heat of the sun it makes you sweat
    But a clean slate signifies the end of a debt
    And how refreshing,
    You take a deep breath of fresh air
    And take the time to look around and really care.
    There’s just something about death
    That makes you think,
    There’s just something about breath
    That makes you blink.
    One single moment
    Can lead to years of hardships and loads of strife
    What you choose to do right now
    Determines the course of your entire life.

    Glass eyes follow me around
    (What I do, what I say, everyday)
    Glass eyes follow me around
    (Affects my future in a way that I could never say)
    Glass eyes follow me around
    (Tell me, what do they see?)
    Glass eyes follow me around
    (Am I only running from me?)

    Am I only running from me?
    Tell me, am I running from me?
    Am I only running from me?
    Tell me, am I running from me?

    These glass eyes have seen more than they like to admit
    All the arguments I’ve started, all the fires I’ve lit
    But I can’t run forever and I cannot escape
    Just turn around and face myself before it’s too late.
     
  12. KeybladeMasterJoe Merlin's Housekeeper

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    i like that, has a nice flow to it :D great job!!
     
  13. Lauriam I hope I didn't keep you waiting...

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    Thanks, I do think it turned out pretty good. :)
     
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    Glad to see life in my here
    And now I am very near
    But will i remain I do not know
    Since it is now your show.
     
  15. nasirrich King's Apprentice

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    When can it be that I am able to speak without adding the hint of misery?
    Its a mystery, but leaving the foolish ignorant is bliss you see
    Nothing said means no way of getting the response for a plea
    To stop, but you can't since you need more then a simple victory
    Knowing the outcome yet you still want more contact than just 3
    Voice, text and... Wait the third is me...?
    Talking in third person is confusing wouldn't you agree?
    You want me to let you in even though you aren't part of my destiny
    Tell you what I'm thinking is what you want in reality
    If this happen will I finally be set free?

    I can see my friends... turn Green with Envy
    (Lyrically I'm Untouchable, Uncrushable, to underestimate his craft you better be prepared to fight)
    I can see my friends... turn Green with Envy
    (This is just me messing around, could you picture me mad?)
    I can see my friends... turn Green with Envy
    ( Lyrical Hitman who could possibly rival)

    It's supposed to be about respect, but no one else wants to be apart of the set
    If money was involved then the attention would only be focused on the check
    Money is cool its just disregarding feelings from another individual is a major upset
    When you are in need of the same participation and get treated the same way hoping they are stuck deep in debt
    Owing something to everyone so you don't have to feel that sense of regret
    The reoccurring question comes into play what's next?

    I can see my friends... turn Green with Envy
    (Lyrically I'm Untouchable, Uncrushable, to underestimate his craft you better be prepared to fight)
    I can see my friends... turn Green with Envy
    (This is just me messing around, could you picture me mad?)
    I can see my friends... turn Green with Envy
    ( Lyrical Hitman who could possibly rival)
     
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    I return my home from it's resting place
    Hoping to see many a new face
    So read these words and claim your key
    To the place where we can all rhyme free
    There is no best or worst on this page
    For this is part of the enjoyment age
    Come forth golden oldies above Twenty three
    And all of youth much younger than me.

    Here i won't tolerate directed attacks of any kind
    But i welcome those who speak their mind
    Be you my friend or my foe
    You are welcome here so have a go
    The melody of the mind plays for us all
    And that is what will make this home stand tall
    Now i leave the mic here for the next voice
    Who it will be that is your choice.
     
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    Slipping, skulking, sneaking in,​
    The margin for error is a bit thin,​
    But I must emerge from my shell,​
    if I am ever to get well.​
    My ugly visage I do rear,​
    I hope I scare not those who are here.​
    Literature is great to read,​
    but can be difficult when creation is my need.​
    Acceptance I wish to find,​
    but I'll take anything you have for my kind.​
     
  18. Lauriam I hope I didn't keep you waiting...

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    Hello my friends, too long it's been
    Since I last chose to enter in.
    I long to say that I've been busy
    working, writing, getting dizzy
    running about, here and there
    with just no time to stop and share.
    I wish to say it, but it's not true,
    I have no excuse to give to you.
    I think perhaps I've now gone crazy
    I spent the whole week being lazy.
    In fact, I accomplished just one thing:
    I beat Lego LotR Return of the King.
    Hopefully I shall not again disappear.
    So, how you guys doing? How are things here?
     
  19. nasirrich King's Apprentice

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    I should have done this quick
    Like the current flowing through electric appliances
    Wanna test me hope you don't coil around this iron so please.. I insist
    We can do any form of battle you'd like, however I'd like to duel over wits
    Knowing the outcome I'll just have to call it quits
    Something may slip out so please stayed tuned and keep reading this

    No time to cause up a stir to get some fame
    To answer the question above I've just been doing work... I know that's lame
    None of what has been said is a lash out towards anyone so let's stay sane

    Yea homie you might have won the contest, but we all know you can't really wreck someone when having to free spit
    When it comes to poetry Oda and I are pen perks executives
    I'll cal you a ________
    I drew the line so you can insert the expletive
     
  20. Lauriam I hope I didn't keep you waiting...

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    Nas, battles are super fun!
    Like, a ton.
    It doesn't matter which one won
    but how the race is run.
    Get it all under way and before the day is done,
    we'll have made it to the setting sun.
    Taking off down the track at the sound of the gun,
    please excuse the pun, I got my phasers set on stun.

    But aside from the metaphors, I'm all out of tricks.
    My sticks and stones may break bones but that's it.
    I'll give it a shot, (heh, puns) but in a battle of wits
    a little bit of wordplay is about all that you'll get.
    And maybe some references to Princess Bride
    but that aside, I'll decide to come along for the ride.
    Roll Tide! But anyway, a battle sounds fine
    "When death is on the line," I hope victory will be mine.

    So come on, hit me with your best shot like a freight train
    I'll try to bring it on like spring time brings on the rain.
    Really, I don't see that I would stand to gain
    but under the strain, I think I'll come out safe and sane.
    And if I happen to rise up and you go down the drain
    with dirty gutter water, well, Shout can help you with the stain.
    I know, that sounded lame, but I'm against the grain.
    (More puns!) Now let's get on with it. TO THE PAIN!!!