How could you

The rage of you betraying me
Seem too much to bear
But knowing, I have see the real you my friend
Make the pain more bearable

You use to fill me with happiness
But now you just fill me with sorrow
Before I make you walk out of my life
There is just one thing I need to know

Why did you betray me so?
Why did you fill me up with rage?
Why did you have to make me feel this sorrow?

I feel like a bullet has gone though me heart
But knowing you will soon be gone
The pain doesn’t seem that bad

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Okay so I killed three birds with one stone here

We have betrayal for Aeon Sora
Rage for cloudfinalfantasy3
And emotional pain for Sora59

Hope you enjoyed it

ps. Yeah I know this is the worst day to post this, but what the heck

 

Lmfao.
Its really good. I'm guessing your second best after the sadness oine.

 

Thank you Axel, I think these are my best two, since I know all to well what they feel like

 

That was definitely one of your best. I could feel all the emotions as I read it.

 

Oh my god my heart broke into pieces when i read that. Seriously. It's exactly how i felt when.........can't tell. It's just AMAZING!!!!!! Oh almost cry... and now i'm actually trembling.

 

OMG I didn't mean it to breke hearts nor to make anyone cry, but it slows how great it is

 

It's ok the poem is amazing but everytime i read this.......gotta go..

 

Huh? go where, come on tell me

 

Nice i like it good work and i love my!!

 

Thanks, what do you mean I love my?