If I Had Wings

Okay this is my poem that I've written, so please review it and tell me you think!



If I had wings, then I could fly to the heavens
My dreams give me wings, and you should really see me fly
In my dreams I’m a pretty angel, not an ugly fourteen-year-old

If I had wings then I wouldn’t be here
I’d be in a perfect paradise
It would be so perfect that the rain is so soft when the droplets touch your skin
My wings would be golden white, with rays of sunshine coming from them

If I had wings, then I wouldn’t be me
I’d be someone else, and not the soft spoken me
Not the outgoing girl you all know
Not the bright girl, always searching for new knowledge
I’d be an angel, searching for the purest soul

If I had wings, then I could fly to the heavens
If I had wings, then I wouldn't be here
If I had wings, then I wouldn't be me
If I had wings, I would let them fly me around in my dreams
If I had wings then no one would pick on me
If I had wings

 

Nice!! Me likie likie. But my friend you need to put WHAT you posting for us to read. Like:
This is a poem I wrote when....or because of...

Get my point?