KH-Vids Royale

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Finally you have people actually doing something! Not making out or eating oreos >>

Anyway, nice chapter, Roxas! ^-^ The whole time I was like, "Dun let Rufus die! D:"

 

Since when did my opinion become so important? o.0

Amazing, Roxas. Simply amazing writing. I'm starting to get back into the pure intensity of the first KHVR; your descriptions are better than some published work I've read. I was starting to get sick to my stomach; I still am, a little bit. That's a sign of brilliant writing. AND it introduced Mark as Darkandroid... I officially love Mark now. Mark > DA I wonder how long he'll be able to keep up the charade? But yes, back to what I was saying before; just the little bits of humor, what with Lithium's dialogue and Mark finding food made it more enjoyable than the constant "ZOMG! ROFLMAO!" of the previous chapters.

Complaints for this chapter? ...none that warrent my pointing them out. Amazing.

 

Have you seen your opinions?
I've seen movie reviews that are shorter than yours. xD

They probably make Roxas all warm and fuzzy inside though.

 

Dang...

I almost hurled reading that part about Anniexo... X.x;

 

^-^ I've seen shorter, more intelligent movie reviews, though. xD

 

Lol, it's fine, that really did make me feel warm and fuzzy :).

 

Anniexo always wanted to shoot me.


But yay! Revenge feels good. Lol ^-^



Great chapter.

 

Just read the new chapter- it was amazing! That's been my fav. so far, because it was like a gamble sort of thing.. I didn't know if I was going to die or not. After the part where my hand was ripped off and I got shot at with more rapid bullets I thought "sh*t, I'm gonna be a pile a' mush on the floor', but I wasn't! ;D LMAO, beer bottle!

The part where we got Anniexo I wasn't expecting either. I thought she would've at least killed someone and got away or something, but I'm glad Rufus whacked her with that pick-axe and knocked that eyeball clean out! Go Rufus.. woo! =D

I'm glad my chums Rorik and Rufus are still alive =3 The three of us could've stolen the machine gun for ourselves rather than give it to Mark. It would be like, all three of us holding this bigazz gun and being all like, "eat sh*t, betch." *shoots* taking everyone down o:

Love it.

 

Its so great, Roxas.

Can't wait for the next chapter to come out.

=3

 

That would terrifying. I'm glad my character is on your team... o.0

 

Ohgahd, that part with Anniexo was gruesome. xP

Awesome chapter, team work prevails! I really thought Lithy would be a pile of mush too. xD

When 'DA' contacted them, I thought it would be the real DA.. like, the wild seven forcing him to herd his team mates to go back to him.. but it would be a trap and the wild seven would take them out, y'know? x3 But yay it was just Mark. Go team dark. ;o

 

Awesome chapter Roxas. I thought Lithium was gonna die for sure.

 

Great chapter Roxas.

Very gruesome indeed. I wonder how long Mark will keep up trying to pretend to be me. XD

 

Indeed, it was a very good chapter.

...I personally think that Team Light to frag some more people though.

 

Yeah, Team Light is getting pretty battered. I should fix them up with some kills.

 

This thread is not allowed to be on the second page!

*BUMP*

 

Isn't it time for the sticky since it is over page 30?

 

I don't think I will ever think of Sara the same way again... or any of the other members in this or KHVR1(Which I did read) for that matter! xD
Wow, this is awesome! I can't wait for more chapters!
I love how you fit KHIII: The Revival in as what Mark was reading.
If I was in a game like that, I'd either die from trauma before it even began, or be brutally murdered, unless I had a really good weapon that I liked like the machine gun. O.o I shudder at the thought.

One question: If this takes place in 1997-2002, how could KH-Vids.net be involved when Kingdom Hearts didn't even come out until 2002?

 

*Bumps thead before Jade does it*

Good chapter

 

Roxas, are u even looking at this thread? STICKY IT! I'm tired of looking everywhere for it.

Oh and CarbuncleGem, its because of a time paradox
EDIT: WTF ROXAS NOT MOD?????