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  1. Zeonark Kingdom Keeper

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    WARNING: Spoilers and FAKE spoilers ahead.


    Alright Guys :P This is my first Fanfic here so don't hate me XD

    This isn't my first Fanfic, The last ones failed. This isn't my best....nor is it my worst.
    This is AFTER Kingdom Hearts 2, So it's a alternate universe of KH3.
    Also Xion's personality is a guess, dun kill me.

    Here it is, Credit to Axelkh765 for some of this <3 She plans to make this a RP. This will star Organization XII and Xion as well, The three main characters are Xion, Roxas, and Axel. This will move around about every game except Coded :P

    This is the first chapter.

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    Proluge (Contained in Spoiler because I did bad on it XD)
    Organization XII....A Group of nobodies who want to become whole. Their leader Xemnas is a nobody of a enemy three heroes had in the past. The Keyblade master, Sora. He went on a journey to find his friends; Riku and Kairi. Sora helped and teamed up with Donald and Goofy to find King Mickey. Due to certain Events Riku and The King were sealed in kingdom Hearts.

    Sora later traveled to Castle Oblivion and had his memories rewriten later. He was then in the end put to sleep by Namine to fix his memories. During his sleeping year a nobody named "Roxas" was born and entered into the organization. He had two people who were closest to him. Xion and Axel. More things led up to another which led to Xion disappearing. Roxas was captured by DiZ and Riku and he was put in a Digital Twlight Town by them.

    Roxas eventually remembered everything that happened and reawakened Sora. Sora continued his journey to find Riku and the King defeating the organization on the way. Sora reached a area which a member confronted him wielding "Oblivion" as they engauged in battle. Sora won and the member was revealed as Roxas. Sora later defeated Xemnas along with Riku and got back to the islands as he was searching for. He obtained a letter...but no...it was something horrible...

    The Letter: (Fake Spoilers.)

    "Sora! This is King Mickey! I'm glad you made it back safely to your home. But something has come up thus I need your help again. This something is...well...I can't explain it into a letter but a certain someone made a project which indeed made all our efforts go to waste. Including his." - King Mickey


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    Chapter 1: The Family that is XIV
    The unknown tapped Data.


    In Hollow Bastion, everything thing was peaceful. Except in the Heartless Manufactory where a figure with a blackish like Keyblade came up. He pointed the Keyblade in the air as a Keyhole appeared and a beam shot out unlocking the keyhole. 14 Names appeared and silver like creatures flew out from the open keyhole as a door appeared. He inserted X in all the names and pushed the names towards the doors as the figure disappeared.

    In a room with fourteen chairs, that eleven figures appeared in that room. "Hey...Aren't we...dead?" One asked "We are not dead. Rather, we were given a second chance." Another stated "That's no fun if someone had to do it for us." A female voice responded as they all unhooded themselfs. Xemnas, Xigbar, Xaldin, Vexen, Lexaeus, Zexion, Saix, Demyx, Luxord, Marluxia, and Larxene were the eleven figures. They all teleported to their chairs "So where are the other two?" Marluxia asked towards Xemnas. "They must have been reborn elsewhere." He replied.

    In Twilight Town, the sun's orange glow meant only one thing...sunset. The day had been very tranquill. Kids played in the Market Street. Adults worked in the Tram Common, and Three teenagers hung out in "The Secret Spot". Three people were at the roof of the Train station, our three heroes. Roxas, Axel, and Xion. "...So, How do ya think we got back?" Axel asked eating some ice cream they all had. "Maybe Xemnas did it?" Xion asked them both "Remember, He was defeated too." Roxas replied to Xion. "Well then Roxas, who could have done it?" Axel asked waiting for Roxas to make up some story "H-Hey! Why are you looking at me?" Roxas asked "Come on! You said Xemnas was defeated so you must know!" Axel said to him. "Come on Axel, Cut it out." Xion teased as she started laughing. "Remember you two? We all met on the day I got my name..." Roxas told them as a tear came to his eye "Hey! Don't start crying on us!" Axel said as he swiped Roxas' Ice cream "Give me that!" Roxas replied as they both started to fight over the ice cream "You two better watch it befor-" , "A-ah...Ahh!" Roxas yelled as he started falling down. "Roxas!" Axel yelled but something caught him. "Are ya alright?" Hayner asked helping Roxas up "Thanks Hayner." , "...I'm sorry but I don't think we met, How do you know me?" Roxas paused and looked down "I forgot, I only knew him in the digital Town..." He thought in sadness.

    During that time, Sora and his friends were on Destiny Islands still worried about the letter. "Hey Sora, Stop looking like a sap worrying. The King and us will beat whatever is coming out." Riku told Sora but he still looked worried. "...Hey...Are you gonna show that face to Kairi?" , "Of course not!" Riku laughed as he got a reaction from Sora "Chin up or everyone's going to laugh at you." Riku said to Sora and they got their old toy swords. "How about it? For old times sake?" Riku asked "Sure! But I'm gonna win again!" , "Are not!" , "Are too!" They argued and fought.

    In Space Paranoids Tron was looking over data. "W-Wh-What is that?" He stammered falling to the ground "I-I Must alert everyone!" He paniced getting up and running to another computer.

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    Some stuff to notice:

    The Organization will go by XIV but will still be known as XIII. Reasons later :P
    The Organization are the GOOD guys this time, The Good guys like Sora are Neutral.
    The story as you should know will go around Roxas, Xion, and Axel. Mainly Roxas.
    Some personalities will be altered a bit.
    This is a Comedy/Romance/Action story, for all of you who will say "NOT NUFF ACTION, U SUK."
    I'll post more when I get to think of them :P
    Also; Be creative! Get some BGM to listen to while reading! <3
    Excuse my horrible grammar.
    Xion will be known as "The Forgotten Key"
    Some stuff will relate to the game.
    Sometimes, a certain someone will get human illnesses X3
    Roxas' New name is "Lover Boy"
    Terra has a cocky personality.
    Ven is almost TOO similar to Roxas :P
    Aqua's personality is similar to Xion.

    Credit to Axelkh765 and I'm making you Co-Author(SP?) to get on your nerves >:P

    CnC? No harshness please, I'm bad at writing.

    Chapter 2: Located on Page 2
    Chapter 3: Located on Page 3
    Chapter 4: Located on Page 4
    Chapter 5: Located on Page 5
    Chapter 6: Located on Page 6
    Chapter 7: Located on Page 7
    Chapter 8: Located on Page 8
    Chapter 9: Located on Page 8 - FAVORITE! For action. <3
    Chapter 10: Located on Page 9
    Chapter 11: Located on Page 10 - current


    Fillers:

    Chapter Filler 1: Located on Page 10 - FAVORITE! For Comedy <3
     
  2. Sumi suicidé

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    Nice Job man! You're one awesome writer!!
     
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    Thanks for crediting me and making me co-author...we rock!
     
  4. Zeonark Kingdom Keeper

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    Thanks :P I didn't think it'd be awesome.

    Your welcome <3 Good luck with your Fanfic Lol.
     
  5. Vexen_Is_God Gummi Ship Junkie

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    NOT ENOUGH ACTION!!1!1!!!!1!one









    Just kidding. Great start. and i envy how godly you write dialogues I saw Vexen's name in there so I'm excited already. I hope he will make more appearances in this fic.
     
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    I like the story so far, and I take some of your advice when I read your story.
     
  7. Zeonark Kingdom Keeper

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    Thanks for the good Feedback :P I'll add some more stuff to notice later.

    This chapter, All the orgy are basta*ds DX

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    The Family that is XIV part 2
    The Moron and Lover Boy


    Note: Comedy and bashing.

    Axel and Xion quickly appeared and Hayner jumped back "Hey You wanna Fig-" , "You saw nothing, Got it Memorized?" Axel quickly grabbed Roxas and they all disappeared. Pence ran up to Hayner "Dude come on! They're selling free ice cream!" He spoke as Hayner nodded after a few seconds as they both left. Roxas, and company appeared inside the castle of The world that never was "Something hit you in the head?" Xion asked Roxas "...No...It's just..." Roxas couldn't make out anything over sadness so Axel smiled as put his arm around his shoulder "Cheer up! Maybe you'll get a date lover boy!" , "W-Wait a minute! What?!" Roxas asked in utter confusion "Huh?" Xion asked also confused "Um, Go meet up with Xemnas and the others." Axel stated as Xion nodded and disappeared. "What the hell was that for Axel?!" Roxas asked in anger. "It was a joke! I didn't know you'd get so angry lover boy!" , "Stop that!" Axel began to tease Roxas as Demyx came up "Hey guys! Good to be back huh?" He commented on his rebirth "Yeah, But Roxas is taking it too well, Right lover boy?" , "I told you to shut up!" They began aruging again. "Wait, Who does he like?" , "Who knows? Could be Xion." , "Shut up!" Roxas was actually too ticked off "Roxas is in love! Aw. I should write a song!" Demyx started teasing "Shut up!" Roxas said to Demyx waving his arms up and down in a "Cut it out!" expression.

    "Xemnas I think they're aruging..." Luxord spoke in the pillar room "Then allow me to research and come back with results on their childish behavior.' Vexen said disappearing and appearing in a spot in which they could not notice. "Men Agruing is almost too funny." Larxene mocked as she started laughing "...Ya know I noticed." Xigbar began "We're startin' to be a family, ya know?" He finished as most of the members there nodded, even Xemnas in agreement. "I am NOT in love!" Roxas yelled in anger "Calm it Lover boy." Axel joked some more as him and Demyx laughed. "What nonsense is running through each of your thick skulls?" Vexen insulted appearing in front of them "Hey Vexy! Me and Axel wer-" , "Excuse me, Vexy? Have a little respect now." , "Sorry Vexen, we're playing with lover boy." They all conversated as Roxas started to walk away.

    He needed a break to let off some steam so he appeared in the lab of Twilight Town "...I'm not a lover boy..." Roxas said a bit mad still as he kept walking. "This is where me and Axel fought when I got my memories back." Roxas thought. "I'M SO FLATTERED!" Axel shouted in a Flashback as a ring of fire appeared "But you're too late!" He added but Roxas drew Oathkeeper and Oblivion "Two?!" Axel asked summoning his weapons as a battle begun as the flashback ended.

    Leon and Yuffie were walking over to Ansem's study to check up on everything there as Yuffie looked through papers. "Everything is boring in these things...Hey look!" Yuffie discovered as Leon rushed over. It was a picture of a Bronzish Goldish like keyblade without a Keychain "What in the world could that be?" Leon asked as they both heard beeping from the computer. Leon rushed over "....Alert everyone in Hollow Bastion!" , "What? But wh-" , "JUST DO IT!" Leon was in panic as he kept reading and came across the words "We shall return to destroy everything, Including those ignorant nobodies!" Something read as Leon kept reading in panic.

    In the room where nothings gather... "Roxas left? Why?" Xion asked a bit worried "Some stupid joke Axel played." Larxene replied "Roxas can't take a joke, so stupid." , "He isn't stupid!" Xion quickly defended Roxas "I'm sorry, Did I strike a nerve?" Larxene teased at her feelings "Don't start insulting people." Zexion quickly remarked as Roxas appeared "It's Lover boy!" Axel cheered "....Lover what?" Xion asked still confused. "Don't you know? Roxas lo-" Roxas quickly covered Axel's mouth "Shut up and quit makin' stuff up!" Roxas said in his ear. "These ignorant children were teasing Roxas by calling him "Lover boy" in which even I am confused." Vexen explained as Saix was getting angrier by the second with everyone speaking. They kept talking and talking untill he snapped. "SHUT UP!" Saix yelled as every single member; Including even Xemnas stopped to look at him. "....Flip out much?" Axel mocked as everyone started laughing at Saix, he wasn't fased as he disappeared.

    In a world where only Sora has been once, The Sunset Horizons. A man picked up a helemet "Well. I guess I have to help out." He said as everything faded black.

    Master.....

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    Credit to Axel too.

    Yeah, Yeah, Fork you guys. Roxas and Xion didn't need that >_>

    CnC.
     
  8. ♥ Momo ♥ Traverse Town Homebody

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    "Then allow me to research then come back with results on their childish behavior"
    ROFL!~ I love your fanfic <333
     
  9. Vexen_Is_God Gummi Ship Junkie

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    VEXY! <3

    Love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love... (x's infinity + 1).

    This story is amusing quite frankly. So much personality going on. Continue!
     
  10. Vexen_Is_God Gummi Ship Junkie

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    I am now going to reserve the use of the name LoverBoy, when directed from me to someone, solely for Roxas, even in the clean fact that I barely know the guy. But once I get to know him, LoverBoy he shall be donned.
     
  11. Zeonark Kingdom Keeper

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    Wow.

    You guys sure love lover boy don't you? XD

    I'll post number three if I get bored or tomorrow.
     
  12. Zeonark Kingdom Keeper

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    I hope you people are happy >:| I lost 21 hours of sleep, Would've been 20 if you guys didn't love me so much XD

    This is is just for Vexen :P

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    Chapter 3: The Giants of The Heartless and The Nobodies.
    This is my Freezing pride! Dark Ice!


    The Organization were still chatting with one another still laughing at Roxas, He was still ticked off. Xemnas disappeared without any noticing. "Alright Lover boy, That's your nickname! Got it memorized?" , "No! I don't got it memorized Axel!" They continued to talk as Lexaeus looked at Zexion "Should we be going?" He asked Zexion as he nodded and they both disappeared. Everyone was still laughing....Untill a huge explosion started to topple the castle! "W-What's happening?" Axel asked falling to the ground with the other members "It's from outside!" Marluxia quickly replied. Roxas acted without thinking as he summoned Oathkeeper and began running outside. "Roxas!" Xion cried out following him. "About time this got fun!" Axel commented as he jumped up and ran outside. Vexen disappeared before any noticed.

    Thousands...no....Millions of Twilight Thorns and Darksides was rampaging into the castle destroying every lesser nobody in the way. Roxas slashed one in half. "How can it be this many? Don't we have control of Twilight Thorn atleast?!" Roxas asked getting swept up and punched. Axel burned two of them with his Chakrams. "We'll just burn them all baby!" Axel said as he threw them at more. Xion summoned "Fatal Crest" and slashed two Darksides in half. "There's too many I ca- Ah!" Xion screamed as a Darkside and a Twilight Thorn got hold of her. "Xion!" They both yelled as Axel also got caught by one of each "Axel!" Roxas yelled as both Darksides placed them in the empty void of their space for a heart.

    All the Darksides went insane destroying everything. Roxas was getting thrown around as they all kept hitting him back and forth. Roxas was then trapped into the air. "Please....No more...." He begged as his vision started leaving him. "Come now you imbecile! Will you give up all that easily? All of you!" A voice shouted as Vexen stood on the Memory Skyscraper smiling. "Vexen?" Roxas asked looking up. "You Imbeciles!" He yelled slamming his shield into the ground summoning ice needles to hit the Darksides and Twilight Thorns. Roxas broke free from the seal and attacked their heads in the air. "At this rate we will get nowhere! I need more data!" Vexen ranted. A lock-on like objection appeared under Roxas without him noticing; A Replica of Roxas was created and he began the attack "Ragnork" on the lower body parts. "Desperation Move!" Roxas said creating the beams of light around him as he hovered in the middle blasting little orbs of energy at the enemies. The Roxas Replica continously slashed in a X formation on the legs of the enemies. More and more arose attacking them and eventually the replica was destroyed. "Vexen!" Roxas yelled worried of what will happen next. "...We have to end this, I can't overload data." Vexen thought as he held up his shield. "Come to me! Ice Blade!" He spoke as a Ice blade appeared but with a empty shape similar to a key in it. "Hmm...Interesting. Roxas! The Oblivion please!" Vexen called out as Roxas slid Oblivion into the empty slot and the Ice turned Black. "This is my Freezing Pride you incompetent fools!" , "Oblivion Of Ice!" They shouted as the blade extended long enough to slash every enemy and they did so together. Axel and Xion were released and fell on the ground.

    "Man....Xemnas is going to kill us..." Roxas said a bit worried about the damage. "Doesn't matter, that was quite excellent. Even for the 13th." Vexen praised as he walked back into the castle and noticed that they all were also fighting. "You too?" Demyx asked holding his sitar. "Xion! Axel! Are you alright?" , "Don't worry lover boy...We're fine." Axel replied to Roxas' worrying and Roxas hit him in the head "Stop calling me that!" He yelled as Xion got up. "Since when could you summon Fatal Crest?" Roxas asked still surpised. "I-I meant to tell you sooner." Xion stammered as Axel looked at them both "....Lover boy." , "Alright that's it!" Roxas started chasing Axel around the area as Xion giggled at their playing.

    In Sunset Horizon. The man summoned a Keyblade with something similar to data surrounding his hand. "It's on!" He yelled charging at many blue like creatures with "Sonic Blade" without stopping.

    "It's him I know it!"

    .....Xehanort

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    To all who can't find out the man: You're a moron, Seriously.
    Xion wielding Fatal Crest will be explained later so no "Y SE HULDIN FATAL CREST DUMASS?"

    Credit to Axel for flaw found >_> I'll post later tomorrow or later.
    Next one features why Leon went insane :P
     
  13. Vexen_Is_God Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Oh my god. I am going through spasms. Vexen + action = elicits extreeme fangirl mode from me. Fangirl XTreme Mode Initialized. SQUEAL!

    You are GOD!!11111one....oh wait, you can't be God cause Vexen is....You are JESUS!!!1!one!!

    Okay, you go break now. Don't make me have to tuck you in....Loverboy. Haha.

    EDIT: I'm featuring this fic in my sig for awhile. Okay?
     
  14. Zeonark Kingdom Keeper

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    Thank ya XD

    Just woke up lol.

    XD Glad you like it. I knew this'd get you excited.

    Go ahead and feature it, I didn't know it was epic win XD

    Thanks guys, I'll write the fourth chapter later.


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    Everyone. This is my failed attempt at a FF fight XD Dun hate me.

    I thought the Chapter title was pretty cool. What do you guys think?

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    Chapter 4:
    Cloud vs Sephiroth! The "Project"
    No Light, No Dark, No Twilight


    In a realm that was different from most...A Realm of Light and Darkness. The Twilight Realm; Two beings were clashing with blades as no one ever did before. Not one let down as blade strikes were continously heard...Again....and Again. The Two beings have been fighting for a period of time. Their names; Cloud and Sephiroth. Cloud is a SOLDIER who possibly shared a huge amount of hatred for Sephiroth for their past. Sephiroth is a Project and the strongest SOLDIER alive. His goal is to rule the world. They both have had constant fights in the past, strong connections. They hated each other more than anything.

    (At this point you can play One Winged Angel-Advent Children version.)
    Sephiroth had began to break through Cloud's Buster Sword as he performed his darker version of "Omnislash" and Cloud got slashed by it. "Gah! Where'd you learn that?" Cloud asked charging at him and Sephiroth quickly reacted blocking all his shots. "Watching you do it so many times and coming back to see it. That's how." Sephiroth calmly replied slashing Cloud in his shoulder as Cloud slashed Sephiroth in the shoulder. Blood only came from Cloud and barely any came from Sephiroth "That better not be your best. I'm disappointed." Sephiroth stated as he charged at Cloud. Cloud jumped up and blue lightning went around him. He performed his Omnislash as Sephiroth flew back and got up without warning as he started flying at Cloud. Their swords kept clashing like before as they both keep going higher, higher, and higher into the sky. Sephiroth stabbed Cloud in his side as then he slammed him into the ground and summoned huge pillars of fire to burn him. Cloud screamed in pain as blood flew into the air. Sephiroth jumped back as he ran at Cloud to finish him but Cloud blocked his attack. He slashed Sephiroth in his side and did his "Multiple" Style of Omnislash. Sephiroth fell into the ground Cloud smashed his sword into the crater Sephiroth made but Sephiroth had a grip on his sword. "Quit...Blocking me!" Cloud yelled as he started clashing with him but he was floating above him as Sephiroth was slashing still in the ground. "It's not that easy. You should know that." , "-More than anyone. Cloud." Cloud finished Sephiroth's sentence as he slammed his sword into the ground making a Shockwave. Sephiroth easily dodged it and slashed Cloud in the other shoulder as he got down on his knee. "Darn you Sephiroth!" Cloud said slowly getting back up.

    "Hello? Yes, May I speak with the King? He's on his way to Hollow Bastion? Alright, Thank you miss." Leon said on the phone with Queen Minnie as he hung it up. "Looks like he was coming already. Either he can read my mind or he found out." Leon added to himself still near the computer in Ansem's study. "Tron! Opened any more files?" Leon asked to the computer. "No sir. The passwords are quite hard to figure out." , "Did you try hacking?" , "Yes sir. It failed. It's quite protected, What shall I do?" They spoke to one another. Leon stood there. "Keep trying at that password. We need info." He finally replied as someone knocked on the door. "About time." He scoffed as he opened the door and bowed. "Hello, Your highness." , "Now now, No time for that. I gotta talk to you about somethin'!" Mickey sound panicked as Leon got up and they both walked towards the Heartless Manufactory. They saw nobodies pouring out of a door but they didn't attack them. "Alright Leon. I assume you read the data?" , "Yep. I was pretty panicked. What's happening?" They spoke.

    (You can play Cavern of Rememberance here.)
    "About eleven years ago, A war broke out between five keyblade masters. Two of them controlled creatures called "Unbirth". During this battle, Three knights stepped forward. Each with a Keyblade themselfs. One of those two who controlled the unbirths name was Master Xehanort." , "Master Who?!" , "Wait, Let me finish. He was also trying to open up or create "Kingdom Hearts" but a blue one appeared in the sky. At this time I was the young Apprentice of Yen Sid. The Three knights were Terra, Ven, and Aqua...But an experiment happened during this battle. It had the ability to bring almost anything back to life." Mickey completely explained the events of the first Kingdom Hearts and the story of the Three knights including the project. Leon was shocked that he could not speak for the moment. "S-So...That means..." He tried to speak. "It is very well possible not only them, but the Organization could be alive as well." He told Leon.

    (Start back up One winged angel from the beginning :P)
    Cloud and Sephiroth eventually moved so fast that they were both in blurs clashing with swords. Cloud got slashed in the rib as he flew into the ground. Before Sephiroth could kill him, a black weapon hit Sephiroth's Masamune. "So you're Sephiroth? I thought I heard fighting in here. Aw well, Let's see if you can live up to your Reputation!" A voice yelled as the Weapon disappeared into the figure's hand and his hood flew down revealing Roxas.

    To Be continued....

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    A few notes:

    Sephiroth is using Omnislash from the "KH2" Game.
    Cloud's first Omnislash is him floating in the air and dashing, second was Advent.
    I'm not up to date with FF so if Cloud knew Sephiroth could use Omnislash, My bad.

    Roxas is insane. How he got there? How'd they get to "Twilight Realm"? As usual....Will be explained later :P

    Cnc? No harshies <3
     
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    Oh I love action! This one had blood in it, too. <3

    Funny. I used to have a friend named Sephiroth back in juniour high school. Haha. I used to name my video game heros after him much back when we played RPGs together.

    Looks like the plot is thickening! I can't wait for more.
     
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    BLOOOOOOOD <3

    No wai, Seriously? XD Lol.

    Thanks, Tryin' my best.
     
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    Nice! Love the incorporation of music ^_^
    Good Choice!
     
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    I see one spelling error on chapter 4 but that's pretty much it.
     
  19. Zeonark Kingdom Keeper

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    Tank u <3 I just happen to like Advent Children OWA.

    Where? I don't see one...then again my eyes are bad XD Mind pointing it out?
     
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    "Themselfs", that is the one I see, it should be "Themselves". That's what I see.
     
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