The cold rain falling Slowly falls down on my face Such a nice feeling Butterfly's wings flap And color the daytime sky A colorful Earth (Ok this one wasn't too great :/) The sun's blazing rays Fall upon the great blue Earth Promising good things (Neither wasthis one) Will add more later.
I really like the first one. The seconf one I had to think about, and the third one wasen't that bad. Keep it up. :] Im not much of a hiku person even tho I know it's structure.. I was never able to actually form one.. .__.
