Love

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  1. kingdom_hearts_soras_girl Destiny Islands Resident

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    Love.
    What is it?
    Is it beauty?
    Is it the reason for living?
    Or is it something different?
    Like death and regret.
    Love is everywhere.
    Love is no where.
    Love is colorful.
    Love is plain.
    Love is life.
    Love is death.
    Love.
    The reason I wake up in the morning.
    The reason I go to bed every night.
    The reason why I don't care what others say.
    The reason why I hate my life.
    The reason why I hate you.
    The reason why I hate myself.
    Love is the reason for my problems.
    My depression.
    My anxiety.
    My ADHD.
    My thoughts of suicide.
    But sometimes, Love is the reason why I’m happy.
    The reason why I don’t kill myself.
    The reason why I’m still alive.
    The reason why I do everything to get to you.
    Love is why I exist.
    Love is why I see the real you.
    Love.
    Love is why I have a soul.
    Love is everything.
     
  2. Jin うごかないで

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    Some didn't make much sense , but i won't criticise , i think it was ok , sorta depressing but not my style , did you write this to let out some feelings or something??
     
  3. kingdom_hearts_soras_girl Destiny Islands Resident

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    To be honest, I had no reason for writing this. But I had been wanting to start writing poetry again and this is what happened. The whole thing about it being about love is because it's a common thing for me to write, draw, and fantasize about. And poetry isn't always supposed to make sense. Just as long as it makes you either feel a certain emotion or if it gives the reader a message, it can be amazing. Well, at least I think that's what poetry's about.
     
  4. Jin うごかないで

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    i never really understood poetry...i could never do poetry either , i'm not sure why , it's just , not my thing i guess , but you're right , it doesn't matter if it doesn't make sense, as long as it makes the reader feel emotion and give out a message.
     
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    I really like this, because it's so true. Love is the root of everything and I think this was well written. Well done.
     
  6. Bushy "Don't think. Imagine!"

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    I have to agree with Enzy.
    Love is a hard emotion to capture and explain, it's impossible in some ways.
    But you did a brilliant job of doing so, and making the reader feel the words and emotions just jump out at them.
    Well done. :)
     
  7. Korosu Kingdom Keeper

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    N'awr, I really like it. Like the post above said Love is hard emotion to describe and capture. Well done (: I'd like to see more poems like this I guess.