Lulz. Some lyrics I made like 2 month's ago.

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Inasuma, Feb 15, 2007.

  1. Inasuma "pumpkin"

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    It's here again for the last time
    But by far we were recovered stars on a sublime
    It's not quite time yet but we cry for a love scene
    So come back again and viva la bam my fellow kids
    But cover your eyes so it can't again be seen

    So c'mon
    This is nothing but a radio show
    Crave the next song my friends
    But would you see the smiles

    Now take this all back to the beginning
    We don't need a new outlining
    Who the **** cares but the police
    Take yourself back to the place you came
    For now I see the error in your conceit

    So c'mon
    This is nothing but a radio show
    Crave the next song my friends
    But would you see the smiles

    Run and hide
    Take yourself back
    Return the scars I gave you
    Make yourself realize
    This isn't your time

    The music is tuning out
    your face is leaving us once more
    can you feel it
    that's our life again


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    Just want some opinions from you guys.

    (Btw, this is the only song I ever wrote for my band. . .and I'm happy. >.>; )
     
  2. cloudfinalfantasy3 Twilight Town Denizen

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    Nice song i like it.
     
  3. Shadow Banned

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    I think you have good potential to be a songwriter, Darky

    Methinks this is a great song.
     
  4. Inasuma "pumpkin"

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    Lol thanks.

    This took like 15 minutes to write, too. xDDDD