Lyrics for a song/What Makes Me Your Man?

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  1. king_mickey rule Destiny Islands Resident

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    What makes me your man?

    Everytime I look into the mirror
    I ask myself what you see in me
    But when I look at you and see
    My own reflection in those eyes of yours
    I know for sure our relationship has ran the right course

    But always I keep wondering

    Is it the laughs we shared in the past?
    Is it the smile on my face every time we meet that lasts?
    What makes me different from any guy on the street?
    What makes me yours?
    What makes me yours?

    When I’m lying awake for hours in my bed
    All the music’s been listened to, all the books have been read
    And I stopped counting the thousands of sheep inside of my head
    You’re probably the missing piece I need
    To put this puzzled heart fast asleep

    ‘Cause every night I'm wondering

    Is it the laughs we shared in the past?
    Is it the smile on my face every time we meet that lasts?
    What makes me different from any guy on the street?
    What makes me yours?
    What makes me yours?

    Oh my love, on this moonlit night
    Oh my love, please, hold me tight
    ‘Cause when our time has come to go our own way
    I want to remember this as the day I was yours

    So why waste time in wondering

    Is it the laughs we shared in the past?
    Is it the smile on my face every time we meet that lasts?
    What makes me different from any guy on the street?
    What makes me your…

    Man?

    What makes me your man?

    What makes me your man?

    What makes me your man?
     
  2. Technic☆Kitty Hmm

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    Pretty good, I can see the formatting is correct for a song. I think it flowed nicely and you did a great job. Keep up the great work ^_^
     
  3. Daxa~ #stalker

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    Oh that was lovely my dear.
    It really had a sense of rythem to it,and as Night said,it flowed very nicely.
    The words aswell of course were beautiful.
    Great work hun <3
     
  4. nasirrich King's Apprentice

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    Nice one Micky that is very good. You just keep getting better ^,^