My fainted smile...

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  1. Mr. Van Whippy ♥ Biscuits and cookies

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    Well for the past few days i haven't been in a really good mood. I don't know how i came up with this thing, call it poem if you like or anything else, it just poped in my mind while......ehm..anyway just say if you like it or not. Though i don't actually care cause i don't write poems only draw like a maniac. Anyway here it is:

    My fainted smile

    My smile has faint
    and now i'm dead
    my heart has been broken
    and this is the end
    wherever i look i see only pain
    my dreams have been scattered
    now running away

    My smile has faint
    my hope it's now dead
    i cannot survive
    and this is the end
    alone i will fly
    away from my dreams
    my smile has faint
    now this is the end.
     
  2. FUZZY SWEATER Hollow Bastion Committee

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    * claps *
    very good:D
    your smile is faint, yet very pretty
     
  3. Ratchet Bah weep graaagnah wheep ni ni bong!

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    That is so sad. i hope that things are better for you soon. A lovely poem.
     
  4. Mr. Van Whippy ♥ Biscuits and cookies

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    Thank you. I do hope the same. And thank you Darksmile13.