~*My poems~*

Well I love to write poems and short stories and so on but ill be posting my poems here! Commet if you wish but please note i already know i have grammer problems so im working on it!


My heart cries out in pain
The one I love has forgotten my name
He has found another in his life
But why cant I do the same?
He says he loves me
But I know its a lie
I just stay so I dont break out and cry
In my heart you will always be mine
But I know in your heart I have died....

The moon light is bright
I stare with wonder what you are doing
Are you thinking of me?
Or are you sleeping tightly
Or are you looking at the same moon I am?
I wonder so much about you
I wonder if you ever wonder of me
I close my window and go to bed
I say my prayers then I said
"I wonder what you are doing"

Im sitting alone under a tree
Looking at the leafs on the tree's sway back and forth
I hear the birds cherping
People weezing after a run
Seeing a dog flop on the ground as the family has fun
I lay back on the grass looking at the sky
falling asleep as I listen to the children run by

 

Let me tell you a story
About a girl and her family...
Who go around saying their daughter is sassy
She looks at her parents and turns her back swiftly
She is not happy with her life
She is not happy for who she is
she is not the favorite in her family
But sadly her older brother is
She is a young girl
12 to be exact
Her family hates her
treats her like crap
lives with insane people
But yet is able to take their crap
three years later
A baby was born in the family
The baby its the star
The brother is the is still favored by far
While the 14 year old girl is unloved by all
The family losses intrest in takeing care of the 3 month old baby
but yet she is still the star
The 12 year old girl is now the mother
Yet they tell the baby she is just a bother
Three years past
The girl is now 14 as you know
The baby is now three
The girl still cares for her baiths her feeds and rasies her
People tell the girl she is more worthless than ever befor
That she will never meet up to her brothers stantards
She is told a 3 year old baby can do better than her
The girl has lost hope but still does what she is told
There is only one glimmer of light
The only two people her give her hope
This girl believe's in a god
Believe's he will help her
He has sent her a boy
A boy who thinks she is the world
He loves her
She loves him
Yet...He cant even stop the pain she feels
The family has pushed her to far
The girl has now lost hope by far
A dark night hits
its cold the winds howl
She locks her bedroom doors
Closes her curtins
And turns out the light
The TV light shines now
But there is no sound
She hears her family's voices
listing to all the words they say
"I hate you your life is nothing but a game youll never make it your a discerase"
She looks at the knife that is now infront of her
She lusts to pick it up
She then thinks of her knight
The boy who she thought was her light
"I love you my angel"
She hears him say
"You live to far...You cant get in my way. They hate me dont you see
So please just let me be"
She thought of him again at that last moment
A tear leaves her eye
The knife looks at her
Hated now forms in the girls eyes
"I hate you all. I doubt youll ever care!"
She thought about hurting the others
But what good will that do?
If she does her family will just look down on her more
Her thoughts change
The knife is now to her wrist
"I'll be at peace will myself....I know this is a risk"
She sighed one moment
Then cut the next
"Why isnt it enough to kill myself?"
She bleeds but then looks to her left
Her knight stood next to her
She looked at him
She then pressed her head against his chest
"Even when I fell away...You never left"
Months have now gone by.
Her life is no difrent
Her life gets worse
She even still falls to the fate of her knife
But yet her knight still hasent left
The light has gotten bigger
Ther lord her god has never left
She begs for help and forgiveness
He grants her that wish
His work is slow
But one day she knows
Her life will turn out for the best
Cause know she knows
her exstance is the best
To her knight in amor
who is to her left....

 

This night is long...
This night is painfull...
This Night is nothing but lies
My tears for you
Are only for you
But yet you dont understand
The love I feel
The pain I feel
Wich one will take the win?
The lies you tell
The things you do
The pain has taken the win.
You dont understand
But you say you do
Which do you expect me to choose?
I know your lies
You say no truth
why do you think I should choose?
The truth are lies
I know thats true
Why should I listen to you?
You know I love you
That is true
But I mean nothing to you
So go away stay away
I want nothing to do with you

 

Colors are like emotions
The swirl together to make difrent colors
Black is deep and sadding
Gray is down and depressing
Blue is happy
Light blue is happy with a good spirit
Purple is layed back
Green is a mellow mood.
What color am I?
I'm deep and sad
Im down and depressing
Why must I be the dark colors?
Im never like blue
Im never green
Im aways gray and black
What does gray and black make?
A deprssing girl who is always sad and unhappy
If you mix the to colors you get nothing but black

The sun is out
The day is bright
There is a calm breeze
And it feels like night
I walk around in the open areas
looking at the tree's
And the flowers
This day seems to good to be true
So I fear its a dream
I walk around some more
And a boy walks my way
I look over to see him look back at me
I look into his eyes
A nice blue color
Calm and deep as the ocean
My cheeks turn light pink
My feet wont move
The boy comes closer
and asks
"How are you"
I smile and tell him im happy
He looks in my eyes and says
"they are more beautiful than the moon"
This day cant be real
I smile at him again
He takes me hand and walks me around
All of a sudden a huge wind hits
Now its pitch black
I look at the boy
He is fadeing away
"Whats going on!" I yell
The boy frowns and lets go
Im blown away by the wind
When it stops im bleeding and hurt
My eyes open
I look at myself
It was all a dream
I told my self.
I get up out of bed
I go outside
Its dark and gloomy
I look at my arms and I was bleeding
"Was it really a dream" I asked myself

I know that last poem may seem a bit weird... its somthing I had went through if you need me to explain feel free to ask <3

 

My mind
My body
They have both been toyed with
Whats the truth?
Where is the truth?
When will I be set free?
Ive lost my mind
Im no longer me
My mind is scrambled
I cannot find the truth
Everywhere I look is black
I see no light
When I even try to speak
all I hear is gibberish
Where have I gone?
Why have I been hurt
and lied to
in such harsh ways

 

If I shall die tomrrow
please dont be filled with sorrow
for I have left somthing behind for you
I leave you my heart
I leave you my soul
I leave you the love I had for you
But even if dead it shall grow
You weep in your bed
for how I am dead
but dont weep long my angel
we shall meet again
Maybe not in this life
but we will in the next
I can hold you in my arms
and we can be put to rest
but until then my love
stay strong and move on
for you life has many promises
and many dreams
so step out into the breeze my love
and look at the tree's
and if you still love me
then please stare at the sky to honnor me

 

All of your poems are beautiful. They really show a great picture of emotion. I especially liked the last one the best. Good job!

 

Your eyes are full of saddnes
Your face is full of fear
I look to turn behind me
It seems like everyone is looking with fear
I walk around the town
Everyone but me has a frown
Im puzzled with whats going on
Why does everyone seem down
I walk around some more
I see a little girl crying
I go up to her and go on my knees
and I ask her what is wrong
"its your fault get away!" the girl yelled
She pushed me off my knee's
and she ran off
I stand up and dust myself off
Why am I do blame?
I then hear a vase fall
a man cries out my name
"It your fault go away!"
The man shouted
I looked away
then walked away
"how could have that been my fault?"
I walk a long way
And head up to my home
I hear shouting
I guess the know im home
I hear my name
I follo the sound
I come into the room
And my mother has a crown
She has me get on my knees
she makes me beg for forgivness
but what have I done?
She has my clean the floor
with only a tooth brush and a bar of soap
my work is done I leave the room
I hear my name being called again
I walk to the sound
there is my dad with a crown
He looks angry
he makes me kneel down and bow
I stand up again
and he makes me dress as a clown
for next to him is a baby
who seems to be crying
she also seems to have a crown
I walk around tripping myself hopeing to make her laugh
She is still crying
my father gives me a look of anger
he point his figure to leave the room
I wash myself up and go to my room
My name is called again
not even a minute has passed
I get up again and follow the sound
My brother has called me
I look up at his crown
He tells me to clean his room
and not to look down
I do as he says
my job is now done
I go to my room
with nothing but dust
and a cot for a bed
I lay down crying
wising i was worthy enough to have a crown...

 

i can imagine these as raps. :lolface:

they're pretty good.

 

really? ._.

A car needs gas to run
so it can go far in its life
so it can take you were you need to go...
Your love for me was like gas
I was the car
You were the life i needed to run on...
You took my places ive never seen...
shown me things i could never understand befor...
Your love for me has run out
my life is ending for the gas is on E
I beg you for more
I beg you to love me again
I beg you to care...
You turn away shaking your head
i fall to my knees
for now i am dead...

 

These are so sad, I hope you feel better. These are all great poems and seriously Roxas~N~Namine, I agree with JY, there is a time and place for jokes, this is not the place nor the time. Hope you are feeling better Sakura, There it is, I loved it all :)

 

my last one for a while

I love you that I do
I always look forward to being with you
Your eyes are as sweet as you
I will be looking forward until we can finally say "I do"
You took my heart away with you
All I have to ask of you
is take of it
when you have my heart
you have me
so always know
that I am always with you

 

Take me away
Show me your world
Take me my love
And show me the ways of your life
Let me see through your eyes
Give me your mind
Give me your soul
all just for a moment
just so I can take a peek into your world
Let me see your trials
let me feel your pain
just one peek into your mind
and I shall take all your pain away

 

:cryinganime: seriously Sakura . . . this is beautiful . . . why in the despair of these tragedies, lies a heart of gold lined with a diamond tether . . . in other words I loved it, please don't ever stop making poems as good as this one k ^^ Can't wait to here more . . . parting is such sweet sorrow, that i shall say good night till it be morrow- William Shakespeare's_Romeo and Juliet

 

Key- Poem #: Line #

Poem 1: 4
The word "can't" has an apostrophe.
Poem 1: 7
The word "don't" has an apostrophe as well.
Poem 3:1
The word "I'm" also has an apostrophe.
Poem 3:3
I believe the word is spelled as "chirping".

I would check the rest of your poems if I were not typing on a phone. =)
Keep up the good work!

 

These poems are decent. And I must commend you, because you've made some lengthly poems. While I do think some are somewhat cliche, but it doesn't mean they're bad.

I do think you should try and work on stanzas; divide your poems with marked rhyme. Also work on your grammar. I understand how some poems may be written with no punctuation, but you must practice your grammar and spelling, in some cases.

 

The time is near,
My time has come,
The end is here
I am done.
My life is over,
My time is done
My fate has come
It's time to go
It's time to wave
It's to jump
It's time to cry
It's time to die.

You see the sky,
It's blue than gray
You look at the sky
And then you pray
You pray your okay
you pray you're strong,
You pray life is okay
You pray life will go on

 

When my eye's met you
My life started to bloom
When my eyes met you
All I could do was think of you
When my eyes met you
My heart grew wings and flew
When my eyes met you
I knew I wanted to be with you

Love is sweet
Love is kind
My love for you will never die
Love is pain
Love needs faith
Stay with me so we don't break
Love is sad
Love is strong
Let's let love consume us all

My dreams are big
My thoughts fly high
Yet I sit here and look emotionless at the sky
My dreams seem far
My thoughts feel heavy
And all I can do is dream as I look at te sky

This life was my begining
This life was my friend
This life made me happy
I thought this life would never end
This life was fun
This life was an adventure
But now I know
That you were my end.

I still suck no matter what D: though I still enjoy writing sorry they first two are sappy!!! <3

 

I like these, "sappy" as they may be lol, there were a few spelling errors but they were good all and all. Keep up the great work Sakura ^_^

 

Thank you guys! im glad people read these! Again im still learning sorry if there are massive erros but im working on it and doing my best. These next two... hmmm... Im not sure what they are. I dont know if its more of a story or a poem. Poems dont always have to ryme but still not sure what these two are. Please enjoy and tell me what you think <3

I walk aimlessly in a field
My eyes show no emotion
My heart has no emotion
I keep walking
I am looking for something
But I don't know what it is that I'm looking for
What ever it is I need it
What ever it is, it's important
I start to feel desprate
What ever it is I know I need it
I start to run as fast as I can
I still don't know where I'm going
I run faster
I finally see the end
What ever it is must be there
I reach the end of the field
I look around the area
And nothing is here.....


I find myself sitting in the dark
I get up and walk, walk as far as I can
There is nothing in this dark space
I can see but at the same time I cant
I feel around infront of me
Next to me
To the left
Then to the right
Then behind me
Still nothing
Is anyone here?
Is anything here?
I sit down,
I start to feel empty
When it seems it cant get any darker
It does
I stand up again,
But fall right back down
Energy drains from my body
I try to get up,
But there is nothing there to support me
I try one more time to stand up
Im up but shaky
I take one step and fall
It gets darker again
I give up
I am done trying
I lay there in this dark empty space
And sleep a dreamless sleep...
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