Naruto Shippuden: The Neo Akatsuki (Spoilers! Some dead characters are revealed!)

Kurayami watched from a bit far off, seeing all 3 three uchiha children attempt to retreive the two bijuus they were making off with. I don't care how long it takes. I plan on keeping her alive. Kurayami activated his Techno Storm, and sat back from a far. The sonic fuzz would imobolize them, soon enough.

 

When he saw Kimirasu coming, he set down Churo again and formed hand signs as fast as he did. "Mokuton: Moku Joheki!" he said, wood forming a dome around him again, just as Kimirasu reached him, having been slowed down by Sikomaru. But the power was so intense, the wood splintered and broke. "S-such power!" Jubei said, a little freaked out. "Let'sget out of here now!" He picked Churo back up and ran into the forest.

OOC: Well, I'm ignoring the Chidoruiken, because they all only have Kunai and regular shuriken on them, not demon wind shuriken. Also, that kind of attack would take more than 4 days to learn, and it would count as a starting jutsu, since in the RP only two days have gone by. Same with the Primary Lotus. It's not something you said you had, so you have to train during the story, not in a flash back. If I allowed that, then I could say my character learned the Rasen-shuriken in a month in a flashback, which would mean that in reality, he started out with it. I hope you understand what I'm saying. I'll allow the Chidori Lament, though, because it's basically still a regular chidori, just with more power.

 

Oh K fair enough. I'll edit that out and he'll learn it later.

He lay there in painlooking at the sky hearing the people flee.He tried to get up but it was no use.

 

OOC: Okay. As I said yesterday, I won't be on much today. I have to be at my Aunt's by 11:30 for the party, and I don't know how long I'll be there.

 

They would've had a chance, a good one, if Kiri didn't show up trying to show off as usual.Takashi came to a stop, as did Kaori, and the two looked down at him."You just couldn't help but show off, now their getting away!" he growled, looking down on Kirimasu and then back up at Jubei getting away.

Kaori shook her head at Kiri, knowing that she'd be the one to carry the wise and smart, not to mention skillful genes."You really make us look bad.." she muttered, rubbing her forehead before looking back up at Jubei running and his partner lying back.

Before they could get their brother, Takashi felt an odd power wash over him, and before he or Kaori knew it, as well as the ecstatic Lee, the Sonic Fuzz hit them, stunning each long enough to get away.

 

Kurayami felt that his Sonic fuzz had reached them. Good. Kurayami followed after his partner quickly, holding Kinen gently to his chest. They won't be able to do much for a while. That'll buy us some needed time. Kurayami followed after Jubei, running into the forest, where no one whould be able to catch up with them.



Kinen felt like she was being carried...but...her eyes felt too heavy to open... What's going...on.....?

 

"Take your brother home, tell your parents!" Lee mumbled to Takashi and Kaori, rubbing his head after the fuzz wore off.It wasn't just a rumor anymore.the Neo Akatsuki were very real.

"But what about Kinen!?" Takashi questioned as he picked up his bum of a brother and looked down at the mountain path.

"We're going after them..and Takashi..make sure Hanabi and your father tell you the truth about all this." Neji said, landing beside Lee after urging Taka to go home, because he had no idea what Daxma said in his post regarding him.

"Why can't we go too?" Kaori questioned, scowling at Kiri for slowing them all down.She wanted a challenge, and now that she got one, they ran off.

"Just tell your parents what happened, they can explain..and don't worry.We'll bring Kinen and her friend back." Lee gave the two a goofy grin as well as a thumbs up.

Takashi hesitated, but in the end nodded and took off for home with Kaori close behind, as well as Kiri on his back.

Neji looked behind him to see if Ino kept up with him

 

AT the Hokage's "office" aka mansion: "Hokage Naruto-sama! We have gotten word that your daughter Kinen, and Churo; her team-mate, have been kidnapped!" By who?! "Neo Akatsuki..." Naruto felt his brain nearly crack in half.Not my little girl!!!

Kinen woke up being carried, but felt that her chakra supply had been closed off. She looked up to see a familiar face. She didn't know how she knew this face. She couldn't quite put her finger on it.... The man seemed to be looking forward, instead of at her. She was unable to move. He wore A red cloak, with black clouds.

 

"We're almost at the cave." he said, crossing into the Land of Rivers. "Then we'll seal ourselves in there and extract their Bijuu's. Starting with him."

 

Rasengan
OC Format- Neo Akatsuki Member
Username: The Joker
Name: Shamaru (Never was good with names. Please offer a better one if you have.)
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Bijuu: None
Starting element: Fire
Specialty Jutsu (only two to start with. Eye techniques like the Sharingan are counted as one):
Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
Multi Shadow Clone Jutsu
Parents: Random/Unknown. Nobody mentioned in the Naruto story.
Appearance:
Preferable weapons: Kunai and Shuriken
Other:
Any good ways I could get involved with the story if this character is accepted?

 

OOC: Help with the extraction of the Nine-Tails, like the other members. Just give me a pic of what he looks like, or a description and I'll add him.

 

Rasengan
Sorry about that. I was going to add a description, but I forgot.
This good?:
OC Format- Neo Akatsuki Member
Username: The Joker
Name: Shamaru
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Bijuu: None
Starting element: Fire
Specialty Jutsu (only two to start with. Eye techniques like the Sharingan are counted as one):
Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
Multi Shadow Clone Jutsu
Parents: Random/Unknown. Nobody mentioned in the Naruto story.
Appearance: Neo Akatsuki robe. Tall for his age. White hair. Scar running down his eye from training accident with his father long ago. Brown eyes. When not in Neo Akatsuki robe, he usually wears random things, as to whatever he can get his hands on.
Preferable weapons: Kunai and Shuriken
Other:

 

OOC: Okay, he's in.

 

( Hi, I am new to the forum and I would like to join. Is the rinnegan available? I would like it for my custom character.)

 

OOC: Sorry, no. Only Sharingan and Byakugan. From what I heard about it, it would be too powerful. I heard that the user would be god-like or something, and that would be too much.

 

( Am I able to take a bijuu?)

 

OOC: There are two left, so yes, unless you're going to be a Neo Akatsuki.

 

OOC: If something is wrong with this post, please say and I'l do my best to fix it.

BIC: Shamaru followed the other members of Neo Akatsuki, he remained silent, deciding to keep his thoughts to himself for the time. He was slightly happy at this moment. He had heard that people who the extracting Jutsu was performed upon made such interesting sounds.

 

OOC: Sorry I haven't been on lately. At my grandmother's. Slow connection

 

OOC: Tularim..i mean gatekeeper...*shifty eye's* wrong spelling
I'll just be using sasuke for the recovery of kimirasu and a bit of dialog.

2 days earlier...Kimirasu had just unlocked the primary lotus much to his joy but he didn't dare say it to anyone.He still had to unlock the second gate and elder guy said "You will have to use sheer will as well as talent to unlock the second gate...my former student rock lee, who is apparently going to be your sisters teacher...i didn't tell you that....lee used his raw fierocity to unlock five of the gates when he was four years younger than you are...the uchiha bloodline runs through you...will power won't be a problem" smiled elder guy as kimirasu left that day...

Now..."Kaori, no offense but your the youngest and you obviously don't get it...i aimed to kill that guy...i wasn't trying to show off, i was trying to kill him and make the job easier...aim to kill or don't aim at all...do you think that i was going to use up my chakra for just any jutsu, my arm might have permanent damage just for trying to kill that guy...now do you really think i was showing off? to damage my arm just to show off in front off a tai jutsu master and our uncle? I don't think so...you two seem to think i'm so oblivious...I've realised that both you and takashi have pretty much written me off as a nousance because you two have the byakugan and i have the sharingan...along with the fact that takashi has an inferiority complex and you are living in a fantasy world where the safe thing always works and chances and risks are not needed to do what needs to be done..." he said as someone had shown up.

Sasuke appeared suddenly beside his son on the ground."What the hell were you think you ignorant fool!who told you about that attack...." he said as he realised who exactly would it be to tell him of that technique."Naruto....I will be speaking to him after i heal my son here.Lee, neji, i will allow my son to acompany you to go after those two but if he tries to do chidori lament again i want you to break his left arm, blind fold him and bring him back to the house" he said as his eye's turned mangakyo and he used the mystic palm to heal his son. "Your only lucky that sakura left me to copy her mystic palm jutsu..." he muttered to kimirasu as kimirasu sat up. "Your arm is hurt as bad as expected and that is probably due to the fact that you have the eight tailed giant ox within you...you just lucky that eight tailed ox is one of the nicer of the bijuu" he said to kimirasu.

"Dad i assume this will come into a conversation when i return home" he said as he stood up looking at his father who's sharingan seemed to be hypnotising.

Suddenly sasuke put a seeal on his sons chest."This seal will endowe you with your chakra again and if you pull off a stunt like you pulled before it will stop working and you will have to fight without chakra. it will dissapear after you use all its chakra" he said knowing what his other children were thinking about what he was doing. "I'm going now to speak with Naruto...i will see you back at the house kimirasu and as for you kaori..." and he felt slightly strained in saying this because it made him feel he was going soft on kimirasu "...i heard what your brother said kaori and he is right about the fact that risks must be taken in battle and you should always aim to kill your enemy...that is not to say his action was justified but his frame of mind is correct..." he said as he dissappeared telling himself that his son was not going to go down his road.

As his father left, he felt that the books most have exagerated the stuff said about him like trying to kill lady sakura and the sixth hokage.He wondered what would happen between his father and the hokage once his father reached his home.Kimirasu stood up and looked around at the people and looked down on his little sister. "Just remember Kaori..." his sharingan flickered on and off "...chance is a more powerful weapon then you'd think.I tore through a crystal defence, a golem that had a crystal shield and i broke through a wood based jutsu...would you rather him wearing us down slowly? or have him running to where he's about to seal the beasts, allowing us to box them in, find the bijuu sealing ground and killling them off?" he asked knowing the answer she would choose or come up with some smart answer."Next time i won't try the cursed seal chidori, i will try something different" he said as he took out two rusted demon wind shuriken...