I don't like it, but I do like that fade effect on Neku. You could/shouldd really use that for something else and put a bit of effort into it. ...Also why state the time? You're not John Conor...
It's just thta the rest of it, including the fade, is just too plain IMO. As I said, apply it to something else and it'll look good. And John Conor is the main character fro- i'm not going into this......
Sorry, I have to agree with shadowjak on this one; it's too plain. It's still good though, considering you said you were just playing around with the program. What program do you use?
Not enough color. Its a good start, but you need to add more to it. Good luck with that. Again, I'm going to be lenient because this was made at2:30 in the morning. 8/10