Nights' Poetry and Lyrics

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  1. Technic☆Kitty User Is Inactive

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    This is my first post for lyrics so here it is. Dashes mean to stretch the word out longer. One dash equals one second.

    One day you wake up
    and start to realize
    all the things around you
    and you start to criticize

    You wonder if its real
    and then begin to see
    that this is just a dream
    based on reality

    And you keep wishing----
    that you could wake up
    and you keep thinking----
    man i've had enough
    but when you're all alone
    and the stars are aligned
    in your heart--- in your mind---
    its time-----to wake up
     
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    Symphony of a Nobody

    Update: Namine tribute: Roxas

    Update: Roxas

    Alright, second try at a song. Dashes mean stretch the word and ^ means raise pitch. See if you can figure out who this song is about. Here it is, enjoy :)

    I shroud myself in darkness
    each and every day
    and now I can't stop it
    it just won't go away

    Chorus:
    These keys are all i have
    and one thing I can do
    I just keep on fighting
    but who is fighting who^---
    (always break after chorus)

    I do not exist
    in any world it seems
    but just how can that be
    I'm here and I can see

    A man showed up today
    with a blindfold and he screamed
    give me back my friend
    just what did he mean

    Repeat Chorus

    Today a girl showed up
    she was dressed in white
    and when our eyes did meet
    I remembered that fight

    Why did that occur
    to me when I saw her
    maybe we were linked
    our fates were they synched^---

    Repeat Chorus

    low sound
    I am just a boy
    or at least thats what it seems
    I am just a nobody
    and this is what it means^---

    Repeat Chorus: low sound
    last line stop on 1st who
    then Repeat Chorus: Loud
    and fade towards the end

    Didn't feel like making dashes and ^'s this time. Maybe ill fix it later. This is about Roxas's, even though this makes it seem really short, existence as a nobody. Here it is, enjoy :) Oh btw listen to the i cant believe its not butter tune, it is kind of like that but more rock and a lot less happy.

    I fell into abiss
    destruction all around me
    but just what did I miss
    it seems they finally found me

    Desolate and barren
    this is how I feel
    I just can't stop caring
    none of this seems real

    Chorus
    Nobodies dont exist
    we just cannot be
    feelings we cannot grasp
    hold up but what about me

    These memories inside my head
    day by day I live them through
    come on tell me
    just who are you

    Chorus

    One day I will be free
    but it seems for now
    ill have to stop being me
    Organizations on the prowl

    Living in this world
    created reality
    thrown, and shoved, and hurled
    misinterpreted, thats how there reading me

    ChorusX2
    slowly fades
     
  3. 9Kairi9hearts Twilight Town Denizen

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    wow! I love this song, (but it is the first I have read...) I don't know how the others sound, but I think your a song-writing genuise (sorry can't spell for my life)
     
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    ty lots and lots and lots i love kingdom hearts and think that there are not enough songs out there about them so i do my best to get some out there. Here it is, enjoy :) <----this is like my trademark. It is in almost all of my posts. Thanks again for the compliment. Dont you just hate auto merges :ranting:

    Namine tribute: Roxas

    New character addition: ~ means that the pitch goes up and down.
    Okay here is yet another kingdom hearts song. This one is about Namine but also this is based on a thread posted by >Keyblader< its called Roxas and Namine. This song takes place in the battle roxas gets in with _____ read the story and find out. Anyways, hope you like this, there will be more to come. Here it is, enjoy :)

    Surrounded by- pictures
    Shredded to- pieces
    I cant- stop crying
    the tears they wont cease to exist

    but sud-denly
    i am filled- with fear
    and so- it ^~seems--
    Roxas made him pay dear-^ly

    Chorus
    The pain- he feels
    must be- immense
    enough- to ^~kill--
    but it's like- he's cleansing his soul

    he now- wakes up
    and we- embrace
    the love- we ^~feel--
    i wish- we were any place but ^here

    ChorusX2
    fade out on second
     
  5. 9Kairi9hearts Twilight Town Denizen

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    Again, awsome song, you can realy get into the theme of Roxas/Namine, that is something I wish I could do as well.
     
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    I hate computers

    I would have had a totally awsome song here but my stupid computer broke that makes me very mad and want to kill my stupid computer. I will do my best to try and remember the song but for now enjoy this little thing right here. Now scroll down a bit. Okay there. Using smileys relieves stress. Here it is, enjoy :)

    I met a girl today
    I thought about running away
    yes we could be together
    sharing our love forever

    Her name is Namine
    I asked her to run away
    She told me to wake up
    and i did.
     
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    Rules for this section.

    One thread per poet, so I merged your threads.

    I'll change the title of the thread for you if you want, something like "Night's Lyrics" ?

    I'm quite intrested in your work, I rarely see songs and poetry which is fanwork. xD
     
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    Yes I would appreciate it being changed to that please thank you XD :)
     
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    Changed it for you.

    Your work is quite interesting, keep it up.
     
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    The Key To The Worlds

    Okay short song, guess who it's about. I really tried to make it obvious. Here it is, enjoy :)

    Spoken
    If you follow darkness
    it will lead you to light,
    but if you follow light
    it will lead you to darkness

    Instrumental enters (think of Passion)
    How far can one road lead
    how long will it take to succeed
    all of our hopes and our dreams
    compared to him
    they measure up to nothing

    Chorus
    He is the key
    to all the worlds
    he is the key
    our fates he will unfurl

    He is lost and then found
    by two new friends it seems
    will he throw me away
    or will he remember me

    Chorus

    Again one day we meet
    and he gives away his heart
    to give me mine back
    now I am falling apart

    ChorusX2 fades away on second
     
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    Nice, it's been awhile since you updated your lyrics, I liked the whole Riku-sora thing going on, there it is, I enjoyed it,( <-- that's right, I stole it!)
     
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    Another Roxas Story

    Sorry it has been ages, more like a millenium but here is another song about you guessed it Roxas. It may not be my best work but it was on my mind. Here it is, enjoy :)

    there coming for me
    they wont stop for anything
    through electronic gates
    through a boy with a key

    i am in a world
    of digital people
    these are my friends
    or at least right now that's what i believe

    then came this girl
    and she told me
    i did not belong
    how rude a thing- to say

    but she was right
    then came a man
    he said the same
    and i cried names of my friends

    Hayner, Pence, Olette
    where have you gone
    now all thats left
    is me and this strange boy again

    its all over now
    at least thats what i believed
    I saw her face and then
    I knew that my counterpart must have succeed-ed

    in the end the girl i knew
    isn't who she use to be
    but is that really fair
    I mean im not really me
     
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    Same good work as ever, Night, I loved how you put it in the way Roxas would've said it, though I think he would have at least mentioned hating someone at least once.
     
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    Gods of KH: My Song

    Thank you, thank you, I wasn't thinking to much on the hate part *although if I put something about hating sora . . .* I tried to keep names out by using boy for sora, girl for namine I did use hayner pence and olette because he actually says it as such but other than that . . . This one is dedicated to the story I have been playing in Gods of KH its really fun anyway. Here it is, enjoy :) Thought I forgot about it hmm??

    At first I was just no-one
    and knew nothing of my destiny
    I was just a funny guy
    but there was more left to my story

    Through trials of pain
    of hate and fear
    through trials of loss
    I would shed more than just one tear

    One day I found out something
    that would change my life forever
    in birth I was seperated
    from my dear beloved twin sister

    Our father was evil
    our mother had perished
    I had to do something
    but the memories I cherished
    were all torn from her

    The man that we call father
    I had to stop him how
    in death father would be sealed
    and i would be gone

    But then I was saved
    by myself it would seem
    two pieces of me
    they both shared a dream

    That I would be happy
    and alive hopefully
    so they sacrificed themselves
    and they did it happily

    My sister was saved
    and now there's no doubt
    you should now go
    and check this story out

    But my stories not over
    I still travel on
    in the hopes that one day
    I will arive upon
    the times before
    when my cares were none
    and my troubles would be over
    all perished, all gone

    Hope you liked this song, it was better at the end rather than the beginning, but like I said this is only the beginning of the story, and there are hundreds of stories to be told, if everyone would tell them together then im sure it would make a book ten times over . . . anyways hope you enjoyed this, like i said don't feel sad it's just a story none of this is real . . . but it is dramatic lol
     
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    I like these songs there so good^^ my fave is the one for Kh Gods^^ it makes me happy that i made it and that people enjoy being gods^^ thanx for telling me that through that poem^^ So good keep it up^^
     
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    Love *Not KH related* . . . *maybe*

    Oh my gosh, I made a poem that isn't about KH, *the world must be ending* lol no I just got tired of the KH scenario and was running out of room to think, so I give you a poem devoted to love and what you would do for it. Don't hate me if it's awful, I haven't worked on other things in a while so . . . Here it is, enjoy :)

    Life and love are two different things
    if there was a choice which would you choose
    with life you would be lonely
    with love your life you would lose

    If you loved someone dearly
    to keep that love what would you do
    take a vow of true love
    or would you meet someone new

    For me the choice is clear
    for love there'd be no doubt
    I'd give my life for love
    or "I do" is what i'd shout
     
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    That was a great poem^^ And why would I hate my own twin brother^^ lol the poem was clear as rain and it was perfect in every way^^ keep it up^^
     
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    Thank you, here is another one also located on my signature, it is actually a joke but is based from Alice in Wonderland. . . Drink me ill make you smaller, eat me ill make you larger, but bite me and ill bite you back . . . Anyway here is yet another poem/song i don't even know*sad face* Here it is, enjoy :)

    Im all alone, no one here beside me, but ya gotta have friends-just kiddin it's Donkey from Shrek the First^^ and I totally messed it up cause i forgot it *we'll call this one the short version*

    Darkness is flooding the halls
    and the corners of my heart
    I fall from my friends
    to an everlasting dark

    I thought that I was gone
    never to return
    but it seems that I was wrong
    the light from her heart did burn

    From an everlasting darkness
    to an everlasting light
    but then again I lose her
    she is gone now, out of sight

    I know that we will meet again
    at least she won't be in any harm
    for I have a promise to keep
    I still have her lucky charm

    Hope you enjoyed this, based on KH1 and yes I did return to the KH peoms/songs *I still don't know* but I decided to do more than Roxas^^
     
  19. Juicy Chaser

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    Sorry, had to delete the post you made full of quotes, since it was totally irrelevant to poetry and therefore was spam. The majority of them weren't even your own work, anyway.

    On a brighter note, your poetry has vastly improved. This is especially evident in your last post, and I'm glad you've returned to writing KH poetry. The rhythm seems a bit off in the last line of the second stanza, but overall the rhyming is pleasant and cute, and the poem is presented neatly. Good work.
     
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    lyrics? so there's supposed to be a beat?
    if there is, i can't find it.
    but nice poetry.