KH Dynasty: Organization XIII: Next Generation Here's the link: http://freewebs.com/orgxiiinexgen I guess I must say, this is my first feature length fanfiction (which I WISHED FF can get published but it Can't T_T). Either way, it's WIP (Work In Progress) which means it will be edited and revised. ORGXII: Next Gen well is, let me get straight to the point: loaded up with OCs. So...if you hate OCs, don't read it, because you'll go insane. In fact, there's a character list. There are also other crossovers with Square Enix Games: Final Fantasy VII, Final Fantasy XII, Star Ocean and Disney (Notre Dame, yeah, yeah). There are also refreneces to Maxium Impact and other games. Also refreneces to religion, race and economics. Now. This how this story all began. My cousin came up with this wacky as hell idea about what if the Organization never got destroyed and Sora did instead. That inspired this fiction. She also mentioned what if a whole bunch of people from different backgrounds and different abilties had come to co-exist with them (like a culture shock thing). And then she went on and said one word: "KIDS." The story has many themes such as, childbirth, cross-culture relationships, past lives, the human and Nobody condition, darkness and nothingness, character death, enigmas, progression and more. There are many pop culture refreneces. If you can find them all, you get a cookie! Winter Freeze (yes, that is my cousin's REAL NAME), is a real trip. So...I did. That's why the prologue is so bloody long. There's 11 parts. Only five have been posted. Chapter One began on page 200 (XD) I suggest reading the character list if you don't want to get confused. Also, this is an AU story. Don't worry, I'll TRY MY HARDEST to keep them IC. But, there may be a few OOC moments for the sake of plot development. And if there are any typos or grammatical errors, PLEASE INFORM ME. . Oh, and if you see a whole bunch of ? marks show up, ignore that. Also. I like feedback. So post your replies here on the comment/reply section on my site. Please keep your feedback practical. Don't flame. Don't be pretenious and insultive. And don't say you hate the story because of the OCs, (you will be keelhauled for that). I like constructive crictism. I also don't give a flying s*** about contiunity. So any mention of that will be ignored. There are also videos up there: theme songs. If anyone here likes rock music, then you'd like it. I rather not put this on fanfiction.net, because there hoards of pretenious gits up there that cannot seem to do much when it comes to reviewing or helping. Every post I make is going to be an update, or some crazy idea that came to me in my sleep about my story. So...enjoy it. And if any questions and or confusions, please post and ask me, or PM me. If there is a PM system here (I'm new *waits to get gunned down*) Edit: I may just post it on here because I'm not getting any hits/reviews >_< XD Three new updates (sorry for the double post). Since people are a bit too lazy to click the link (either that or my writing just sucks, that's why there is just a few hits and no reviews). Oh, and, if any characters does seem too OOC, (and I don't mean a little bit for plot development or the meshing of character personalities), then tell me. I think I'm going to post some stuff here. Maybe the summary. I'm afraid to post the Introduction (>< *bricked*). And you can read the character list on the site. So...Maybe I should straight to first part of the prologue. Look for the edit in this post. Once again: http://freewebs.com/orgxiiinexgen P.S: I can't draw. If anyone is a good artist, I hope they don't mind being my illustrator.
Update Alrighty, an update. Features my characters Nocturna and Joni--respectively, an assassin and a guy who just annoys the **** out of people. Pairings Well, just look. Damn people! Post. If you guys actually posted, I wouldn't have to double post (sorry). http://www1.freewebs.com/orgxiiinexgen/proelectricmankiller.htm