Poetry by Tifa

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Tifa L., May 27, 2014.

  1. Tifa L. Merlin's Housekeeper

    Jan 12, 2010
    I thought it would be nice to post my poetry on here, and hear everyone's opinion. Be sure to let me know your opinions/advice, and I hope you all enjoy them! :)[DOUBLEPOST=1401249308][/DOUBLEPOST]Death of Society

    To rise from the deep darkened mass grave of sanity

    Ascending from cold silent entrenched depravity

    Note below, the faction

    And so analyze their peculiar reaction

    Once so humane and apathetic, now interested and hostile at best

    As one would gaze down, dejected more or less

    Can they not see?

    So ever clearly?

    The earth that keeps filling in?

    They who are shrouded in their dense stupor of ignorance

    So contented! Their eyes staring intense

    Pointing their fingers, they call it insanity

    Detesting the alternative with sobriety

    Ignorant are the sane, for clarity is ever so frequently misconstrued

    Taken for lunacy, the comprehension subdued

    (This first one is a little short.)
  2. Hyuge ✧ [[ Fairy Queen ]]

    Apr 13, 2009
    Camp Half-Blood
    First thing, If this thread is just for poetry, it should get moved to the Poetry/Lyrics section. Cat~'s the main mod for this section so you can ask her to move it.

    Second, I liked it. I've always been a bit of a fan of the more morbid poetry, and the ones that are very detail oriented, comparing everything to colors and lights and sounds, all that jazz. Personally, I'm not a big fan of rhyming, but I think you did it fairly well. So bravo to that. Can't wait to see what else you post. :]