Rhyme battle KHV

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  1. nasirrich King's Apprentice

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    I wasn't talking about anyone in here at all
    Why would I do that if it was to call
    Out anyone who thinks they could just hop in and spit
    As in take lightly what others tried long and hard to practice
    Not here to be a dick, but here's a trick
    Say things to leave people thinkin
    Was that said cause it felt my skills are sinkin
    That when all of the raw talent come out from within
     
  2. Nice words to see as I am new to rhyming and being a writer of rap as in fact I have been trying to rhyme for a while but until this year the well of skill stayed sealed like the demon I kept in my closet under a locket.
     
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    My demon is my other persona
    Probably like the boy in your sig Crona
    Someone could help you like my boy Oda
    He's a good teacher and practices what he preaches sir
    Think of it like a heat seeker
    It goes based off of heat
    So nothing good will come if your target has cold feet
    I taught myself, and I guess just gifted
    Not the way others may think since to them for they feel I sick and twisted
    Funny cause they stay by me just to get a sip
    Of what ever juices are inside my head
    That is how you get the fire to spread
     
  4. Thanks for the offer, but I like to teach myself like a wealth of knowledge I want to be, made that way by me. But what happens when that heat seeker becomes hot like that chunk of meat in my head that the zombified fans of mine want to eat with their bread and blows itself up with a ker-plunk of its ka-boom on the surface with the calm of the storm in the middle of it all is where I reside making my best rhymes as this is just a sample for the real battle.
     
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    Oda didn't teach me I just wanted to say that
    He has some students to state facts
    If the fans demand for of hot and damned lyrics
    Then you swirls and spin it before you can shoot and spip it
    I do better when I talk about the cold and little heart put in
    Still cooking these clowns like the basics in the kitchen
    Wanting to be and know you will be is something you gotta know
    You don't hope to keeps the fans attention when you'll rock the show
    It could be the gimmicks that spew gibberish like they got Daffy and Donald lips
    Must go well with the birds of a feather schtick
     
  6. Nice to know, but you have no idea of what I am other than an overly obsessive onomatopoeia. I work hard every day and make no time for play as each day I try my hardest to entertain the puny brains of the late and lame zombies who passed from the power of rhythms made by you and me and Zelda you see? We be so free to rap its a little known face that our lives are messages to the world that we are no tools for you to use for your amuse'. I ment no disrespect for any of you who bet this is a lie, but it is the truth all the way to the roots.
     
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    I've been underground on here for the longest time
    Its only until the month you joined I wanted to put my shine
    In the Poetry section where they think poetry is just fancy words on different line
    Mine consists of rhythm and spoken like breaking through a hymn
    It causes those that lack the needs to bleed like damn not again
    To think he was a nice guy back then now is hard to tell
    I'll eradicate those that use vapor to evaporate brain cells
    To lose in this war is something that just won't happen
    A Haiku with a simple simile and useless metaphors
    Won't make you feared by me like tryin to spit horrocore
    Different styles infuse with the basics makes for hate quick
    Kinda the reason why I always make my words aim for the heart and hip
    Hit you in the vitals leaving them in a bottomless pit
     
  8. Sorry I'm late, sorry I didn't rip that soul of your out so I could mold it and sell it like the rest of my life I gave to cruel lady luck with enough of a punch in my gut with that rut of my slow movement into it. I trudge out of a hole with a bullet in my face in the form of a Haiku with you as the one firing it out of your Idea Gun because you no longer wanted this shelling. I push it away like a spit ball with my wall of words into your world with the words from a world of turd turned to gold on a roll like me I am on one of those.
     
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    You and Lady Luck maybe in the same boat if the flow is headed this way
    I'm the iceberg so when you sink I'm like 'Ehhh ok'
    If I was holding the gun I'd have it to the back of your head and shoot right in front of you
    This is how I really do things so when I fire its more of a pew
    Not much of a bang
    If it were a bang your brainz would be all over this thang
    Damn now I'm just becoming salty
    Or could it be corny people were brought in front of me?
    Yo I'll strap you in a car hit the gas to the max flip it to a wall jump out last minuet
    Cops will find your body and your wallet with no cash in it
    Nigga I'm that wicked
    Fuck a nice guy your ass trippin
    Those lines were to show the dark bone in my spine
    It couldn't be towards the new friend you swine
    Nah not even
    I only pig out when something big can be eaten
    So for now I'll keep hanging with the crooks and the thieves
    Think its about you then just Ask Jeeves
    I only aim to please not direct my line of fire on a new Joe
    He isn't ordinary but you wouldn't know
    The time I've been talking to him he thinks your trash you can't pass Go
     
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    Ha it seems I inspired Star
    And his rhyming is way on par
    Naz and Zelda are not to bad
    Yet I ask is this a fad?
    Hmm well at least it is fun
    And the rhyming has only just begun!
     
  11. Like I told you, my frend, or rap battle was not at an end. Now if you would please for me its if you could and would keep up the rhymes till I return.
     
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    The rhyme can be hard to maintain
    Added with the fact Naz drives me insane
    This could be a great place to be
    But you will get no promise from me
    I will just post when I can
    But since I am a good man
    I will post when I see fit
    And that won't be it
     
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    It couldn't be it Oda
    That's since I'll keep your sanity... Wait hold up

    Did you say I drive you nuts
    Do you want me to go and crash right into you
    Fly through the windshield and slice your neck too!?
    Wait no disrespect though
    You respect my talents so you already and use to my flow
    This other guy I just don't know
    I put words that were absurd making it look like gold turd like sir... Whoa
    We didn't understand how hard you like to go
    So step to the side and enjoy the show
     
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    Step aside? Hell no I will not
    So come on people show us what you got!
    This place is for a laugh
    There is no English science or math
    Forget the tortures of uni or school
    Come here and rhyme like a fool
    It is a lot of fun to do
    So here I am calling out to you!
     
  15. Taking that chalange right now is too much for me, as you see, school finals are bleeding me dry and leaving me to die.
     
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    That isn't the only thing here ready to make you die
    Have you strapped to a chair on the train tracks yelling surprise!!
    You think the light coming from the horizon is the sun coming up
    People would be wishing that was the case when you're head rolls towards them like What the f***
    If school was cool Oda I'd think you're a smart fool bro
    I said for me to step aside and enjoy the show
    You wanted me to be apart of it so I'll cut your ear off like that one artist did
    Nah let me ease up enough
    I will wait for my enemies nerves to lose the pulse making it tough
    For them to breath which is what I want
    I maybe a nice kid, but my heart is still cold I won't front
    You may claim otherwise from what I said
    But that me is already dead
     
  17. If my head flys off, I won't scream, nor shout because I will state it was only a flesh wound then keep on breakin' the rules of spellin' and grammar with my two beat black fist made of ink I got and I covermy wounds with so I would stay fresh like arm and hammer for I am not the beginner not the appatizer but the main corse and that fine desert right after but you and Oda be the ring of onions grubby fingers with a need for the grease of lesser rythmes 'bout hurt and pain you be sprayin' like the water out if a fire hose I mosey on down and make a fire with the sweet smellin' kerosene called my words all over your home that will soon be your tombs.
     
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    Listen save yourself and make way for hell
    When I burn you with Kerosene I'll use Febreeze to mask the smell
    I'll sharpen a toothbrush and stick the blade through your kidney
    You claim to be the main course so there has to be a knife you see
    My grubby fingers that you said are like that of onion rings
    You think that's a good rhyme just leave and sing
    The format you go about tryin to diss is all wrong
    He was a good man, but his soul is now gone
    He came at Nas thinking it was ok to do
    Got his wig split for lacking the skill to spit and stick with the right clique
    Same goes for Oda who wants to teach coming at me like he has lyrics
    A sick guy needs to be taken care of
    I'll hug the both of you with C4 with nothing but love
    Or just be at my pad and snipe you
    You were a passerby but I wasn't aiming for anything so you'll do
    Oda too thinking you'll escape the fate since this could be a misfire
    Then again it was you who needed someone to hire
     
  19. C4 is a child's tool when your soul can escape and rade the storage of body's I inhabit. That's right there is more than one me you see you can't beat me with your weak words because I am more than words or ink, I am a bleak black mind and a pure white soul so bright you will loose your right to see the light and life that you one knew as the truth and that is the root of my world which I canot be harmed in within by any kind of pain or bloody rain, but I will rien you like a horse and make you the polo pony you are for that is my art. It's not making tarts or part of words but making things change and rearrange with letters written in cursive from a pen of my skin and my blood as the black ink.
     
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    So there's two of you what's that's supposed to mean?
    You think this is a movie so want me to scream?
    The child's tool here is you
    I can go off topic and get people to say 'You were dissing who?'
    You have a bleak black mind well homie I am black
    I got white bones so to just take that back
    Your soul is pure and white
    Until I piss on it so have a good night
    What art could possibly be speaking of?
    Is it words said on a curb filled with turds then said by an online thug?
    You're incapable take it to where I take it dude
    Should have stuck with the teacher, but you failed out cause of the true
    Reason why you weren't invited since it was more of a family thing
    Kill your father and bring them the ring
    Maybe tell them its family bling
    They'll take it and still keep it private
    Does that ring any bells?
    Shouldn't since I'm speaking out of my ass for this tragic site smells
    More like the words that's being said to disrespect
    Until they come back around and bite you on the neck
    Fill you with the same blood of the person that convinced you
    I knew there was something weird when you wanted a 3rd for this crew
    No its down to 2 me, and who?
    Oh wait this guy that's like Denzel in action
    Your probably a good guy but I only see you actin
    I see the laziness and don't even see any sense of passion
    Think before you speak which is why they have captions
    And I quote 'Sent dude packin'
    You can try as hard as you want I'll be here relaxing
    For what ever you come up with I'll render useless by only using a fraction
    Of what you see before you
    Now make your longer son so I can disown who?