Rhyme battle KHV

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  1. Um... I'm stumped and I have no luck...
    Darn it... I hit a creative wall and its making me feel real small.
     
  2. nasirrich King's Apprentice

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    That is terrible sorry to hear that
    I would help, but nah I'll take it back
    That's mean I'll be in the same rut
    I'm not even trying so hope you get a buck
    Go wild as if your crazed truck
    Driver on the wrong lane of the road
    I'm apathetic so I'll drive faster to take on that big load
    Ehh I'm still alive with the rear on the other side of the road
    This isn't a game, but the guy is dodging cars like a toad
     
  3. A toad in the road it not the mode we three can me (You me and Z, you see) can be because its not part of me really.
    I feel so unmotivated...
     
  4. Zelda What will happen next?

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    "You me and Z"
    Took me a while to see
    You meant me...
    IMA ZOMBIE!!

    Yeah, I'm not very inspired now either.
    It's like a "HA YOU CAN'T RHYME NOW" fever.
    But when I have something to say, then I'll say it;
    The only problem is how to phrase it.
     
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    Honestly what I did was just random
    So if you wanted to do something to make your mind run
    Tell me get mine out the gutter cause this sh**s done
    You should have more of what they call fun
    Kinda like getting a present for your lil bro even though that isn't your son
    Make it hit home when those thoughts roam or act like a bum
    Thinking you got writers block unable to get anything done
    I call bull since your alive and not slinging guns
    No disrespect to those on the grind and those who call them dumb
    Should get that head out of your ass and look at where they come from
    See with your soul think with your heart speak with your mind
    That's why I always have so much of these lines
    I'll ease up since you aren't feeling that hot
    So why not make up a thing about writers block?
    Speak on how you can avoid it unless your mind void
    Of anything possible like putting your pops in a mental hospital
    For he was speaking hostile so I hit em with that gospel
    That word has two meanings, but no one wants to look it up
    They only go off based what's taught
    Instead of finding out why they fought
    Listen people in other countries die because of their religions
    Are you ready to be gunned down for your opinions!?!
    Or be looked at once and say yea they fit that description
    Naw they won't catch me slippin
    For what I put out come based of a true story not fiction
    Let yourself go before its taken way like many traditions
     
  6. Zelda What will happen next?

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    (Honestly, I can't think of anything. Something random? Ookay...)

    Because of the mind blank,
    I'll go to the rhyme bank,
    pick up some stuff.
    It might be rough.

    A smidgeon of pigeon
    Tastes really good
    On all but bologna
    Which isn't real food.

    The timing of rhyming
    Is all up to you.
    Though it could help to take classes;
    They show you what to do.
     
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    I'd like to encourage you not to
    They teach how they'd do
    Disrupting the inner beauty within you
    *Turntables scratch*

    Mic check one two
    Swollen Knuckle Kung Fu
    Just fight that weak thinking so others can come through
    Thanks to your constant fighting
    Of staying true knowing how to keep this exciting
    Words like that is worth site seeing
    Get it Site Seeing words like that being
    On the net and yes that means what ever you type will be seen
    Mad heads go 'Damn she's mean'
    Be doing the same thing Chev does having that Queen
    Like feel on the scene
    Understand what I mean?
    *Turntables Scratch and beat stops.*

    Get help if you feel its right
    *Turntables scratch*

    Take in the teachings while still staying bright

    *Turntables scratch and beat picks back up.*
    If they are unable to feel your style I'll say... SIKE!!!
    Prove to them when they teach others people learn different like riding a bike
    Bad example so just give them a sample
    Just so they will have a lot on their plate to handle
     
  8. Yo guys I'm back but not talkin' smack like wicker winds I will bend you back into your strait place, from a Z to an I and an N to a V you will see my ring of sunshine make of Rhyme who booted me but let me keep her first gift: her love but it no longer fit like a glove no longer snug so I went lookin' for another lady to be my baby and then we met me and Rap but rap was a cheater and a beater so I said "See ya!" and no I'm with Rhythm. Oh wait Email... I just found out she wasn't female and I just fell off my feet and now I see those words were not for me because love you see is too painful to be. Do I choose my love of words and go back or do I just smack myself and bring my pen and pencil back? One of three Arrg's are not the part of me any more but now a forth steps to the plate, although a little late using her peg leg like a bat to home run my heart? Its a Beat that I just seemed to meet and she gave me back the tools to be me without taking away the bright light of my dark past and without whiplash.
    (I'm back baby! stringing words together is now better in any weather!)
     
  9. Zelda What will happen next?

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    You've been with many people in the time you've been gone,
    I hope one of them gave you the inspiration you lost.
    My ideas are still on the run,
    But when I find them, I'll show 'em who's boss.

    Until that time comes, here I will be,
    Hiding in this terrible sea
    Of cheesy rhymes, and no funny puns
    I wonder if I'll ever see the sun
    Again, or stay in this reverie.

    But congratulations, Star
    On finding your rhythm.
    Hope mine's not gone too far,
    And started to wither.

    And even still, here I am
    Making a rhyme, because I can.
    Without inspiration, I'm here still,
    Lacking imagination, and having little time to kill.
     
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    I doubt you can see anything with that light
    If I knock your ass out then you can say good night
    I did some nice word play there, but that's not right
    Sorry excuse for an oppenent in this lyrical fight
    How can I go all out if this got the wrong plight

    I just like to play with simple words so it won't be absurd in nature
    You only talk big because of your fame sir
    I'm more hodder than black dickies
    I'll rap like committing suicide in the booth taking you and the track with me
    Now try to find someone as sickly
    Its hard for someone who thinks they can beat me
    You can't beat what you're unable to see

    No matter what is presented it just won't happen
    Why not play your games and claim you stay clappin
    I start shootin because of those big words you got a problem wit

    Hold up you're a marksmen with lead? There's a mark on my head?
    You a mark all you do is argue with Ted.

    Listen your raps suck you talk so much fib sh**
    Its like Daffy Duck gibberish how ridiculous
    Hey you feel I get to cocky quit
    I'll pay you lil cable bill so you can watch me spit

    You would spit fire if I spark you up
    You spittin fire but aint burning this stuff

    You shouldn't be allowed to rap because of how badly you abused it
    Spit something with sustenance, more elegant substance for it to be good music
     
  11. Zelda What will happen next?

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    ...I wasn't rapping,
    Nor was I trying to.
    But soon I'll be napping,
    And keeping up this ruse
    Of being able to think of something to say.
    I apologize for my big words. Good day.
     
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    Huh n-no wait I wasn't talking about you or anyone at all I was just releasing stress
     
  13. Naz. No more of this. This is your last warning because this in my opinion could be seen as offensive and would rather like you to stop this. If you do not cooperate with that, I will ban you from this. Although it would be a travesty, this is a burn post because of all the insults. I will not have another flame war start.
     
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    I JUST TOLD YOU IT WASN'T A DISS TO ZELDA!!! I Was just shouting at air is all I was doing. I didn't hit reply to her previous comment to show I wasn't going at her geez. And don't ever say me start another flame war like I started it.

    Slow your roll your boy Oda was the one who and seeing how you, and Zelda liked anytime he dissed me really pissed me off at the time which is why I kept going back at him harder, and harder, until a higher power had to back him to make him feel better. If you actual read what he said then I said he was the one provoking it wanting it to happen, and I wasn't down for it at first. He then replied again saying he wanted it bought to him so that's exactly what I did.

    I swear to you on my life that is not a diss to Zelda at all period. I even put that, but you then just looked at what I posted and assumed the worst instantly not even looking at what I just said. Ok wow cool man thank you very much I see how you do things around here now.[DOUBLEPOST=1358402638][/DOUBLEPOST]This line right here too proves it
    "You only talk big because of your fame sir"
    Zelda is a girl so if you actual read what I put you'd know I'm telling the truth.
    Sir if I'm not mistaken means male, guy, dude
    I was talking to no one at all just to the air really
     
  15. Zelda What will happen next?

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    I do that, too, sometimes, but with paper,
    But to prevent misunderstandings, I suggest saying before to keep it clear.

    I wasn't mad, just confused.
    He said he wasn't flaming.
     
  16. I just saw. I didn't know My post was sniped. Sorry Naz.
     
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    Wow so this is how you operate Star? I am honestly at a lost for words. You paint this picture of me and yet still are unable to see that isn't me. Zelda you're right I'll do that next time, but I know Star doesn't fully read the poems others put up just see the bad not reading every word so I'll be extra careful ok ^=^


    I'll be happy to demonstrate to others in this community
    I've been underground for so long so once I feature in a song
    It won't do any good for the way I speak is wrong
    To conclude how strong my words just get people
    Too scared to reply for they see evil
    Call it insecure cause they think I'm like other brothas on tv you know
    Killing, and only good at rap
    I'm good at heart just hate for the way they treat my art
    If you got no fame in this game no one will even listen
    Now you see why my poems just have my raw soul?
    Screw everyone who cried for the just do's
    They didn't do anything, but follow the crowd
    I despise trying to compromise for lies told through hurt truthful eyes so why
    I see I'm the inferiority of a forum that's online and home to many not even willing
    To do something good to change the minds of others that stay spilling
    That trash they call skill
    Not a diss to anyone for real
    I can not deal with people that have ill will
    With me when I really enjoy it when everyone is chill