Roxas's days in the Organization (Part one)

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  1. Axelsgurl Moogle Assistant

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    Ohhhh that was really good!!! I want MORE!! Make some more! Your really doing good!
     
    Axelsgurl, May 10, 2007
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  2. Larxene25 Destiny Islands Resident

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    O my God, you should be an author, this is awesome...wow!... :)Awesome... for once I'm speechless and I normaly talk alot... just ask my teacher:)
     
    Larxene25, Oct 10, 2007
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  3. Xx Axel xX Traverse Town Homebody

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    wow, thanks alot! Read the rest of my story if you like it alot =)
     
    Xx Axel xX, Oct 11, 2007
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  4. Larxene25 Destiny Islands Resident

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    ...THAT WAS AWESOME!! wow I think that made me cry a little bit. poor Demyx. That was funny when Axel called Marly "Flower Power". Ive heard that "Flower Power" 100000 times but the way you wrote it made me burst out laughing. Cant wait to read the next chapter. Your amazing, keep it up.
     
    Larxene25, Oct 13, 2007
    Larxene25, Oct 13, 2007
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  5. Larxene25 Destiny Islands Resident

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    Another Spaztastic chapter. You are writing this sooooooo well!! You are awesome!


    Spaztastic is my word for BETTER THEN AWESOME, SPECTACULAR, AND TERRIFIC all put together. you are an awesome writer!:):)
     
    Larxene25, Oct 14, 2007
    Larxene25, Oct 14, 2007
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  6. Larxene25 Destiny Islands Resident

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    You did great on this chapter also. You make it sound like this actually happened. Keep it up!
     
    Larxene25, Oct 14, 2007
    Larxene25, Oct 14, 2007
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  7. C This silence is mine

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    Omg, omg old thread OLD THREAD!

    But anyway nice story...
     
    C, Oct 14, 2007
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  8. Amethyst Grave Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Omfg!!! Well Done!!! Exellent Stories!
     
    Amethyst Grave, Oct 14, 2007
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  9. C This silence is mine

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    Good chapter... Really good
     
    C, Oct 15, 2007
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  10. Larxene25 Destiny Islands Resident

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    Aww Man! Larxene lost! Oh well, it was still an awesome story, I liked the part when Demyx was choking, That was funny.
     
    Larxene25, Oct 15, 2007
    Larxene25, Oct 15, 2007
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  11. Amethyst Grave Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Really Good Story! Youre an Awesome Writer!
     
    Amethyst Grave, Oct 15, 2007
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  12. Larxene25 Destiny Islands Resident

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    Awesome Keep writing!:)
    It's terrific... Wait is Demyx alive? Or did Larxene kill him, O MY GOD, I really hope demyx is alive!
     
    Larxene25, Oct 16, 2007
    Larxene25, Oct 16, 2007
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