What is sadness How it exists the sadness That is what I think Sadness is what I feel My heart break The shards fly Up in the skies Sadness is what I feel The clouds rises The sky is dark The sun hides Sadness is what I feel And in the night I watch the stars They wall like tears Thought my cheeks Sadness is what I feel This is my first time, so I already know it´s crappy, I writed it when I was depressed.
It's beautiful...it conveys sadness very well. Although, I think you meant to say "felt" or "feel" instead of "fell"...