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  1. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Roses are red
    Like blood on the floor
    Is time to end
    Is only a matter of time

    Everything shall fade away
    Very soon I will dissapear
    I just a matter of time
    A matter and then die

    I don´t feel like dying now
    But my end will come soon
    Everything dies
    And now is my time

    Very soon I will end my suffer
    Everything is torn and cutted
    That is how is my heart
    Torn, destroyed and breaked

    I will not suffer anymore
    In the place I will be now
    No more sadness or depression
    Just happiness and joy

    Everything dissapears from my mind
    Everything dissapears as I die
    Everything fades away
    Everything flies away

    I could simple forget everything
    But everything keeps pressing me
    Like walls trapping me
    I won´t fight, I will die

    This is what I deserve
    Thought that I didn´t do nothing
    But I will accept it
    Is my punishment for nothing

    I just wanted to live
    But everything wanted me to die
    So I will fulfill their wish
    I will fulfill they task withouth think
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    ....................... I don´t know what to think now.
     
  2. GhettoXemnas literally dead inside

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  3. Shade Tail Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Great Poem

    Wow....... Just wow...
    Out of all the poem's you've wrote, This one has to be the best I've read...
    It's the only poem that's actually made me cry aswell.
    Kinda makes me think of war when I read this, cos lots of innocent people that have done nothing get killed...
    I'mma rate this poem 11/10​
     
  4. cloud's buddy Traverse Town Homebody

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    it is beautiful
     
  5. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Thanks ^^.
     
  6. Dark Shadow Merlin's Housekeeper

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    This One I Love Its So Awsome I Am Showing My Friends ^^ So Kool ^^
     
  7. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Thanks ^^.
     
  8. Sadden Blood Warrior Lost in the mind! Help help me god!!!!! Their afte

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    uhhhhhh nice but creepy
     
  9. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    I know =/, and thanks ^^.
     
  10. Nymph of Destiny Chaser

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    This is a good poem...but this was written in the past, right? Everything's okay now...?
     
  11. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    Chaser I sincerely hope you're feeling better now and that this was written a while ago. Are you okay? The poem is good, but I'd hate to know it was written becuase you are sad.
     
  12. Dark Shadow Merlin's Housekeeper

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    I Think It Was Awsome And Kool!!!!
     
  13. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Yes, I wrote it like two weeks ago.

    Yes, I am okay.

    Stop spamming please -_-.
     
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