This is dedicated to my crush JP. I'm so sick of waiting here, So sick to the pit, Of my stomach, Just longing for you, And I want you to catch me if I fall, To cure my pain, Stop it all with a smile, Guess I'm gonna wait a little while. [Chorus:] I don't hate you, Now that you've left me unwanted, Tossed aside and discarded, An empty shell, But the distance baby, Making me love you more than I ever could, Or she ever would. Do you see that look I use, When you look into my eyes, Maybe not, Because you just wanna bring me down, Baby don't hurt me no more, Just admit that you love me today. [Chorus:] I don't hate you, Now that you've left me unwanted, Tossed aside and discarded, An empty shell, But the distance baby, Making me love you more than I ever could, Or she ever would. Would she write you this song? Would she chase you for three years, That's how long this has been going on, And you used to like me back, But now you want me to just leave, With my heart snapped, Crushed, Broken, Stamped on, Laying bleeding in two. [Chorus:] I don't hate you, Now that you've left me unwanted, Tossed aside and discarded, An empty shell, But the distance baby, Making me love you more than I ever could, Or she ever would.
This is really nice, emotional. It's easy to get a sense of what's going on. I'd like to see a little more rhyme since it's a song, but maybe it's intentional?
The lack of rhyme is intentional because about 2 years ago we (me and my crush) had to write a song for class and he was all "That rhymes too much." so he's not a rhyming person XD
well its good, but in my personal opinion, i dont like it because i dont like, this kind of , "im suffering, but i still love you" songs but its well written , and it portrays the message perfectly. and keep writting, songs dont need to rhyme too much.
