song Lyrics

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  1. Anase Traverse Town Homebody

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    These are lyrics for a song for one of my other fics that I have yet to finish. I'll probably never will... I don't know, but I know I will use this for my Twilight Angel fic.

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    The Five Saints

    Red Dream

    My love
    The end will come quickly so don’t try to dust it off
    It’s too late to try again

    To make amends

    My love
    You’ll end up sinking in the flowing river of life
    If you explode in spite of thinking that you were just dreaming

    It may not be real

    Murder she wrote
    Letters that chill to the bone
    Your life’s flow is the ink
    Stationary is her soul

    Destroy she said
    My love please sleep
    Lay dormant in my essence
    Resurface when I need

    Hate she felt
    It’s not worth keeping
    The remorse in her heart
    For she keeps sinning

    Love she sees
    But never feels
    It’s lost forever to the Red Dreams she has
    Will it end soon?

    It has passed

    We will fight together

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    ^_^ Still working on the next two verses. critique?
     
  2. 2Foxxie4U ~The Forgotten Crusader...~

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    Wow... It's so deep...

    I feel like there's something else hidden in this song that I'm not quite getting, but... *reads it again*

    Wow... @-@

    I really like it. =3
     
  3. Anase Traverse Town Homebody

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    ^_^ thank you. I wrote it when I was on some... low, down-down, feeling, depressed and spiteful, inspirational mood. XD