Star Wars: Republic Commando - Fading Glory of the Republic

It is Day 700 after the Battle of Geonosis (ABG). You are a highly specialized soldier – a clone commando, trained by the Cuy’val Dar to be a killing machine. Though you don’t know it yet, the Republic is in its final days; the stage has been set, and you are just pawns. Despite your advanced training, your original brothers have fallen. You are the last survivor of your squad. Your commander has recalled you to the assault ship Dark Ocean to be assigned to a new squad.

The problem is, there are too few commandos left. There are only a few squads left that are original pod brothers – like the legendary Delta Squad. You are unsure if you’ll even be in a complete squad. You haven’t had training to be a squad leader, and as you enter the briefing room with your commander, you see other commandos. None of them have the experience of being leaders, and in this critical point of the war, the Republic cannot afford to waste time retraining or sending an inexperienced leader behind enemy lines.

You stand at attention with your fellow commandos. You don’t know their names, they don’t know yours. You can see their designation numbers, but know that they all have “names†of their own.
The commander tells you that there is a lack of squad leaders. As such, the Republic has taken a different approach to reconstructing squads: they have hired Mandalorians.

You know that Jango Fett was a Mandalorian, one of the fiercest, and what you were cloned from. But you have never seen others. The two before you now look just as imposing as any battle-hardened warrior. One has red armor, with a wolf design painted on, and the other has blue armor, with a lion design painted on.

They will be your leaders. On missions, you will answer only to them. Fail to do so…well, would you question a mercenary holding a blaster to your head?​

RULES
1. No godmodding. Do so, and you’ll be shot.
2. Limit of two characters.
3. There can only be one Mandalorian for every three commandos.
4. Stick with the paint scheme for each class on the armor (Red – sniper, yellow – demolitions, green –technical)
5. You must complete your squad’s assigned mission before receiving your next mission.
6. Unless you are given direct orders from the commander (which the whole squad will hear), leave no one behind.
7. Posts must be at least two or three lines.
8. Do your best to use correct grammar.
9. Put “Oya Mando’a†somewhere in your first post.

NOTES
1. All armor has a gauntlet vibroblade built in.
2. A Mandalorian character form will be put up if we get enough members
3. Mandalorians have a wider choice of weapons – but only two wrist attachments (not including vibroblade)
4. There are no female clones; if you’re a girl you’ll have to play a male, sorry.
5. Though there are specific classes, all commandos are capable of doing every job; those in the classes are just better at doing it.
6. Commandos can only use the DC-17m & attachments, DC-15s sidearm and, gauntlet vibroblade in combat.
7. If you want to be creative, use the Mando’a dictionary to add a bit to your character’s speaking – the commandos were taught by Mandalorians, after all.
http://www.karentraviss.com/html/mando.htm
You’ll find the dictionary link near the bottom of the page.


Commando Form

Username:
ID and Nickname (RC-xxxx):
Class (Sniper, Demolitions, Tech):
Personality:
Squad:
Demo post (About a paragraph, so I know that you know about this part of Star Wars):


Characters

Username: DPWolf
Name: Tracyn Vhetin
Class: Mandalorian
Appearance: http://i907.photobucket.com/albums/ac276/DPWolf/RepCom/bountyhuntermerc.jpg
Age: 20
Bio: Tracyn tends to shoot first and ask questions later, living up to the meaning of her name. Being fairly well-known among Mandalorians, she was asked by the Grand Army of the Republic to assist the elite commandos due to a lack of their own numbers, and accepted the job once the price was high enough. She fough along side fellow Mandalorian Batnor Kom’rk many times before being employed by the Republic.
Her armor has a howling wolf painted on the chest plates, as well as several other designs painted on her armor.
Personality: Likes to fight and drink, respects any warrior that proves their worth; essentially a typical Mandalorian
Weapon: Mandalorian assault rifle
Wrist attachments: ZX mini flame projector, Dur-24 wrist laser

Username: Fayt-Harkwind
Name: Batnor Kom’rk
Class: Mandalorian
Appearance: http://i907.photobucket.com/albums/ac276/DPWolf/RepCom/bountyhuntermerc2.jpg
Age: 22
Bio: Batnor is a semi-acknowledged Mandalorian. His quick thinking during any form of attack is what keeps him alive, that and his gun. During the previous battles he had encountered Tracyn Vhetin numerous times as an ally. His success from those battles earned him the marking on his armour.
Personality: Serious, tactical, light weight drinker
Weapon: Mandalorian assault rifle
Wrist attachments: Dur-24 wrist laser, MM9 mini concussion rocket

Username: The Graceful Assassin
ID and Nickname (RC-xxxx): 2637 "Burk'yc"
Class (Sniper, Demolitions, Tech): Demolitions
Personality: He is very fierce. He always stands at attention, and always follows his "rules." He'll often tease other squad members, except for the leader. He doesn't comment too much in a dangerous situation. He loves setting explosives by orders.
Squad: Alpha


Username: Asterisk
ID and Nickname (RC-xxxx): RC - 0982. Dex
Class (Sniper, Demolitions, Tech): Demolitions.
Personality: A rounded individual with a thing for explosions, RC - 0982 is a master of explosive entries and exits alike. Flashbangs, Concussion and Thermal detonators make up most of his explosive arsenal, as well as detonation packs when taking out something not even his other weapons can penetrate.

He's generally quiet unless the need to speak is apparent, and will easily protest if the squad leaders commands don't seem smart or 'ideal' to him.
Bio:

Spoiler

Dex was born to fight, as was any other clone, but none had the mentality to have something crash and burn like him. On a mission to Cato Neimoidia during the Republic's liberation, he and his squad were sent in hours prior to the battle to try and reach the general and the nobles of the planet to force a quick and easy surrender. Dooku found them expendable, knowing that the wealth Cato had was his regardless of them, and had secretly gave the order for all Battle droids to open fire.

Finding that the droids didn't stand down and had soon opened fire, Dex's squad leader quickly sent a distress signal to the Republic Fleet nearby, giving the warning that the mission had failed before being shot. He and the last two quickly ran for the exit, using their rifles to lay down some covering fire for each other as the Super Battle droids closed in. They all frequently turned around, trying to slow the juggernauts closing in, but another fell.

With it just being Dex and his last squad mate, a commando by the classification of 'Zero', the two began taking a more cautious means of escape. Their gunship was on the way, having been called earlier as soon as the nobles were captured, and if they could reach it, they could make it out.

Taking cover frequently, as well as tossing back Sonic grenades and the frequent detonators, Dex and Zero had reached the landing platform with the gunship hovering, hatches open, to make a quick escape.Once Dex got in, Zero followed, only having his back meet a volley of blaster fire from a group of Super Battle droids who had finally caught up.

Dex was prepared to jump off and get Zero back on, but Zero immediately protested, saying that Dex should leave him and continue serving the republic, knowing if both died, nothing would be accomplished. With the pilot running out of time and Zero turning around, DC-15s drawn, trying to focus the droids attention on him. As the Gunship pulled away, Dex watched with a heavy heart as Zero met his end to two individual shots of a wrist rocket.

The assault went as planned, and although the invasion was a major success, Dex couldn't help but wonder ..at what cost?

Due to this event, Dex learned not to build any strong bonds between anyone he worked with, planning on becoming a hardened individual who did his job and got out. The memories of that day still haunt him at times, and when asked of the past, he'd respond harshly.

Squad: Stigma


Alpha Squad
Leader: Tracyn
Sniper:
Demolitions: RC-2637 "Burk'yc"
Tech:

Stigma Squad
Leader: Batnor
Sniper:
Demolitions: RC-0982 "Dex"
Tech:

 

Username: Shizzy
ID and Nickname: RC-1138, Snyde
Class: Sniper
Personality: Snyde has always been a bit naive, andis almost always in a good mood. He can be a little self-centered at times, however. Snyde isn't one for hand-to-hand combat or close range fighting, he prefers to stay out of the crossfire, thus why he became a sniper.
Bio: When Snyde was still a leader of his old squad, he was greatly respected by the other members. His always-cheery attitude gave his squad a large advantage over the droids, who didn't have emotions. However, during one day while Snyde was on a large cliff picking off droids as his troops fought below, one of the droids shot off a wrist-rocket at one of his men. The Clone trooper dodged the projectile, causing it to slam into a weak point in the cliff wall. Rocks began raining down on Snyde's men and the droids. The cliff fell right beneath Snyde, sending him falling at least 80 stories down. He would have died he hadn't activated the jetpack strapped to his back. All of Snyde's men had been crushed by the falling cliff, leaving Snyde to fight off countless droids with only a blater pistol, as his sniper rifle had fallen out of his hands as the cliff fell. Snyde is eager, yet nervous to join his new squad, and be led by a strong Mandalorian.
Squad: Alpha
Demo post: As Snyde stepped into the conference room, he noticed only a few other commandos in the room, along with two mandolorians, one painted in red, the other blue. He stood among what commandos were there, waiting for the others to arrive. There was a tense feeling in the room, like what would took place there would change their lives forever. Once the commandos arrived, the Commander in the room tells evryone there is a major lack of commandos left, and we are being formed into new squads, led by the two Mandolorians in the room. Snyde's heart races, and realizes that infact, what happend in this room would change his life forever.

I hope you get the 1138 reference :lolface:

 

Username: The Graceful Assassin
ID and Nickname (RC-xxxx): 2637 "Burk'yc"
Class (Sniper, Demolitions, Tech): Demolitions
Personality: He is very fierce. He always stands at attention, and always follows his "rules." He'll often tease other squad members, except for the leader. He doesn't comment too much in a dangerous situation. He loves setting explosives by orders.
Squad: Alpha
Demo post (About a paragraph, so I know that you know about this part of Star Wars): Burk looked around the battlefield. It was being torn apart. "Adviser, I'm surrounded!" He yelled as more droids charged towards him. He took out a DC-17mm Rifle, and shot the droids. He looked beside. A clone fell beside him, incapacitated. "Dammit!" He yelled. He took out a bacta revival, and revived him. The clone stood up, and kept firing. "We can't hold them off for long!" The clone yelled. "I"m almost outta ammo too!" Burk sighed. He set an explosive onto the cover he was in. "Keep me covered!" Burk yelled. He began to prime to the demo charge. The droids were only a few feet away. The ground rumbled, and an explosion hit the ground. A super battle droid had come in and fired on them. The clone fell backwards, incapacitated. "No..!" The clone said faintly. Burk finished priming the charge. It was ready. "Adviser, we gotta get the hell of here!" All of a sudden, a LAAT Gunship appeared in front of them. Burk grabbed the clone, and climbed aboard. He looked back. The droids were getting crushed by the Gunship's turrets. The hatches closed, and the Gunship flew away. A medic came in and got to work on the clone.

 

( You didn't include bio in the forms so I did one anyway )

Username: Asterisk
ID and Nickname (RC-xxxx): RC - 0982. Dex
Class (Sniper, Demolitions, Tech): Demolitions.
Personality: A rounded individual with a thing for explosions, RC - 0982 is a master of explosive entries and exits alike. Flashbangs, Concussion and Thermal detonators make up most of his explosive arsenal, as well as detonation packs when taking out something not even his other weapons can penetrate.

He's generally quiet unless the need to speak is apparent, and will easily protest if the squad leaders commands don't seem smart or 'ideal' to him.
Bio: Dex was born to fight, as was any other clone, but none had the mentality to have something crash and burn like him. On a mission to Cato Neimoidia during the Republic's liberation, he and his squad were sent in hours prior to the battle to try and reach the general and the nobles of the planet to force a quick and easy surrender. Dooku found them expendable, knowing that the wealth Cato had was his regardless of them, and had secretly gave the order for all Battle droids to open fire.

Finding that the droids didn't stand down and had soon opened fire, Dex's squad leader quickly sent a distress signal to the Republic Fleet nearby, giving the warning that the mission had failed before being shot. He and the last two quickly ran for the exit, using their rifles to lay down some covering fire for each other as the Super Battle droids closed in. They all frequently turned around, trying to slow the juggernauts closing in, but another fell.

With it just being Dex and his last squad mate, a commando by the classification of 'Zero', the two began taking a more cautious means of escape. Their gunship was on the way, having been called earlier as soon as the nobles were captured, and if they could reach it, they could make it out.

Taking cover frequently, as well as tossing back Sonic grenades and the frequent detonators, Dex and Zero had reached the landing platform with the gunship hovering, hatches open, to make a quick escape.Once Dex got in, Zero followed, only having his back meet a volley of blaster fire from a group of Super Battle droids who had finally caught up.

Dex was prepared to jump off and get Zero back on, but Zero immediately protested, saying that Dex should leave him and continue serving the republic, knowing if both died, nothing would be accomplished. With the pilot running out of time and Zero turning around, DC-15s drawn, trying to focus the droids attention on him. As the Gunship pulled away, Dex watched with a heavy heart as Zero met his end to two individual shots of a wrist rocket.

The assault went as planned, and although the invasion was a major success, Dex couldn't help but wonder ..at what cost?

Due to this event, Dex learned not to build any strong bonds between anyone he worked with, planning on becoming a hardened individual who did his job and got out. The memories of that day still haunt him at times, and when asked of the past, he'd respond harshly.

Squad: Stigma

Demo post (About a paragraph, so I know that you know about this part of Star Wars): The sounds of metal against metal was coming at a slow, steady pace, indicating Super Battle Droids marching towards their position. The exchange between the nobles of Cato Neimoidia and the commando's had gone from bad, to worse. Range(Sniper) and Corin(Leader) had died as the retreat was made, bringing on a distinct rage between the two survivors.They were dead, not incapacitated, he knew from the dying screams as the blasters connected with their armor, easily penetrating the shields they had. When so many droids opened fire at once, no shield would last.

"What's the status on that door, Zero?" a tense Dex asked, his rifle held limply in his left hand as he reached around his belt, pulling an EMP Grenade from it and preparing it for use. He could practically smell the factory-made death machines from here."Almost got it ..blast! Looks like the droids are trying to keep up with me, it'll take a minute for my commands to get through." replied Zero, turning around from the console and raising his rifle up high, standing beside Dex as the clankers came closer. "We'll have to hold out .."

"We can, and we will .." Dex saw shadows coming from the corner ahead, knowing they were almost upon the two survivors.Dying here didn't suit him, and even if he did, he'd go out with a bang. Adrenaline coming up to the fullest, his blood pumping quickly and his heart rate increasing, Dex waited until he saw the first glimpse of metal.

"..Here they come!"

 

Sorry Shizzy, but...you need to either read over my entire post or replay the RC game. There's potential, but it doesn't quite cut it. Feel free to resubmit this later.

Not bad, but there's room for improvement.
You're in.

Very nice, you're in.

 

OOC: So what are the requirements for starting?

 

OOC: Hopefully we can get a few more people to join, maybe a full squad. If not, I can make a commando or just start with lower-end missions until we've got more people.

 

This might take a while then ..V.V small missions sound good, so the squad can get used to each other.

 

I'm using the clones that you fight while in the Jedi library in Revenge of the Sith if that's ok.​

 

An Assassin isn't a Commando type ..defeats the purpose of needing a team when your just an Assassin.


But its up to the OP I guess..

 

I suggest you read up on what the commandos are.
For now, I'm rejecting this because of several big errors. Feel free to fix them and resubmit.

In any case, let's get this RP started; I'll post the first missions when you guys are ready.

 

Ready ....

 

Ready, sir!

 

AROOOOOOOOOOOOOO (translation: Ready, but oops forgot to say)

 

This gonna get off the ground or what?

 

Probably, just give it a bit longer.

 

This appears to be a dud, so I'm gonna leave the site now, nice knowing you guys.