Discussion in 'Archives' started by Heaven's Angel, Mar 5, 2008.

  1. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

    Sep 30, 2007
    Making AMVs. :P
    There are so many things
    Going on at once
    It's becoming too much
    I don't think I can take it

    I have my friends
    My own little "click"
    But it's falling apart
    We're splitting in two

    As our fights grow worse
    We grow more hate
    More anger towards each other
    Will our friendship end?

    And then there's this site
    It's causing me stress
    So many problems on here
    That I must help solve

    My friends have school problems
    I must help them with that
    And nothing here feels right
    It's not the same as it once was

    Not to mention my problems
    Like my boyfriend
    I've never had one before
    This is my first

    I don't know what to do
    What should I say to him?
    How should I act around him?
    Things feel so different...

    I'm worried about my appearance
    I want to impress him
    But I don't even know
    How I really feel about him

    My schoolwork is too much
    So much homework I have
    It must be completed
    But i can't find the time

    I have cheerleading, too
    And I have community service
    But when will I get a chance
    To sit back and relax?

    Life's coming too fast
    I'm a teenager now
    I just can't take it anymore
    It's stressing me out!

    I've had help with some problems
    But they just don't seem to help
    I need to take a deep breath
    And slow down and relax

    Maybe I'll take a break
    A week will do
    So I'll leave for that long
    And be back soon!

    Hopefully when I come back
    Things will be much easier
    Soon the stress will start again
    But I'll be ready~

    *sigh* Okay... i really needed this to let a few of my feelings out... I've been so stressed lately with all of this stuff going on and I just don't know what to do anymore... I'm going on a trip for a week (as said in the poem ^^) To hopefully relieve some of this stress... Anyways, I hope my feelings turned into a great poem... i wrote this straight from the heart so I expect it to be one of my best... And to say the truth, once I finished, I felt like a huge weight had been lifted off of my shoulders... ^^

    Anyways, please comment! I tried my hardest on this poem and I really want to see if anybody likes it :o
  2. Shuhbooty moon child

    Mar 12, 2007
    Woh, I didn't know you were like this? Put this poem has alot of meaning to it. You can tell. Even if you didn't way anything, about it[in green] You need more time then a week. You will be missed but I think a month will so you fine. :)
  3. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

    Sep 30, 2007
    Making AMVs. :P
    Yeah... I've sort of been keeping my feelings to myself... That's why I needed to write this... >>
    And actually, a week will be plenty of time. I just need a small smount of time to get my mind off of everything and to have a little fun... :) Although, I'm gonna miss you guys alot... It's only a week, though, so I'll live... :3

    and, yeah... I put almost every once of feeling I had at that exact moment into this poem... And when I reread it, I was pleased to see that it turned out to be one of my best poems :)
  4. Sexy Sheva Banned

    Jul 22, 2007
    don't turn around

    Dearie, you did great, I love the grammar and spelling <3

    good job

    Also, i swear i thought i saw 'Cupcake' in the poem like 3 times, xP