The Broken

My Idea of a KH related story is of a group known as the Broken. The Broken are like Nobodies but are incomplete, the thing that sets them apart is that they are different. For example: The leader known as Morphex has a body and a spirit so is acctually a Nobodie but he knows where his heart is, it's in his wife a creature called My Angel. His adviser is called Docyx and has a spirit and a heart but no body and without his body he can't touch anything physical and floats on a blue hover pad like thing. Them and the rest of their group are searching for Phantom Hearts a world much like Kingdom Hearts with one main difference it doesn't give people power or grant them what they want, it can fix anything broken.

What do you think?
Edit: if you like the idea I've made an album with picture of the charecters hears a link: http://www.kh-vids.net/album.php?albumid=2246

 

this is neat. what is the current condition of docyx's body? does he know? keep going

 

well I make presentations of the story by step-by-step animation the spelling is a bit screwy but if you give me an email adresse I could send them to you. Otherwise I would spoil the story lol

 

I presume you shall be posting your work in here though?

 

unfortunetly I'm not a very good writter (as you could probably tell lol) so I profer to do my work on Microsoft powerpoint in step-by-step animations. I can't seem to load them on this site so anyone who's interested will have to get a copy of the presentations from my googlemail acount.

 

I suppose I'll put this in Video Projects if it's an animated slideshow. Unless you provide us with something to look at though, I'll have to move this to spam. :\ Get back to me, okay?

 

ummm I guess in that case it should be moved to Spam, by the by do you know of any way to upload a microsoft powerpoint presentation onto this site I tryed on the user portal but is only for acctual movie clips....

 

I believe it is only videos that can be uploaded to the site, sorry.

I kinda feel bad about moving this to spam. :\

 

Hmm. It actually sounds like a good idea, and I like what you've done with the animation sprites.
However, I think the names need to be worked on, because I'm confused about who is who. It's like there are tons of Morphex and Docyx and Menders etc, so maybe change the names a bit, and maybe make 1 sprite sheet with all the names and such?

Liking it so far, keep it up.

 

Looks cute, may have to check it out.

 

thanks for the complements and mr pumkin the meany sprites with the same name are the human versions of the same charecters I kept the names the same to help limit confusion, didn't work though did it? lol