The link of Reality and Fantasy

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  1. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Reality the one who bears all the pain
    Fantasy the one who can escape with ease
    But the shear one life one body
    One heart that beats as two
    Two souls that unite as one

    Reality bears the pain more with fantasy
    Fantasy seems more real with reality
    Together they are one
    No matter how part they are
     
    AlexleHoshi, Mar 19, 2007
    AlexleHoshi, Mar 19, 2007
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  2. Ratchet Bah weep graaagnah wheep ni ni bong!

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    That is a fantastic poem and very true. Yet again you've written a wonderful poem sis.
     
    Ratchet, Mar 19, 2007
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  3. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Thanks sis gald you like it as always
     
    AlexleHoshi, Mar 19, 2007
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  4. Axel Chaser

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    Of your best.
    Loads of spelling mistakes though. It confuses some lines like the third.
    Good though.
     
    Axel, Mar 19, 2007
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  5. kitty_mckechnie I want to hug you like big fuzzy Siberian bear!

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    Very good poem, i really liked it. Made my think for a moment. :D
     
    kitty_mckechnie, Mar 19, 2007
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  6. Shuhbooty moon child

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    it's very nice and very ture
     
    Shuhbooty, Mar 19, 2007
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