The untold story of Axel

This what I wrote one day at school when in was bored-
Lexius closed his eye and started to day dream. He wondered what would happen if he feel asleep.

"Your so lazy!" A voice familair to him called out.

His eyes open showing a red-brown. He saw his best friend Darick standing infront of him. Roads walked along the ground revealing the emptyness of Traverse Town. He felt the steep side of the building he was leaning against. Darick had a smartalic expresion on his face. His rocker style hair laid against his neck, and a few bang fell on his forehead.

"Do you ever do anything?" Darick stated, and put his hand on his hips.

"Yes, I do, I saved your sorry a** from that idiot Xanga the other day. He smerked and Darick got nervous.

"Whatever, Lexi, I just..." He hesitated,"...triped"

"Right..." Lexius said sarcasticly.

There was a long pause and Lexius scratched his red and brown hair,"Well I have get to Rain, She`s probly worrying."

Darick tilted his head,"You two still together?"

He sighed,"No duh, we left about a month or two ago." Lexius stood up and walked past Darick.
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Should I cont.?
EDIT: I have decided that im going to create this story into a manga-though if you still like plain old reading i will put it up on FanFiction.net

 

Sorry but that needs to undergo some serious editing and grammar check. Along with a 'what is going on?' check. XD, sorry to burst your bubble. I'm thinking of starting a writing tips area. Maybe you can get some if I do.

 

Thank you i know I forgot to check spelling*goes to edit*and about grammer-im not the best

EDITED

 

Is that just a random story? It was interesting, to say the least.

 

are you going to write more???

 

....NO NECRO BUMPING!


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